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  1. Nathrangking
    Hoid is truly talented. Storyteller, Jester, Cabin boy, coachman. What can't he do?
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    @Ink it's good to have you back among us!
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    Yay. I need to see what these grand secrets are. I can't wait on them.
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    The man is pure evil!!
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    I just hope that he and everyone else is alright. He seemed somewhat subdued which is unusual for him. I don't want to borrow trouble and we won't know anything until tomorrow, but I'll admit that it has me worried. Hopefully, its nothing. However, its hard to shake the ominous vibes.
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    I can use all of the help that I can get. I just wrote a critical scene in the story that I'm working on. I'll update it over time if you'd like me to. I'd love to hear your thoughts awesome sharders.

     

    Diary 2.pdf

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    I just wrote a critical scene in the story that I'm working on. I'll update over time. I'd love to hear your thoughts. Diary 2.pdf
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    *Hugs.*
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    Is indifferent. The person below me has seen the original karate kid.
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    It's glorious!! Wax came armed for battle!!
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    I think that it is well done so far. I'm curious as to what you think is missing from page 3.
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    *Hugs.*
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    Know Tell me oh singers from where your song comes. Heaven and earth reverberate with most haunting music. The oceans rush forth as though to embrace those that they love. Cities are swiftly carried away into a realm of sounds so pure mortal lips could never have formed them. Each note clings to flesh and stone transforming all into a single form bound by chains beyond description. Had a single soul the power to see these bonds then they would behold a portal into the infinite. There are melodies bringing to the stars tears and sighing to the uppermost expanses. Beings of flesh gather in wonder and fall into the embrace of something so subtle only the depths of their hearts knew that they were trapped not by the will of a malicious deity. What this mysterious melody was is impossible for any to grasp. Immortality paints all with understanding. Souls chant and close their eyes. None wish to open their eyes and behold the end that approaches upon the winds. Swirling beauty holds them tight, comforts them before they awake, tear stained and longing for the faint chords that fade away.
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       #24                                                                Know

    Tell me oh singers from where your song comes. Heaven and earth reverberate with most haunting music. The oceans rush forth as though to embrace those that they love. Cities are swiftly carried away into a realm of sounds so pure mortal lips could never have formed them. Each note clings to flesh and stone transforming all into a single form bound by chains beyond description. Had a single soul the power to see these bonds then they would behold a portal into the infinite. There are melodies bringing to the stars tears and sighing to the uppermost expanses. Beings of flesh gather in wonder and fall into the embrace of something so subtle only the depths of their hearts knew that they were trapped not by the will of a malicious deity. What this mysterious melody was is impossible for any to grasp. Immortality paints all with understanding. Souls chant and close their eyes. None wish to open their eyes and behold the end that approaches upon the winds. Swirling beauty holds them tight, comforts them before they awake, tear stained and longing for the faint chords that fade away. 

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    Need some honest feedback. I'm considering reading this aloud in public and I need to know if its any good. Of Bewitching Night so enchanted by gods and mortals alike filled with raucous laughter into the very soul of the untainted night. Midnight casts its mighty spell in vain against this faint shadow of Bacchanalia. Though the thyrsus wielder is nowhere to be seen the line splitting night and day is utterly shattered. A moon pure as quicksilver stands affronted by the smoke that rises and ascends to confront this hour chosen by foolish consent. Cool breezes float in a war like formation and seem to attack the inferno that disturbs the night yet the lions of flame are not cowed. I watched in shadow beneath the very pine where others in times long gone have gazed in bewilderment. The lord of winds spins in a dance more trance than conscious movement. Spiced spilled wine burns its way into the earth’s heart and makes Terra drunk and tremble. Jove almighty from his perch descended into a slumber not of this world. Revelry that weaves a song most mysterious wages a winning war against all the world. My eyes behold the shadows play in the depths of my mind as I too succumb to the strangest power of this strangest moment in time.
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    #23 Need some honest feedback. I'm considering reading this aloud in public and I need to know if its any good.

                                                                    Of Bewitching

    Night so enchanted by gods and mortals alike filled with raucous laughter into the very soul of the untainted night. Midnight casts its mighty spell in vain against this faint shadow of Bacchanalia. Though the thyrsus wielder is nowhere to be seen the line splitting night and day is utterly shattered. A moon pure as quicksilver stands affronted by the smoke that rises and ascends to confront this hour chosen by foolish consent. Cool breezes float in a war like formation and seem to attack the inferno that disturbs the night yet the lions of flame are not cowed. I watched in shadow beneath the very pine where others in times long gone have gazed in bewilderment. The lord of winds spins in a dance more trance than conscious movement. Spiced spilled wine burns its way into the earth’s heart and makes Terra drunk and tremble. Jove almighty from his perch descended into a slumber not of this world. Revelry that weaves a song most mysterious wages a winning war against all the world. My eyes behold the shadows play in the depths of my mind as I too succumb to the strangest power of this strangest moment in time.

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    2. Channelknight Fadran

      Channelknight Fadran

      Uhh... is there supposed to be any form of rhythm or whatever? I lied a bit. I'm taking a poetry class currently and now I know a thing or two.

    3. Nathrangking

      Nathrangking

      Now you are thinking like an academic. There is the slightest ebb and flow. Though no abrupt rhythm. What does the creator in you say? How does it feel?

      (Poetry class huh. I took one in college. They are interesting to say the least. Are you enjoying it?)

    4. Channelknight Fadran

      Channelknight Fadran

      (I've been taking it for approximately a week, so I don't know yet)

      I would've taken out some of the transition phrases and gone for regular commas instead. Those were the only things that seemed to break up the regular flow of epicness.

  17. Nathrangking
    Elf Elf Elf. I may not know you well, but I can confidently say that you are the amazing one. You sell yourself short. Don't ! I wish that at 15 I was half as eloquent or wise as you are now! Keep being awesome!
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    First, how in the almighty's tenth name do I deserve any of you?!?! I rant and I rant and your understanding seems without limit. Blessings without limit should spill upon you commensurate with your patience. Second, I don't know either of you very well, but @Marukka and @Robin Hatter your words mean more than you know. When I get into my own head things get rougher than they actually are. I sometimes need to get pulled out of it. Thirdly, @Experience and @DramaQueen you two I do know somewhat well. I'm blushing you two! Careful you two I may just take you on your offers! Thanks Experience!! I mean it!! Queen you never fail to leave me speechless!! Whether it's your knowledge of musicals or this masterpiece you punch far higher than any might think capable! I don't know how to follow your post. Just thank you!
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    I'm back. I need the support that you all provide. Once again life is throwing out the haymakers and flattening me in the process. The last month has been intense. The woman that I was dating for months broke up with me out of nowhere. It completely blindsided me. I had thought things were going well and then out of the blue I get knocked down with this. Multiple promising job opportunities fell through and I'm just so frustrated. I don't know how to react anymore. I feel so much the impostor. Everything that I think that I am I am clearly not. Everything that I touch seems doomed to fail. I can't get a steady job. I apparently can't hold on to a meaningful relationship. The frustration is mounting and all I can think is maybe I should just stop caring. I can't be bothered or hurt if I don't invest emotionally. I know that that is a poor attitude, but 'm just so overwhelmed by the frustration and hurt that I jump to that conclusion. I know I'm a burden with my constant problems. I thank the shard for hearing me when others might not necessarily!
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    I actually opened the leatherbound and peeked inside it is gorgeous!! The person below me has gazed upon the beauty that is the WoK leatherbounds!!
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    Am I though? The person below me is the most awesome sharder of all!!
  23. Nathrangking
    Firstly, *Hugs.*. Now that that that is out of the way. I cannot even begin to imagine what it's like going through what you are going through. That being said I think that you truly are strong as others have said!! You seek light in darkness and don't succumb to it. Yours is a strength that is to be admired. You certainly are not selfish for using the shard to vent. Lord knows in my years here I have vented so much that sometimes I'm surprised that the shard has not collectively told me to shove it. We are here for each other now and until the internet runs cold. There will be warmth again. Things will get better. If you ever need to vent or talk my DM's are open! Fields of gold glistening in splendid light. A throne rises up and blesses both earth and sky. They sing in unison an endless song that bears power for all time. In the heights sun and moon gaze in envy at power they may never hold. While below warmth does descend as a cloak ready for the ruler who would sit upon the serenaded chair.
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    @DramaQueen where to begin? Your musical knowledge is extraordinary! You RP with skill that make others quite envious! Overall you are epic!! How do I compliment you when there are few enough words to do the job correctly?
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    A clap of thunder bares back man’s primal fear of powers greater than he, and a flash of lightning awakens beasts more terrifying than death itself. For the ships at sea that sees these sights, will pray with all their might to Poseidon’s throne of ancient power. They will call to him from the farthest reaches of their souls. They do hope that Charybdis’s rage has not been released into the path they do travel. Suddenly a figure stands upon the relentless waves with a staff of molten gold, his countenance is a sight that is awesome to behold. He points his scepter at the stormy seas and calms the roaring waves; the sun does break the iron curtain and when man looks out upon the waves no being does stand there. There is only a lucid phantom looking up from the depths.
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