Subvisual Haze

Redeemed by the power of love and friendship by Navani, Dalinar's ghost and Lift (who makes an inappropriate comment). Elhokar's ghost saying something inspirational is 50/50.

I doubt it will happen, but I think a delightful reveal would be that Kaladin isn't really doing therapy but just revealing a sign about his true nature. "The hands of the king are the hands of a healer, and so shall the rightful king be known"

Oh that's a very insightful point. Ever since tWoK I've been annoyed that Kaladin was never permitted by the plot to return to the role that made me fall in love with him: the suffering heroic leader who inspires everyone around him in hopeless circumstances. We didn't get Kaladin the leader back, but we did get Adolin at least to play the part.

"You, the reader, go to therapy"

So many frequently talk like Marvel characters or highly updooted Reddit posters. Very quippy and unserious. It's less the specific words (which could be attributed to "translation") than the lack of seriousness/distinct voice/worldview of the people expressing themselves. Theoretically fantasy is supposed to be a pre-modern environment and thus inhabited by people with a worldview/voice distinct from an internet poster circa 2015-2024. If it was just one person doing this (Wit would be ideal), then it wouldn't be quite so noticeable because they could serve as a contrast. Instead we have Kaladin talking about being a therapist, Adolin being a slut, Shallan squeeing like a fujoshi etc. It's weird because earlier Sanderson books didn't have this quality. I have to wonder if its not an intentional change to cater to broader/more YA audience.

I liked that it wasn't yet another side plot of armies punching each other. It felt a little clunky in execution because it felt like an imperfect blend of a couple different ideas/functions. 1) A question on whether it is smart for a small power to seek peace with a larger power rather than get wrecked trying to oppose them. 2) An ethics 101 debate on utilitarianism. 3) Jasnah gets taken down a peg. The final product felt a little clunky to me as a result.

Odium's argument centered around him being trustworthy to keep his word but all the B-plots in this book (including the debate itself) occur because of a silly loophole in a contract that Odium exploits ignoring intent.

I was kind of surprised by the absolute lack of care Honor put into vetting the Heralds in the first place. He basically just choose 10 people who were available and willing! It's not surprising if one or two bad apples snuck in who just enjoyed the prospect of being immortal (what if Battar was just an equivalent of Gavilar?). Clearing up the trauma via Kaladin-brand therapy in such a case wouldn't necessary result in a good person. At best therapy process the trauma and help self-actualize, but that doesn't necessarily result in a "good person". The Sopranos rather cleverly covered this limitation of therapy as a mechanism for betterment. Take a mob boss suffering from panic attacks, apply therapy, yield a more efficient mob boss? I guess maybe if you apply Clockwork Orange therapeutic techniques you could change a "bad person" into a "good person", but you shatter free will in the process.

You can't save everyone, and Battar will be that one who is unwilling to be redeemed by Kaladin. Both because of the greed primary motivation and that's she's just too morally far gone to be redeemed. The others can claim various levels of magical incompetence so as to not be fully accountable for their actions. Battar's hospitals are beyond forgiveness, and anyways I doubt she'll show any actual remorse for what she did. She also can't hide behind the "I made moral compromises for the greater good" defense because she flipped to Team Odium the minute it was convenient. Basically I think she'll be alternative expression of Kaladin's 4th oath - can't save them all.

You go in expecting the standard demonic contract, blood of a virgin and what-not but that's when she hits you with the variable rate interest loan.

This was after Dalinar heard Nohadon's voice. Nohadon Adonalsium, the one they collectively killed.

Raises an interesting point. Would Dalinar have been willing to kill any child, or woman, or elderly, or infirm, or person who just doesn't know how to fight. Odium was shooting water in a barrel trying to pick someone who Dalinar wouldn't be willing to kill.

On a meta level it feels like: 1) tell the reader there is a secret plan (so they don't get too bummed out about the bad guys winning) 2) keep the plan vague (so the readers can endlessly speculate)

Seems to be implying that she is the successor of the Stormfather as the largest remaining remnant of Honor. Basically Syl is now similar to the Mist in Mistborn. She'll (something something) Kaladin (something) Connection to reclaim the Honor shard.

Looking forward to finding out definitively maybe 15 years in the future.