kenod Posted December 20, 2018 Posted December 20, 2018 Perhaps PM Archer with it, so he can decide if it's good. That way he'll get the info he needs, and you can keep it a secret from us.
Kidpen he/him Posted December 20, 2018 Posted December 20, 2018 16 minutes ago, kenod said: Perhaps PM Archer with it, so he can decide if it's good. That way he'll get the info he needs, and you can keep it a secret from us. Agreed.
Lunar Blessing she/her Posted December 20, 2018 Posted December 20, 2018 @Archer I have written the power description, tell me what you think. Spoiler Epic Powers: The first effect is the user has an increased awareness to sound waves, this isn’t better hearing, they can sense sound waves. The basic ability is being able to basically turn the volume up and down, the more it’s altered the more concentration is needed. Making something louder is much harder than quieter. Threw training users can teach themselves to funnel sounds and even, through extensive training, catch sounds and redirect them. There is a range around the user that they can manipulate, though this can be increased. This power is also heavily influenced by emotion, strong emotions usually cause big burst of power that the user would not be able to replicate.
Archer he/him Posted December 20, 2018 Author Posted December 20, 2018 (edited) My forte isn't Epics, but that looks well thought out to me, and reasonably powered. Well done. I still like the power plausibility idea, but it didn't get established. Still, from my perspective, certain backstories are OP. Eg. Called up my main man Ruin and he hooked me up with a spike because he owed me a favour. But so long as you have a reasonable backstory for them, it's acceptable in E3. Edited December 20, 2018 by Archer
Lunar Blessing she/her Posted December 20, 2018 Posted December 20, 2018 Alright! I’ll pm you the backstory if you want me too
Archer he/him Posted December 20, 2018 Author Posted December 20, 2018 Just now, Blessing of Potency said: Alright! I’ll pm you the backstory if you want me too Sure. Then it can go in the final bio.
Lunar Blessing she/her Posted December 20, 2018 Posted December 20, 2018 17 minutes ago, Archer said: Sure. Then it can go in the final bio. You got it!
Silva Posted December 21, 2018 Posted December 21, 2018 (edited) If this could get shoved into Eve's "Life story" section.... Spoiler The Doves (age 0-5): Spoiler Eve’s first mother was a charity organizer, her father an accountant. She had two older brothers. One was 12, the other 8. As children they’d have contests with an intent of scaring one another. Eve practiced walking quietly and eventually even at a young age started naturally being utterly smile. When she was four, she was out on a playdate with another kid when her eldest brother had his friend over. She was an Epic with fire powers and lost control. The Dove house burnt down and all were killed, but Eve. One of Eve’s mother’s friends was a worldhopper and a worker at the orphanage Eve was placed in. She took Eve to Scadrial where she dropped her with her friends the Yins. The Yins (age 5-10): Spoiler The Yins adopted Eve as one of their own. She always knew she wasn’t really one of them - they were dark-skinned and she extremely pale. But they always treated her kindly. They had one child of their own, a female atium misting two years older than her who became her closest friend and basically a sister. The parents were both gold mistings. They were very aware of her past and when she developed a want to learn how to fight, they supported her the whole way. It was when she was out in a field training in swordplay that an infamous Hemalurgist came by and killed them in order to harvest their abilities. When Eve entered her house to find their corpses, she immediately sent a spanreed to her mother’s old friend like she’d told her to in case something like that ever happened. It turned out, Eve learnt talking to her son who was now in possession of it, that she’d been killed by a Coinshot accidentally overshooting who ran out of coins and landed on her. Eve was devastated and at age 10 visited Alleycity for the first time, catching a ride from a kindly worldhopper who she never saw again. There she lived as a beggar for a year before the childcare authorities found her. They dropped her with the Tacets on Roshar. The Tacets (age 11-15): Spoiler The Tacets were a more elderly couple who had never been able to have children. They took to Eve immediately and loved everything about her, even her pessimistic attitude. The Tacets were Alethi, but didn’t force her to take on any of their customs - it was her choice whether or not to cover her safehand. She didn’t typically, being left-handed, but did on occasion. Eve didn’t really communicate with many people her age while on Roshar, she was extremely introverted and spent most of her time practising her aim and stealth. She kept that up for five years. When she was sixteen, things went wrong again. It turned out that the Tacets’ cousins actually owed heavy debts to a group of Shardbearers and had been avoiding taxes. To that clan, the punishment for that was death to all relatives related by blood or marriage. They left Eve alive, before that point she had never taken upon herself the Tacets’ name, deciding she didn’t qualify under the requirement, but made it clear that if she ever told anyone what had happened they would hunt her down. Knowing there was no way their neighbors wouldn’t ask, Eve fled in panic back to Alleycity. Edited December 22, 2018 by Silva Removing the bold caused by copying and pasting. 1
Nohadon he/him Posted December 21, 2018 Posted December 21, 2018 Heyo, It would be great if you could add that Devaan died fighting Hellbent.
Kidpen he/him Posted December 21, 2018 Posted December 21, 2018 Hey, it would be great if you could add that Voidus gave Mahz all of his powers, and that it will be passed down every time I make a new character. Spoiler
Gancho Libre he/him Posted December 21, 2018 Posted December 21, 2018 9 hours ago, Nohadon said: Heyo, It would be great if you could add that Devaan died fighting Hellbent. WHAT??????? 8 hours ago, Kidpen said: Hey, it would be great if you could add that Voidus gave Mahz all of his powers, and that it will be passed down every time I make a new character. 1 WHAT???????????? 1
Kidpen he/him Posted December 21, 2018 Posted December 21, 2018 (edited) 23 minutes ago, Gancho Libre said: WHAT???????????? mmmmmmmmmmhmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm, That happened. Spoiler Just to be clear, it didn't. By the way Gancho, while I've got you here, have you already done genetics? We took a pretest the other day, and apparently that one chapter in HPMoR prepared me equally as well as a girl who has the same class who took it in 6th grade. So if you haven't already done it, reading HPMoR is an equally good way to study as reading textbooks. Edited December 21, 2018 by Kidpen
Gancho Libre he/him Posted December 21, 2018 Posted December 21, 2018 (edited) 10 minutes ago, Kidpen said: By the way Gancho, while I've got you here, have you already done genetics? We took a pretest the other day, and apparently that one chapter in HPMoR prepared me equally as well as a girl who has the same class who took it in 6th grade. So if you haven't already done it, reading HPMoR is an equally good way to study as reading textbooks. 2 I have not done genetics, but that makes a spankin' lot of sense. And it helps with more than just that. Reading that book literally changed the way I think. And the way I write. Spoiler There was a pause. Edited December 21, 2018 by Gancho Libre
Kidpen he/him Posted December 21, 2018 Posted December 21, 2018 36 minutes ago, kenod said: HPMoR? Harry Potter and the Methods of Rationality. An amazing Harry Potter fanfic that I do not have time to explain right now, but I will do so later if Gancho doesn't do it first. 59 minutes ago, Gancho Libre said: I have not done genetics, but that makes a spankin' lot of sense. And it helps with more than just that. Reading that book literally changed the way I think. And the way I write. Reveal hidden contents There was a pause. Same. Totally changed how I do things.
Gancho Libre he/him Posted December 21, 2018 Posted December 21, 2018 3 hours ago, Kidpen said: Harry Potter and the Methods of Rationality. An amazing Harry Potter fanfic that I do not have time to explain right now, but I will do so later if Gancho doesn't do it first. I'd be happy too. It's basically an alternate version of the Harry Potter series, except Harry Potter is a child prodigy in the ways of Muggle science and rationality. And when he gets put in a Magical society...
Kidpen he/him Posted December 21, 2018 Posted December 21, 2018 13 minutes ago, Gancho Libre said: And when he gets put in a Magical society... He becomes god. Keep in mind that this may or may not be a spoiler, you do not know. 1
Gancho Libre he/him Posted December 21, 2018 Posted December 21, 2018 You'll have to read it and find out.
Elandera she/her Posted December 22, 2018 Posted December 22, 2018 Alright, here's my attempt at joining the Alleyverse. I haven't done an organized RP like this in years, so I'm a little rusty. This is my idea for a character. I'd love any input. Spoiler Name: Lanrielis Investiture: Awakening (sixth heightening) Special skills: Hand-to-hand combat, has an affinity for awakening her opponent's clothing. Weakness: Goes through a lot of Breath, since she likes to occasionally awaken her opponent's clothing. Never became proficient with weaponry. Appearance: Female; 5'7" with a muscular build; broad shoulders; shoulder-length red hair Family: Youngest of three children born to a wealthy Hallandren merchant. Occupation: Mercenary Personality: She rarely takes anything seriously, which is part of why she didn't last long in the city guard. That, and her inability to learn how to use a sword. She enjoys awakening opponent's clothing because she finds their reactions amusing when their shirts start trying to move themselves.
Lunar Blessing she/her Posted December 22, 2018 Posted December 22, 2018 I think the sixth heightening might be a bit much... but don’t quote me on that.
Elandera she/her Posted December 22, 2018 Posted December 22, 2018 32 minutes ago, Blessing of Potency said: I think the sixth heightening might be a bit much... but don’t quote me on that. I chose it since that's when it becomes instinctive, but I can definitely drop it down. Also, it's unlikely she'll stay there, considering her weakness.
Lunar Blessing she/her Posted December 22, 2018 Posted December 22, 2018 Yeah, I’m just saying you might be asked to change it
+Ark1002 Posted December 22, 2018 Posted December 22, 2018 2 hours ago, Elandera said: Alright, here's my attempt at joining the Alleyverse. I haven't done an organized RP like this in years, so I'm a little rusty. This is my idea for a character. I'd love any input. Reveal hidden contents Name: Lanrielis Investiture: Awakening (sixth heightening) Special skills: Hand-to-hand combat, has an affinity for awakening her opponent's clothing. Weakness: Goes through a lot of Breath, since she likes to occasionally awaken her opponent's clothing. Never became proficient with weaponry. Appearance: Female; 5'7" with a muscular build; broad shoulders; shoulder-length red hair Family: Youngest of three children born to a wealthy Hallandren merchant. Occupation: Mercenary Personality: She rarely takes anything seriously, which is part of why she didn't last long in the city guard. That, and her inability to learn how to use a sword. She enjoys awakening opponent's clothing because she finds their reactions amusing when their shirts start trying to move themselves. I like it, I like it a lot! but yeah, Potency was correct, you might have to change it. Especially if they don't have a good weakness.
Elandera she/her Posted December 22, 2018 Posted December 22, 2018 Sounds good! Like I said, it's been years since forum RPing, so I'm practically brand new at this kind of thing. I'm not sure what's standard. Also I'm fine with getting ideas for new/different weaknesses. 2
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