FlowerGirl

Forkle specifically says that he only based Sophie's DNA off the alicorns and didn't actually use alicorn DNA. Personally I think it's Elwin

Welcome, and have a great weekend!

Overall I really enjoyed this, the concept of werewolves searching to buy a home intrigues me. I also enjoy the little details about how the world works, like werewolves needing carpet. In answer to are the two POVs working. Yes, I think they work, however werewolf couple are referred to as they quite a bit. This gets confusing with S being referred to they as well. I actually really liked the ending, the werewolf couple was searching for a house and they found it. The story was wrapped nicely and in my opinion the ending wasn't abrupt. I really think the fantasy theme with the werewolves works really well. The small details about how they live their lives really brings the story to life. The way the various houses were shown started to get a bit repetitive. You'd list off the traits of the house and the werewolf couple would evaluate the home. They moved a bit quickly from house to house without really doing much at the houses. I really liked the bit where the doorknob fell off the cupboard, it brought a pinch of action to the house tour. Hope this helps, and have a great day.

Welcome, do you have a favorite character? Mine is Wayne.

Ok so I'm new at this, but I'll do my best. I really enjoyed this, you managed to get a lot of detail and information about the character in a small space, and I really enjoyed that. I agree that it feels more like an opening than a complete story. The ending was a bit abrupt and I'm not completely sure how you'd change it to make it feel more complete, but it might help to add a little bit more to the ending to help with how abruptly the story ended. On line seven it says "Her father was pushing her more and more marry." I'm pretty sure this is a typo and you meant to say "Her father was pushing her more and more to marry." On page two, line thirteen it says "A visit that would go more quicker if he was out." Saying "A visit that would go more quickly if he was out." or "A visit that would go quicker if he was out." Would make more sense. On page four, line eleven it says "What if the people are protesting tomorrow to." Too would be the correct word to use here. On page five, about halfway through line seven it says "Then she's never have to report she ever did." She's should be changed to She'd. On page six, line twelve it says "A shoe loosed her grip causing her to careen." I don't completely understand what you're trying to say here. Maybe you could specify how she careens a little more. On page eight, lines one to two it says "She walked swift and quiet, straining against the sound of her footsteps and beating heart to her if anyone else was coming up." I think you meant to say "Beating heart to hear if anyone else was coming up." On line page eight line four it says "She saw a dozen guars on the steps." I'm not sure if this is a new term you made up for guards or if this is just misspelled. Page nine, line twelve it says "The room run around and around for a minute." I'm not sure it run was supposed to be spun or ran, but it should probably be changed to one of those two.

Ok, I just read a few of the books, and when does Sandor sleep? He's always awake, and I couldn't find a single mention of him sleeping. Is there an explanation I missed or does Sandor just never sleep?

Welcome to the shard! Justice is hard to define, it depends on so much, and often humans won't have enough understanding to be completely just. I wish you the best with your struggles, I don't have D.I.D. myself, but I do have a couple other mental illnesses, I know it's not the same, but if you want a friend I'll do my best. (I'm pretty socially inept.) Or if you don't want a friend that's fine too.

What kinds of farbrials do you think urithiru would have as defense/offense? Bombs and lasers don't really seem to fit with the story, but maybe something connected to the night's radiant? Idk.

This makes me wonder just what defense urithiru has built in. Laser blasting fabrials maybe? Idk, but I hope we get to see in future books.

Yes, they can. In an early draft of one of the stormlight novels Brandon actually had a character wielding two shardblades. He said that two shardblades with dead spren would have to be summoned separately. However a night radiant with a spren as a shardblade could summon two daggers or such easily. It really depends on what the user needs since the shardblades respond to that.

You could kick the villains in the face with your awful cartwheels. Idk how catching things that fall off of tables would be helpful, maybe it translates to having good reflexes?

My talent would be using things the wrong way, using a clothes iron to make grilled cheese, butterknife as a flat screwdriver, ice-cream scoop as hammer, hair straightener to cook bacon, etc.

I agree, maybe they just didn't want to risk their only shardblade getting gemhearts, idk.

This idea sounds awesome! If you do end up writing it I'd love to read it.

For any of this to happen scradrial and roshar would have to meet up. I can definitely see that happen in the future beyond what we already see with worldhoppers. Right now it's difficult to know whether or not any of this would be possible. After all we don't really have any definite answers and how spren powers would interact with the metalic arts.

I'd assume atium would still be pretty valuable off scadrial. After all there's always someone willing to collect random objects. There's also the possibility that a worldhopper could bring the atium back to scadrial and sell it there for a fortune.

Those names are awesome! There good names for cats and subtle references a couple of Brandon's series. I love it!

Maybe the strength of the powers could depend on the emotional bond the person has with the object the spren bonded to. The strength of the powers could also depend on how close or far the person is for the object. Idk how you plan on the interaction between the person, object and spren. For power idea's maybe the zinc and brass are more in touch with people emotions? Maybe duralumin could grant the power to strengthen other allomancers or metal bound? Aluminum metal bound could wipe other allomancers metal reserves or maybe mess with the bond with spren and metal bound temporarily? Idk, just some random ideas.

This is such a cool idea! A mix of spren and allomancy would be super interesting to see. what if people bonded to the spren had ideals as well? If they did it could be really interesting, maybe the ideals could relate to the type of metal. For instance Zinc and Brass bonded could have to pay special attention to people's emotions. Or maybe pewter bonded could have to keep themselves in peak physical condition.

The first time I heard about Brandon was when I showed my cousin the plot line for an early book I was writing and he said it was similar to Mistborn. (Just to clarify, the book I was writing was nowhere near as impressive, the events were just similar to the first book of Mistborn, but way less cool.) I didn't pay much attention to it at the time, but a while later I read Skyward and was obsessed. I looked to see if Brandon had any more books and realized he was the author of Mistborn. I read the series and was even more obsessed. At this point of have read most of his books and watched his Youtube courses on writing.

When you read the way of kings in one sitting.