That was really good. I've always been partial to nice fight scenes, heroes with a strange sense of honor, and fantastic beasts. It would definitely be really cool to see more of that. Um...let's see I always like constructive criticism, but there isn't much to say for this. You have a really good writing style, the sentences flow really well. The jumps between each scene were a little bit confusing at first, and it would be nice for a little more explanation in a longer story, but for something so short it's really good.
Good job!