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  1. Hey everyone; I have big news!
     

     

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    Yesterday I got dawnshard!!! 
    *squeals in excitement*

    1. Szeth's Facepalm

      Szeth's Facepalm

      Awesome! I didn't totally understand dawnshard, i gotta reread it

    2. Thaidakar the Ghostblood

      Thaidakar the Ghostblood

      NICE!!! Szeth, it pretty much is Brandon being like: let's to a lecture, about DAWNSHARDS AND AIMIA!!

  2. Here’s chapter two of what I posted yesterday. Hope you guys like it!

    Spoiler

    Lyra awoke with a start gasping. Tha-that was.. that nightmare. It felt so real, like it actually happened. But she knew for a fact that it wasn’t, for Cardithia had many ally’s and was not under attack. Their closest Ally was Kendoia. The dream made everything seem wrong, except for the fact that she was betrothed to the prince of Kendoia, Prince Vladimir whom which she had met before. He was a very very handsome man. He was in his early twenties and Lyra was nineteen turning twenty in just a few short weeks. 

    The betrothal treaty says that the eldest daughter is to marry the prince exactly two weeks after the princess’s twentieth birthday. Which is in exactly six weeks today. She will have to move hundreds of miles away from her home. I’ve been training for this my entire life she thought with a little bit of hope. 

    Each day she would get even more nervous for the wedding. 

    Vladimir is a wonderful man she thought to herself. He’s kind, thoughtful, and fit to be a proper King. She could tell that her sisters envied her. 

    She sat their, thoughtful, on her bed until she invited her maids in to get her ready for the day.

     

    One hour later she stood before her mirror, examining her new dress. She smiled, her seamstress outdid herself this time.  She thanked her maids and headed to the dining hall for her breakfast.

    She sat down at the dining table, her younger brothers and sisters must’ve already eaten. She delicately picked up the fork, and knife and began cutting her pancakes with elegance, if that was possible. 

    After she finished her meal, she went to her lessons, today’s was.. what is todays? She wondered, ah, Cardithia history. She remembered. Lyra had separate classes then her siblings, for they did not have as extensive training in manners or politics as she did. She needed to learn these things so that, she could be the best Queen she could be. She walked with grace to the library where she took her lessons. 

    When she got there, there was a man in there with her father, whom had a grim expression. Oh no, she thought, fear running through her body like ice.

    It’s not my best, but I like it I guess lol.

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    2. Maddie The Survivor

      Maddie The Survivor

      (I changed Arya’s name to Lyra)

    3. Doomstick

      Doomstick

      Lyra is the His Dark Materials protagonist, just so you know

    4. Maddie The Survivor

      Maddie The Survivor

      I’m too good at picking names :Plol

  3. Now that I think about it…. There is one more….. Susebron???? he's honestly pretty great…..?? yea, I don’t even know what I’m saying at this point….. I would probably do the same thing as @DramaQueen but to Susebron instead of spook and maybe without the slang.
  4. Y’all. I want to actually start writing, but I can’t think of a good prompt. Here’s what I got so far, but I don’t know if I’m a fan

    Spoiler

    PROLOGUE

    Arya strode through the hallways of the Willow Fortress, furious. As the Princess of Cardithia, she could not be treated in such a disrespectful way. Calm yourself the words came instinctively from her mind. Lest she let everyone know-

    “M’lady,” a young server lady said. “Is there a way I could assist you?” She asked in a tentative tone. 

    “Your assistance is not required.” Arya said without a beat. 

    “O-ok m’lady” she said as Arya left her behind. 

    Arya slammed open the door to her fathers chambers. 

    “How dare you come in una-“ he started

    “How dare you father! Have me go off and marry some- some, old sickly slob!” She countered.

    “What did you expect me to do?” He roared. “Cardithia is surrounded with no ally’s! Barely enough food to keep our soldiers alive.!”

    “He’s more than half my age! He’s in his fifties!” She screamed

    “He’s in his thirties, Arya.”

    “I don’t care how old he is!” She yelled.

    “Arya, I have no other choice, he said if I don’t send my eldest daughter he will invade all sides.” He said in a soft voice, “trust me, I don’t want you to have to do this any more than you do.” 

    “Father, please,” she begged, tears streaming down her cheeks. 

    “I’m sorry, I have no other choice.” He said, sorrowful. 

    Arya stormed out of the room, cheeks stained with tears. Arya was going to marry the prince of Kendoia.

    It’s kind of like Warbreaker in a sense but not really. It’s just a draft and I put weird names I could think of lol. I don’t know if I will continue it though..

    1. Channelknight Fadran

      Channelknight Fadran

      Arya's the name of the elf princess in Eragon, so I recommend you change that

    2. Thaidakar the Ghostblood

      Thaidakar the Ghostblood

      I like it! I would love to see more of it Maddie!

    3. Robin Sedai

      Robin Sedai

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      Arya's the name of the elf princess in Eragon, so I recommend you change that

      Also Arya Stark

  5. It is not Frava. It is not ladon. 1. This Character is a Liar 2. This character intended to hurt a protagonist. 3. This Character is not invested 4. This character has died (Eliminated Characters: Denth, Shallan, Winzik, Frava, ladon)
  6. you guys. I can’t sleep, tomorrow I have a writing festival I got selected to go to and my brain won’t go to sleep, my body is more than happy too. The excitement it killling me!

    Honestly I didn’t think I would ever be so excited about going to a writing thing. Two years ago I would have laughed at the thought. (I hated reading and writing) and then I discovered the world of Brandon Sanderson.

    basically, I might be in the shard until my eyes get too tired to stay awake.

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    2. Doomstick

      Doomstick

      uh uh. off. now. don't make me use my stern voice.

      (I have to do this a lot to people who I haven't threatened to call out yet)

    3. Doomstick

      Doomstick

      good job! (I have no idea who that is :P)

    4. Maddie The Survivor

      Maddie The Survivor

      Hey, I actually fell asleep decently fast! Now I have to get ready like the flash.

  7. It is not Winzik. 1. This Character is a Liar 2. This character intended to hurt a protagonist. 3. This Character is not invested (Eliminated Characters: Denth, Shallan, Winzik)
  8. I found this on churchofjesuschrist.org I think the last one will help a lot. Yea, so I’ve always been saying LDS, oops. Yea, hopefully this resolves the problem..
  9. It is not Denth. It is not Shallan. 1. This Character is a Liar 2. This character intended to hurt a protagonist. (Eliminated Characters : Denth, Shallan)
  10. By all my siblings since I just have 2 WYR meet Lightsong or The Lopen?
  11. So, I though of this when I was on the “Ask anyone Anything” thread. And I asked what would you do if you met your Cosmere Crush(es)? So Uhm. It’s pretty self explanatory, just say what you would do! Make sure to include the Character name. I’ll go first! Kaladin… If I met Kaladin IRL I would go absolutely insane. First I would become a Windrunner Squire and hit the skies! Then I would try to comfort him and tell him it’s going to be okay. Because well. It’s Kaladin! I would then force him to take me to Roshar, and live there. (Bringing my fam with me) after, I would make Kaladin teach me the spear and the lashings. (Yea this seems very childish, but this is what is going on through my head) I’ll do another one lol. Vasher…? So yea…. I like Vasher…….. he’s pretty cool lol. So anyways, I would go hangout with (Warbreaker) Vasher and have him teach me the sword so I can be the ultimate Windrunner. I would also buy a bunch of breaths and become an Awakener-Windrunner and go God mode on Roshar. so yea. That’s basically what is going on! Don’t be afraid to share, we all have some… different.. crushes lol *cough cough* Vasher for me. Have fun!!
  12. I would probably tell my friends (only the ones who appreciate fantasy books lol) what would you do if you met your book crush(es) in real life?
  13. I don’t know if someone has done this but oh well.. “Goat is dead. But I’ll see what I can do.” (WoR) “You sent goat to the sky to die, goat, but the sky and the goats are mine. I claim them, as I know claim your goat.” (WoR) ”Goat on, Goat off” (Karate Kid) “Your a goat, Harry” (Harry Potter) "Goat Is Catching, And If We Goat, You Goat With Us!" (The Hunger games: The Mockingjay) “We don’t talk about Goats, oats, oats, oats, oats, we don’t talk about goats!” (Encanto) “Execute order goat” (Revenge of the Sith) “Watch out for the goat!” (George of the Jungle) Edit: I just thought of a good one: (it’s a conversation) “Goat, give me some of your goats.” “No go find your own!” “Come on, give me some of your Goats!” (Napoleon Dynamite) if any of you guys have already said these; I’m sorry about that, I just wrote the first ones that came to my head. these are actually pretty funny to write lol.
  14. I didn’t believe that my post a few days ago would start a debate lol. it’s the way they said it, without “reverence” not quite mocking the church but also not being reverent. (I’m sorry if that doesn’t make any sense, I don’t know any way to put it) Edit: maybe I shouldn’t have put triggered. I do understand that non-members don’t know what to call us since they’ve called us “Mormons” and now we want them to call us Members if The Church if Jesus Christ of Latter Day Saints (or members of the LDS religion) which is a bit of a mouthful. I don’t blame them though. It has been quite interesting learning about the history of the LDS religion from the point of view from non-members, listening to my peers hypotheses on different matters (the pioneers, Joseph Smith etc.) It’s made me have some historical empathy of how the Native Americans that lived in Utah at the time of the pioneers must’ve felt when we came in. yeah, sorry guys if that didn’t make any sense, I’ve just been pondering that for quite some time and felt like sharing it.
  15. Someone called The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter Day Saints religion “Mormonism” I’m going to say I was a little triggered and made sure to correct them nicely
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