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  1. Aspiring Writer
    Must... Post... Meme!
  2. Aspiring Writer
    Well hello there. Would you be so kind as to allow me into your club? I plan on posting some of my work on the creator's choice thread, but I could use some more readers who give me some constructive criticism. Besides, look at my name, sir! Can you honestly say this would not be a perfect place for me? (Assuming this guild even functions while I'm typing this.)
  3. Aspiring Writer
    Thought you were a making a Kahoot? is that still something going on?
  4. Aspiring Writer
    It's theory that with duralumin, you'd be able to transport from anywhere, unlike with jasnah couldn't without the perpendicular
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    Didn't say that one. That one is yours. not sure how it work, but I' sure it would be interesting. I never look into the preview chapters. Why torture myself with seeds? But being able to go into the cognitive to the physical and vise versa without needing a perpendicular is incredibly useful for a world hopper, especially on a world without one.
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    Ah, you see, my good man, Sp was my brilliant way of misspelling the word so, a two-letter word you think Grammarly would correct, but NOPE. As for not knowing the limitations of surge binding people... that does not bode well.
  7. Aspiring Writer
    Hey, no stealing mine! XD Get your own combination. That, and having the surge of transportation with duralumin is really useful for a world hopper. You can go anywhere!
  8. Aspiring Writer
    Sp she can soul cast people's personality? Does that mean she can soul cast Sadaes so he wasn't a dick? or Amaram? What?
  9. Aspiring Writer
    Are all nine POV characters away from each other, doing their own thing, or are some of them grouped together? because if they are all in et's say, groups of three, that could be considered three viewpoints, as they are all doing the same thing and not introducing new things to keep track off.
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    Not exactly. I'd say F-gold becomes numb to pain while burning and tapping, while A and F tin would become more sensitive while burning and tapping and need a buffer. They'd feel even more pain, but would become numb while not burning or tapping, so slightly inverted.
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    Yeah, I can see that actually. But would tapping It you Atium shadows or would it just give you raw Fortune? Because if they give you Atium shadows specifically, that might be evidence of different types, or at least applications, of Fortune.
  12. Aspiring Writer
    Perhaps, though it also may just use the power before you can store it in your metalminds.
  13. Aspiring Writer
    Yeah, but if their anything like F-Gold savants, they become dependant on using the metal at the cost of probably having really intense senses, and probably feel numb without them. It would feel very weird for them, but I guess tin is pretty easy to come by. Also, P.S. just made a Thread called Sources of the Universe in the community section. Little chapter fo a book I'm writing. Thought you might be interested.
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    Tin Savants just seem addicted to Tin and have even acuter senses.
  15. Aspiring Writer
    No, the way Atium gives fortune probably can't be stored, and compounding Atium is used for age. What I'm trying to get at is that Atium is strange among godmetals with it not acting like an invested object, so maybe that's because it's made of pure fortune rather than investiture, giving it different properties and explaining the future sight thing even more.
  16. Aspiring Writer
    Pretty sure a normal sword can cut through a back of Hershey's, so it would still cut through and kill you.
  17. Aspiring Writer
    Yeah, and those fantasy stories are seen as pretty generic as well. The reason some are so popular is their worldbuilding and characters, not the magic. You can go with your idea if you want, but it is fairly generic. Also, dude, no rust it's your decision. I'm just giving you my perspective on it.
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    Not sure about the taste idea, as perfect pitch and vision have nothing to do with taste, but I don't think you can focus a receptor. It's all or none of your vision, not a certain aspect. I can see how storing your perfect vision will allow you to do things like notice changes in blood, but I don't think you can do it by receptor. Feruchemy has never been that specific. Also, thx for ating me in Koloss!
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    This is... really generic and overdone. The second I saw control of the elements, I legit groaned. My advice? Back away from this idea. It won't gain any traction. Sorry, but the idea of controlling the elements has been done fr too much, and without a unique spin, it isn't worth people's time, including yours. Granted, you might be able to make it a bit interesting with the time periods, as elemental control is normally used in ancient eras, which would be the unique spin you need, but you will need very in-depth knowledge on the evolution of technologies and how your magic systems would impact what areas, otherwise you'll pull a legend of Korra crap where technology evolves without bothering to think how being able to control elements may hamper or excavate it.
  20. Aspiring Writer
    Okay, first off, use Shard less and try to use pronouns. Feels repetitive. Also, try and avoid pronouns as well. Makes the narrative read more smoothly. Few grammar mistakes here and there, but otherwise, you make it clear where everyone is and what's happening. I will try and give specifics when I'm freer.
  21. Aspiring Writer
    You're welcome, and also, twinborn count as two powers, same for being radiant, so they wouldn't form a resonance easily.
  22. Aspiring Writer
    I feel like resonances are more passive, so I don't see how useful they can be to make them worth that effort. Also, welcome to your fifteen days after joining the shard.
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    Pretty sure resonances take time to form, so it won't be an instantaneous switch whenever you go from one power to the next. You will need to spend a lot of time using two powers for little reward.
  24. Aspiring Writer
    With all due honesty, Ambition feels a bit more in Kelsier's character than the survive mantra he used to make himself a god. Also, I'd like to see those other worldhoppers stop him. The guy will show them hell.
  25. Aspiring Writer
    Resonances form from the combination of two powers, getting rid of them might form a resonance, but it will disappear again when you use the other powers again.
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