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  1. I don't think they should be related, just to keep the variety high. We could have one in a more fantasy setting and one in a more modern setting, for example.
  2. Hm....
  3. Okay...Let's start throwing out ideas. A lot of people want a dramatic character interaction. What would that look like?
  4. I'm just not as good at it, I suppose The general style and preference of the vast majority of writers on the Shard right now is very far from mine...
  5. I was joking about the heist. Mostly. I don't think there needs to be an important emotional moment for the character for the sake of the experiment; we could just as easily compare writing styles with something simple, like a person opening a store for a business day. Something casual. (If slightly boring.) I mean, if we end up wanting to do that, then we'll do it, but I don't think it's strictly neccessary. I guess we could also come up with multiple scenes that hit different tones. One more emotional, character based, and another more setting-situation based. Each person would still have to write both of them for the sake of data points, but then at least we'd be able to have our cake and eat it too. I dunno. EDIT: Also @Kajsa @Medium you guys like writing come see this when you wake up. ... I am realizing after I ping these two that the likelyhood of me writing an emotional character scene is steadily rising.
  6. Understood. ...I should not be awake right now either for the record. But ah well. ...But does it need to...? It could just as easily be an action scene, or a steal scene, or a friendly conversation, or a description of a new area, or...a heist...or something...it doesn't need to be a drama... ...Does it?
  7. An idea brewed up in the comment thread of an SU. The general premise is this; we decide on a short scene, one that would only come out to a few pages. We outline it; premise, details, setting, characters, interactions, beats, conclusion, so on and so forth, so that each of us has a good idea of what this scene looks like. Then, with that outline, we each go and write the scene as we see it in our mind, using our own writing styles and preferences. Then we compare. Just a little something I was curious about, and am interested to see what would pop up. First order of business is deciding on what kind of scene we want this to be, so start throwing out ideas. @Halcyon The Only (dangit, I typed in "The Halcyon Girl" and nothing came up (why do you do this to me)) @Ookla the Irreplaceable @Through The Living Glass
  8. Santa is real, but he's more of a spren, not a guy.

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    2. Through The Living Glass

      Through The Living Glass

      I thought Santa was Endowment.

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      *cackle*

       

       

       

       

       

    3. Immortal Platypus

      Immortal Platypus

      It's fine, I still bonded him

    4. Crowstavern

      Crowstavern

      Honestly Santa seems like he would be a spren, he seems unchanging but capable of change

  9. There was a part of the torn document lying on the ground, but not much else of note. The portion of the document read: -appearance of the agents from the Department of Containment and Protection raises the possibility of temporal anomalies caused by the Rabbit Hole's influence. The unidentified agents were only present for a few minutes, but they seemed to be responding to an event that, from our perspective, has not occurred yet; possibly a containment breach. This information is concerning, and should be taken into account during further research and monitoring. Confirmation of the existence of similar anomalies in our present time is now being searched for. At the bottom of the page there was a handwritten note. Director Roost isn't doing a damn thing about this. We need to figure out what this means and what to do about it, even if it means directly disobeying him. Command in Seattle still hasn't responded. I'm getting worried.
  10. ...Freefall Seven-Layer Burrito World?

    Excuse me?!

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    2. Mags

      Mags

      Quote

      Did you read State of the Sanderson?

      🙃 that's that announcement thing he does right

    3. The Bookwyrm
    4. Mags

      Mags

      ooooh mkay

  11. Hey

    You 

    Yes, you 

    I went and rediscovered your old arts

    They are much good

    You should do more some time

    If you want 

    Because 

    You know 

    They are much good 

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    2. Mags

      Mags

      aaaaaaaw thanks

      I'm glad it made you happy ❤️

    3. Mags

      Mags

      I haven't drawn like any Sanderson fan art lately because I've been busy with AP and all my personal drawing stuff has been Silmarillion fan art because that's my current obsession lol

    4. The Bookwyrm
  12. The circular room was not the same as it had been. Devices seemed damaged, or were entirely missing. Papers were torn or scattered. A faint mist hung in the room. The only thing that could be seen through the glass that looked into the Rabbit Hole's clearing was fog. Nothing but uniform grey. Not a single detail could be made out; not the hole itself, not the devices surrounding it.
  13. The room on the other side of the lobby seemed to serve a similar purpose to the one on the other side of the lobby, in that it didn't seem to serve much of a purpose besides being a transition point. This one didn't have an elevator, but there was nothing of real note.
  14. Am I jumping the gun on losing my Ookla name? Yes.

    ...But I like my normal Username, so...

    1. Through The Living Glass

      Through The Living Glass

      Mm

      I like your username, too.

      It's a good one :D

  15. The door opened, revealing a room not very different from the one she'd exited. However, this one lacked a reception desk, and had an elevator.
  16. Do you ever just go through and re-read all your old SUs?

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    ...I miss the old days.

     

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    2. Through The Living Glass

      Through The Living Glass

      I've never done that.

      *cough*

      'scuse me rq

    3. Immortal Platypus

      Immortal Platypus

      I actually like most of my SUs. Some of them less than others, but I don't hate any of them

    4. kajsa ㅇㅅㅇ

      kajsa ㅇㅅㅇ

      yeahhhhhhhh

      magi and haly i feel u both

      i used to have some

      uh

      relly really depressing stuff on there

  17. I love how my inactivity on that thread has made Bookwyrm showing up a "special appearance."
  18. So, most timeloop stories involve a person in a timeloop where no one else knows they're in a timeloop. They're surprised by their apparent ability to see the future, and the looper has to re-convince those around them every time if they need other people to get stuff done.

    But...what if everyone around them knew they were in a timeloop?

    Imagine this; an army is fighting a war, and there's an incredibly difficult objective that they need to achive in a number of days, or a single day, or maybe just hours. So they pick a single soldier, someone who's proven themselves for the position. They initiate a timeloop; this soldier now lives the next 24 hours again, and again, and again, until the goal is accomplished.

    Then, they basically give that soldier complete authority. They say to do something, you do it. It doesn't matter how crazy. You just do it. They effectively circumvent the entire command structure.

    This gives the soldier complete autonomy to test out every possible scenario, re-living the same day over and over again, testing path after path, option after option, plan after plan, developing and abandoning and re-developing and perfecting threads of fate for as long as it takes. They don't have to waste time trying to convince people they're in a loop, because everyone knows to defer to their knowledge, because either A: they know what's going to happen and it'll turn out all right, or B: they need you to do it to test out a possibility that might lead to victory. And in that case, it doesn't matter if you die, because it's all going to get re-set anyway.

    From the soldier's perspective, they might spend weeks, months, years living the same day, the same fights, finding the perfect sequence of actions and decisions that lead to victory. But everyone else can only see, only remember, the last cycle. So, from the perspective of everyone else, you click the button that marks the point of re-looping, and suddenly the soldier becomes a super-hero. A demigod on the battlefield. They know every move the enemy is going to make, and know exactly how to lead the army to their objective. They act superhuman, both in intelligence and in physical combat. That lasts for a day, until victory is achieved, then they go back to being normal.

    ...As normal as someone can be after living the same day hundreds of times.

    The war continues, another unachievable obstacle emerges.

    Pick another soldier and do it again.

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    2. professionalacoustic

      professionalacoustic

      @Ookla the Enigma brought me back just to show me this and I have returned to tell you that this could very well be—*ahem*—peak fiction.

    3. The Bookwyrm

      The Bookwyrm

      Thanks! I'm glad my random story ideas sound cool.

      ...I just wish I had the time/skill/effort to actually make something of them.

    4. professionalacoustic
  19. There was no immediatley visable signage, as if the whole floor was for the same purpose. Either that or the signs had gotten destroyed. The only lettering was of the door directly ahead, which said "TO ANOMALY SOURCE CONTAINMENT". There was no apparent sound or movement on the other side.
  20. The building, though it had been in perfect condition only minutes before, was now in a state of disrepair; machinery was deactivated, the floor was cracked, and papers were scattered across the floor. The door to the circular room surrounding the Rabbit Hole's clearing stood ominously across from them. There was a door each on the two other sides, leading to other parts of the building. The next few rooms were also covered in moss, vines, and roots, though none of them seemed immediatley hostile. One of the rooms seemed like a lab of some kind, though it was hard to tell with all the overgrowth. There was no sign of anyone else, at least not immediatley. Only the office cubicles and rows upon rows of filing cabinets.
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