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  1. Slowswift

    I doubt I'm the only one who does the thing where you're listening to a song and imagining it as the soundtrack to your book, no?

    I kind of want to write a scene with either version of this song:

    The original makes me think of some eldritch psychological horror chase scene, while this remix gives me some kind of high-stakes infiltration vibes.

  2. Slowswift

    This is peak outlining, y'all (I used to be good at this)

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    1. Edema Rue

      Edema Rue

      So that’s what I’ve been doing wrong

  3. Slowswift

    I love the addition of the extra trumpets in this version.

     

  4. Slowswift
    I guess I did all right, then. Thank you muchly! I've got some ideas for where this will go, but I'm not 100% sure of all the details yet.
  5. Slowswift
    Here it is! I'm mostly looking for thoughts on flow and pacing, in addition to general feedback. Thanks to everyone who gives this a shot! I appreciate it greatly. (Also, there have been some minor edits in the first half, so if even you've read the previous post I recommend reading the whole thing.) An Untitled Chapter from an Untitled Work no. 1:
  6. Slowswift

    This banger turns ten years old next year. How time flies.

     

  7. Slowswift

    Happy birthday!

    1. InfiniteInsanity

      InfiniteInsanity

      Thank you!

  8. Slowswift
    That's wonderful! I'm in a bit of a holding pattern myself right now, looking forward to that kind of relief. I'm truly happy for you.
  9. Slowswift
    *hugs*
  10. Slowswift
    *hugs*
  11. Slowswift
    Colorful! (What's with the pineapples?) Many Shardbuddies--clutters the sig a bit, but that's the Shard's formatting's fault, not yours. 18/20.
  12. Slowswift
    Rest of the chapter should be done and ready to share soon, then I can finally move on and figure out what the rest of the dang book is going to be.
  13. Slowswift
    In case anyone was curious, I counted how many temples you can see from the FrontRunner: Orem Lindon Mt. Timpanogos Saratoga Springs Draper Jordan River Oquirrh Mountain Taylorsville Layton
  14. Slowswift

    Happy birthday!

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  16. Slowswift

    Happy birthday!

    1. Robin Sedai

      Robin Sedai

      Thank you :D

  17. Slowswift
    That was beautifully evocative. Is there context, or is this a stand-alone piece?
  18. Slowswift

    Happy birthday! :D

  19. Slowswift
    That's awful. I'm so sorry. *hugs*
  20. Slowswift
    The thought never crossed my mind, but it makes sense. I get twitchy if I have redundant inks, though, which is something I should probably get over.
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  22. Slowswift
    Kygo's new album. Enjoying it so far!
  23. Slowswift

    Happy birthday!

    1. kajsa ㅇㅅㅇ

      kajsa ㅇㅅㅇ

      thanks swift!!

  24. Slowswift

    Happy birthday!

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    1. The Bookwyrm

      The Bookwyrm

      What about "mayhaps"?

    2. Slowswift

      Slowswift

      I haven't heard that one used all that much (personally; YMMV), so it falls on the left half of the sign.

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