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  1. Okay, I need to rectify my own standard then, because my next two SotU chapters have a little bit. Need to rework that. (It's not much, but it's a tad more than this. Then again, i don't think my definition of not much is the same as yours. I'm so confused now.) Also, i don't technically see you as intimidating, not any more than any see any new person that I want to be friends with. I'm always nervous for a week and then start to relax and get comfortable. Also the graced thing seemed fitting okay, your name is drama, and everyone somewhat does treat you like a queen. And Fadran is Fadran, he's cool and I'm still gauging whether or not he might be seeing me as a nuisance Nice to know. I'm was surprised hearing you had to put down the book when you read those scenes. I was fine, I even laughed at the Wayne and Melaan one. Can't imagine how you reacted to the Reshi. Also, you can find my Sources of the Universe in Creator's Corner, you can't miss it. The latest thread has all the chapters there. Excited to see what you think. yeah, will do. The latest thread has all the chapters anyway, so I'll just keep updating that. Makes my job easier anyway.
  2. ... okay, how old are you two, because I might be very unaware how much more tolerant I am to that kind of stuff. Like, if that's bad... Yes, graced. You see, I already started to get to know Fadran, so less graced and more, "Yes, it's Fadran!" I still have no idea if you have even read a single of my Sources of the Universe, and I barely have a chance to actually talk to you, so yes, for now, it is graced. I will certainly be having lots of fights and reveals. While I do tend to have a little of this stuff, they far and few between and don't make up much of what I write.
  3. I agree to some extent, but it was only referenced. I feel that the references are fine. It's a thing people do, you don't have to ignore it, but that doesn't mean you need to describe it. Also... I'm pretty sure BS has quite a few of those, now that I think about it. Didn't Vin fight naked?
  4. Holy crap, I have been graced by Drama Queen herself! I was wondering I you would ever read anything of mine. Yes, I'll admit, it was out of nowhere, but i thought it would be a pretty interesting way to introduce these two world hoppers.
  5. XD You have to admit, it's not a bad direction.
  6. Yes! I have made my first fanfic! Welcome to the first Chapter of Daniel and Marisa. Tell me what you think of it and follow me if you want to know any updates on its progress (I will be probably releasing these far slower than my Sources of the Universe chapters.) Link to main thread:
  7. Welcome back! The third Chapter has been released, hope you enjoy it! Also, leave your theories down if you want, I'm curious what people think is going to happen. (Follow me if you want chapter release updates and if you like this, Check out my Sources of the Universe series. That one is much longer.) Ch1 Ch2 Ch3
  8. YES! YES YES YES! I FINISHED THE damnation THING SOMEHOW. Okay, so me wanted to start a little Cosmere fanfic series, and I just finished my first installment... in one day... somehow. Please go read it! Current name is the Adventures of Daniel and Marisa ( i will probably change it, feel free to suggest your own) tell me what you think, cuz I probably will be doing this on the side with my Sources of the Universe. It will be in Creator's Corner and Sanderson fanworks.

    1. MusicalReader

      MusicalReader

      Awesome! I'll have to check it out!

  9. Not everyone has shard plate, and the majority of their armies would be vulnerable to gunfire.
  10. K, thx, just clarifying because it's an important detail in need.
  11. Okay, I currently don't have access to the book to double check, but it's hinted that Lightsong and Blushweaver had lots of people in bed during their times as gods right? just want this clarified .
  12. True. It's a bit boring, but I guess I have no choice. Time to create a fanfic. I should hopefully have it done by Thursday at the latest (Assuming the world doesn't decide to go rust on that statement. Also, I passed 300 posts without realizing. Huh.)
  13. That answer legit makes my skin crawl. (Worldbuilding for me is like Dialogue for you, it's basically my baby)
  14. @Channelknight Fadran Me probably gonna start a little Cosmere fanfic series of my own (Because I'm stupid and want to pile something more onto my already overblown workload.) and there appears to be a detail that is not confirmed. In this case, it's the currency used on Nathline (Warbreaker). Unless you know what that currency is (Which would make everything so much easier.) how would one get around that? Also assume that I must have the detail.
  15. Okay, important. So if you get the fifth weighting, you cannot age whatsoever. What happens when you give up some of your breath and lose the fifth heightening? Does the age catch up or do you continue aging where they left off? Also, just because every time I hear functionally immortal I become suspicious, when they say immortal, they mean immortal right? They cannot age period? Just wanna confirm that, because me planning on something, and this is vital to said plan. (Also, does anyone know what the hell is the currency used in Nathline?) (Also, yes, i made the same thread in Cosmere Q&A. I wanted to increase my chances of getting answered, also, I'm impatient. Also, i swear nobody looks at Q&A)
  16. he doesn't have to carry it, but I expect him to bring it out if he believes he is in danger. i can see them not wanting to have it hanging around for everyone to see, but you can conceal it pretty easily.
  17. I suggest going into the Coppermind and just reading EVERYTHING. That's what I did before joining. Practically read everything in there for three weeks.
  18. Okay, important. So if you get the fifth weighting, you cannot age whatsoever. What happens when you give up some of your breath and lose the fifth heightening? Does the age catch up or do you continue aging where they left off? Also, just because every time I hear functionally immortal I become suspicious, when they say immortal, they mean immortal right? They cannot age period? Just wanna confirm that, because me planning on something, and this is vital to said plan. (Also, does anyone know what the hell is the currency used in Nathline?)
  19. Hello anyone who looks at this, which may be nobody seeing nobody saw my last status update it appears.:angry: So like I said last time, I am releasing two chapters today, please go check them out. The next release is this Friday, which will have another double release for reasons I'll get into later. Hope you are all enjoying these chapters, and please feel free to rip them apart letter by letter.

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    2. Aspiring Writer

      Aspiring Writer

      Also, I swear the shard is getting annoyed by my posting. I have hit the time limit for posting over three times today. XD

    3. Experience

      Experience

      I don't have time right now, but I will! ...later. :P 

    4. MusicalReader

      MusicalReader

      Sorry, I haven't been on for a few days. I'll read it now :) 

  20. Use could rather than would. add 'at least' before according to Marene and remove anyway. Grammar mistakes. "Kelsen could argue, but, well, more often than not his sister was right." Isn't smooth. This one though... This one was just as much Marene’s fault as it was Kelsen’s. She was the one who proposed the idea, after all. I'll read the rest when I feel I've had me than five hours of sleep.
  21. Radiant I understand, but squire? That's like saying you wish not everyone is a misting in Mistborn.
  22. Someone is salty. And I can relate.
  23. Aspiring Writer

    Aon Dor

    doesn't blender make 3d stuff?
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