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  1. Aspiring Writer
    The woman chuckled. "You first. You're the one who wants the job." She took another sip from her drink.
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    The woman smiled. "I'll introduce you to the rest of the crew later. Consider yourself hired. Oh, and if you even think about betraying me..." She let the threat hang.
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    The woman whispered, "My main product is crystals. Collect them from all over and sell them."
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    The woman motioned him to come closer.
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    The woman motioned him to come closer.
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    The woman smiled as she took her cup. "Well, if your in between jobs, why don't you join me? i could always use another hand." She took a big gulp of her drink.
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    Go to Creator's Corner. I have written the Sources of the Universe stuff. I have released a prologue and three chapters. Just released one today in fact. Tell me what you think. if you like what you see, I'll be willing to help with this ambitious undertaking.
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    uh, hey, if you want I can help with grammar mistakes and stuff. Maybe little advice here and there. Never tried helping anyone with their work (Anyone who actually was interested in writing the damnation thing) and it'd be an interesting and perhaps useful experience.
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    Yeah, you might have to break the news that as of yet you can't make the quiz and give us just a regular hemalurgy quiz. Bind points are on of those things I don't understand in the cosmere, and that's because all we really know is that it exists. You know nothing more about it really.
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    Okay, this is important... Do you like Shallan?
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    As someone who is, let's just say I'm familiar with Indians enough to be interested. Kaladin and Shallan I had no problem pronouncing. I was unaware that the J is Jasnah was supposed to make a Y sound, and now that you said it, I'm like, "You know, that makes more sense but screw it, I like Jasnah better" I also pronounce Szeth with the Sa. I also pronounce Ati as you do. Don't remember how I pronounced Aona, but yours seems like something I would you. Don't know why we share so much pronunciation of names yet disagree with Kaladin and Shallan, but it is intriguing.
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    Can you give any more details so I can give you anything more concrete?
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    Congrats on 3000. That's impressive for someone who hasn't been on the Shard for even a year. And this is coming from the guy who did over two hundred in his first three weeks. Hats of to you! 

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    2. Condensation

      Condensation

      Yes, I started it and we all love new people! We've gained plenty of new people recently. I'll '@' you there and add you to the main PM.

    3. Aspiring Writer

      Aspiring Writer

      Thanks. I am expecting you to at some point show me the ropes when your not brain dead.

    4. Condensation

      Condensation

      *you're

      I think I'm less brain dead, you've woken me up! :)

  14. Aspiring Writer

    Sources of the Universe chapter Three is out. The next release will be either Wednesday or Thursday. Hope you enjoy and please feel free to leave any comments or suggestions, I read them all.

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    2. Aspiring Writer

      Aspiring Writer

      yeah, legit look up the word 'Sources and you will find it.'

    3. Experience

      Experience

      Ack! I forgot to read chapter two!

    4. Aspiring Writer

      Aspiring Writer

      Yeah, I'm aware. Go finish that one first. I can wait.

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    Interesting. I wonder what trait they would get from the armor and if it is worth doing in combat? And to answer your question, i think we can assume it would keep it, as it is the same blade and plate, is it not?
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    Then possibly. We don't know if living plate will allow it's user to use surges on themselves yet, and even then, that is different then consuming investure. The armor resists it, but I'm sure a feruchemist can use his own armor as a metalmind. i just wonder if the armor will just start consuming that as it does with stormlight, assuming it needs it.
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    How advanced are they? Information lasting depends on both government propaganda and technology of the time. Is it modern, medieval, or futuristic? And does this event have a direct impact that they can see or they a bit out of its range, so to speak? Are they capable of space travel? There are a lot of factors that can go into this. (You should also probably think about how having creatures living a thousand years will have. How long does it take to get to adulthood or pregnancy? Matpat's video on baby Yoda, while crap, does mention some interesting things about creatures with long life spans and disadvantages that has.)
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    If Kredrik Shaw, then Kelsier, Home court advantage, terrain is great for his dirty tactics, platy of places where Wax can't shoot him, and Wax can't waste any bullets.
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    Feruchemist used Atium pretty well, which is another god metal. Granted, Atium breaks a lot of rules with God metals, but the metallic arts due seem to also make a few exceptions with god metals in general. I think Plate is invested even without stormlight, and the dead plate is the one that needs investiture to keep working. And how is Plate their plate, exactly? Plate isn't bonded to the user unless you mean Plate from a spern bond, which complicates things, especially since we still haven't seen one.
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    I'm not saying they can't use it, I think that the shardplate will feed upon whatever they store in the plate like it does with stormlight. We know that being the wearer doesn't matter because of kaladin.
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    Yeah, it kills like one, but bullets do have an edge in the way they can overwhelm someone with steel, something we know coins can't do because Mistborn consistently push coins away from them in fights.
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    Coins aren't as fast and can be pushed away. A bullet is very fast for him to react to and harder to push away enough.
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    Are you sure? We don't even know if radiants can lash themselves in plate, and Kaladin had his stormlight sucked away when having a helmet on in WoR. I am really suspicious of how it would interact with becoming metalmind.
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    What's the environment? i feel that's important in a fight like this, where both opponents have access to steel.
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    Aon Ala - Beauty, Handsomness
    You seem to make them very fast. How much does it take to make these compared to your other stuff?
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