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  1. Ooh, I love Stardew. I really should get back into it. I played it 8 hours a day for a week back in 2020 (thanks, quarantine!) and then off and on since then. My first game I married Leah (no, I don't have a type, what are you talking about) but the second time through I went with Haley, who is surprisingly wonderful if you can be patient with her. (I understand this is a tall order.)
  2. What.

    Well, thanks, everyone. This is actually the first day I've won.

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  3. I doubt I'm the only one who does the thing where you're listening to a song and imagining it as the soundtrack to your book, no?

    I kind of want to write a scene with either version of this song:

    The original makes me think of some eldritch psychological horror chase scene, while this remix gives me some kind of high-stakes infiltration vibes.

  4. This is peak outlining, y'all (I used to be good at this)

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    1. Edema Rue

      Edema Rue

      So that’s what I’ve been doing wrong

  5. I love the addition of the extra trumpets in this version.

     

  6. I guess I did all right, then. Thank you muchly! I've got some ideas for where this will go, but I'm not 100% sure of all the details yet.
  7. Here it is! I'm mostly looking for thoughts on flow and pacing, in addition to general feedback. Thanks to everyone who gives this a shot! I appreciate it greatly. (Also, there have been some minor edits in the first half, so if even you've read the previous post I recommend reading the whole thing.) An Untitled Chapter from an Untitled Work no. 1:
  8. This banger turns ten years old next year. How time flies.

     

  9. That's wonderful! I'm in a bit of a holding pattern myself right now, looking forward to that kind of relief. I'm truly happy for you.
  10. Colorful! (What's with the pineapples?) Many Shardbuddies--clutters the sig a bit, but that's the Shard's formatting's fault, not yours. 18/20.
  11. Rest of the chapter should be done and ready to share soon, then I can finally move on and figure out what the rest of the dang book is going to be.
  12. In case anyone was curious, I counted how many temples you can see from the FrontRunner: Orem Lindon Mt. Timpanogos Saratoga Springs Draper Jordan River Oquirrh Mountain Taylorsville Layton
  13. That was beautifully evocative. Is there context, or is this a stand-alone piece?
  14. That's awful. I'm so sorry. *hugs*
  15. The thought never crossed my mind, but it makes sense. I get twitchy if I have redundant inks, though, which is something I should probably get over.
  16. Kygo's new album. Enjoying it so far!
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