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9 minutes ago, NameIess said:

Job demonstrated a suplex-like motion, pretending to grab the air (but not actually doing so obviously, as he didn't want to kill the wind yet) and flipping backwards, throwing the imaginary air over his head and slamming it down onto its back. "See?" He asked Bob. 

The wind sat there.

". . . Nothing happened."

Posted
Just now, Through The Living Glass said:

The wind sat there.

". . . Nothing happened."

"Of course not." Said Job. "I was only demonstrating."

Posted
21 minutes ago, Through The Living Glass said:

". . . You can't grab air though . . . or can you?"

 

 

@Aeoryi @edgyswordname

Fog sighed.

"Well, I need to take care of something. Ribbon, you have fun killing Narrators, 'kay?"

“Safe travels.” He nodded to her as the sun disappeared, the horizon lingering red for a few moments. He had other priorities as well.

Posted
18 hours ago, Aeoryi said:

"I want you to make a device that can make an entire world hide from an Author."

Rebus blinked, then laughed - not mocking, merely stunned by the audacity. “That… it depends upon what your goal is. While the world could be brought completely out of the Thread, anything short of that would rely on that Author to - for lack of a better word - allow the device to work.” 

18 hours ago, Keke said:

he jumped bsck and hit a wall but the kick missed. kyler held his hands up and fell to the ground. He pushed himself up with his hands. 

Cyrus stood up. "I might be willing to listen. Despite You threatening my soldier and forcing your way into my compound."

Rebus stood there, waiting for Kyler to come at him again. He could negotiate with Cyrus, of course, but Evaiya was the one who actually wanted something from the man. 

17 hours ago, Kansas Stormcursed said:

Dark Cep grinned and leaned forward in the seat he had conjured for himself.

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Asharak paused. He could destroy them, but that would simply remove a connection. He refocused the attention of the Mindscape, and began attempting to use its power and his own Narration to corrupt the nanites, infecting them—not to turn them completely to his side, but to be safe from harm from them, and perhaps use them to spy on Rebus's network and maybe even his thoughts.

“The deal’s off.” It was Storm, of course. Cricket’s Author, back after all that time only to invalidate all Rebus had waited for. 
Rebus’s hopes and schemes crumpled. Compassion and mirth were smothered in disappointmen. He smiled, eyes unfocused. It was his deepest facade, cracking as this man ruined the very foundation of Rebus’s world. The duel mattered - but the very foundation of reality, all that stood between TLT and oblivion, every bit of what allowed Rebus to exist? That mattered more.
Rebus spoke slowly, rage barely contained. “So this is what you did.” Energy coalesced around him, fury channeled into magic. “You call off our ‘deal’.” 
Rebus was no longer smiling. His words came faster and harsher, outrage breaking through the fragile placidity. “You simply invalidate everything that has been agreed. Continuity is all that this world exists upon!” Rebus lifted off the ground, magic and rage holding him aloft. 

-
Mindscaping the nanites proved quite effective - their operating systems evidently made them sapient enough for it to take effect. Their memories and fears were completely alien, however - strings of numbers and molecule-level actions, with neither self-preservation nor guilt. 

17 hours ago, TwinStorm said:

Atreides nodded. "I am seeing to it already."

“Good.” Rebus said. Then he disappeared, recognizing that each plot thread he was in made it harder for his Author to answer everything in time. 

17 hours ago, edgyswordname said:

Not like hero or villain, though. Hero, villain, antihero and anti villain are a different thing from antagonist, third party, protagonist, and bystander (imhop, debatable, and I haven’t published anything)

All eight of those could conceivably be Plotblades. My rule of thumb is to check TVTropes - if it has a page with at least a few literary examples, it can almost certainly work. 

14 hours ago, NameIess said:

The shopkeep sniffed. “What use’ve i for somethin’ fancy like that? I’ll take those bills, bill’ll change em for me down at the billchanger.”

Jack was visibly relieved. “The butterfly can run messages, but if there’s someone who can change the money that’s probably better for us both.” 

2 minutes ago, Through The Living Glass said:

She headed off into the woods.

"Rebus!"

@DragonHeir

Rebus appeared almost instantly. 

Posted
45 minutes ago, Through The Living Glass said:

". . . You can't grab air though . . . or can you?"

 

 

@Aeoryi @edgyswordname

Fog sighed.

"Well, I need to take care of something. Ribbon, you have fun killing Narrators, 'kay?"

"Right."

Posted
3 minutes ago, DragonHeir said:

Rebus appeared almost instantly. 

She looked over at him.

"Ah, perfect."

For Heir's eyes only:

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"I need Luxite. You were able to extract some from the Thread, right?"

 

 

 

 

Just now, Aeoryi said:

"Right."

She nodded and left to go talk to Rebus.

Posted
7 minutes ago, DragonHeir said:

Rebus blinked, then laughed - not mocking, merely stunned by the audacity. “That… it depends upon what your goal is. While the world could be brought completely out of the Thread, anything short of that would rely on that Author to - for lack of a better word - allow the device to work.” 

"A paradox, then." Desolation said. "An untanglable knot."

2 minutes ago, Through The Living Glass said:

She looked over at him.

"Ah, perfect."

For Heir's eyes only:

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"I need Luxite. You were able to extract some from the Thread, right?"

 

 

 

 

She nodded and left to go talk to Rebus.

Ribbon looked at Rebus for a second, eyes flickering with something, and then teleported away 

Posted
Just now, Through The Living Glass said:

She looked over at him.

"Ah, perfect."

For Heir's eyes only:

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"I need Luxite. You were able to extract some from the Thread, right?"

 

 

 

 

She nodded and left to go talk to Rebus.

Inkwell stared, exasperated, as Fog walked- well, drifted, maybe a few hundred yards away from the house and called out to Rebus, summoning him basically into his new backyard. Then Ribbon joined the two. “Well, this is great.” He went inside and drew a box of instant noodles and a pot of water he heated over the fireplace. 

Posted
3 minutes ago, Aeoryi said:

Ribbon looked at Rebus for a second, eyes flickering with something, and then teleported away 

oof

Oh, also

Aeoryi's eyes only >:3

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Utility and Stone are going to go after some bad guys on a little side quest

The people they're going after have a crown made of Prismite

Just a thought :3

 

 

 

Posted
Just now, Through The Living Glass said:

She looked over at him.

"Ah, perfect."

For Heir's eyes only:

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"I need Luxite. You were able to extract some from the Thread, right?"

 

 

 

 

She nodded and left to go talk to Rebus.

Rebus smiled. 
Likewise for Glass: 

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You aren’t Glass, are you? 

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Seriously? If you aren’t Glass, this will be spoilery and you’ll be sad. 

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Alright, you’re probably Glass now. 

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“I was. What do you need it for, may I ask?”

 

Just now, Aeoryi said:

"A paradox, then." Desolation said. "An untanglable knot."

“Of course not,” Rebus said. “There are four different ways that this could be done - the ones not needing Authorial cooperation simply have side effects.” 

1 minute ago, edgyswordname said:

Inkwell stared, exasperated, as Fog walked- well, drifted, maybe a few hundred yards away from the house and called out to Rebus, summoning him basically into his new backyard. Then Ribbon joined the two. “Well, this is great.” He went inside and drew a box of instant noodles and a pot of water he heated over the fireplace. 

Rebus could have found him anyway - he glanced at the cabin and winked. 

Posted
3 minutes ago, DragonHeir said:

Of course not,” Rebus said. “There are four different ways that this could be done - the ones not needing Authorial cooperation simply have side effects.” 

"That's unfortunate for you."

Posted
27 minutes ago, DragonHeir said:

Rebus stood there, waiting for Kyler to come at him again. He could negotiate with Cyrus, of course, but Evaiya was the one who actually wanted something from the man. 

Ah yes evaiya the one who's unconscious and likely not breathing. 

kyler coughed again and rubbed his head. "I dont want to fight you" he grumbled. Cyrus took his silence as he wasnt gonna start a conversation.  "Pet, actually hurt him this time yeah?"

kyler sighed and steadied himself and didnt move until cyrus glared at him. He ran forward and grabbed a knife out of his pocket. 

Posted (edited)
6 hours ago, NameIess said:

Because Ribbon seems to care very much about you, though you've given her little reason to. Now that you're a withergeist, I suspect the relationship will only worsen.

Anti-hero/anti-villain don't exist yet, which means they are findable.

Job grinned, flexing his muscles and leaping forward to grab Bob's hands. "Of course I know how to defeat the wind. The same way you defeat anybody: A suplex."

"Ye poer foel." Whispered the High Priest of Current Events "I'd tell ye to pray to yer god fer mercy, but he ain't got no mercy in him. Weep, rejoice, and tremble, fer ye are in yer god's grasp."

Even as the High Priest of Current Events finished saying this, a man running in the ceremonial gait of The Exhausted Messenger Bringing Dire News appeared at the bottom of the temple steps. He was a lesser priest of Plot, from the Ghanderflaffle temple by the patterning of his robes. The man ran up the steps, gasping ceremonially for breath, and threw himself to the ground before the High Priest of Plot. "Oh Highest Priest of Plot," He murmured in ceremonial tones with downcast eyes, "I bring to you News Most Dire, from Plot's Temple in the Empire of Ghanderflaffles."

The High Priest of Plot turned to the messenger. "News? From the Temple of the Almighty itself? Tell me these tidings, for I fear there is darkness in your words."

Edited by TwinStorm
Posted
22 minutes ago, Aeoryi said:

"That's unfortunate for you."

“What Author are you attempting to hide from - and how truly hidden do you wish to be?” 

17 minutes ago, Keke said:

Ah yes evaiya the one who's unconscious and likely not breathing. 

kyler coughed again and rubbed his head. "I dont want to fight you" he grumbled. Cyrus took his silence as he wasnt gonna start a conversation.  "Pet, actually hurt him this time yeah?"

kyler sighed and steadied himself and didnt move until cyrus glared at him. He ran forward and grabbed a knife out of his pocket. 

Huh. Going back, I seem to have missed that Evaiya fell unconscious. 
Rebus’s nanomachines poked at Evaiya, evaluating the effects of Kyler’s strangling. 
Rebus raised an eyebrow, stepping forwards to grab his wrist and hold the knife away. “That man seems worse than I,” he said quietly, “in both morals and capabilities. I don’t know what he is doing to keep you in his employ, but I could get you out of here.” 

Posted
43 minutes ago, DragonHeir said:

Rebus smiled. 
Likewise for Glass: 

  Reveal hidden contents

You aren’t Glass, are you? 

  Reveal hidden contents

Seriously? If you aren’t Glass, this will be spoilery and you’ll be sad. 

  Reveal hidden contents
  Reveal hidden contents

Alright, you’re probably Glass now. 

  Reveal hidden contents
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“I was. What do you need it for, may I ask?”

Don't look unless you're Heir

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You'll regret it!

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I'm serious!

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Next one is the post! You'll be sad if you open it!

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you lost the game >:3

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"Personal project of sorts. Maybe I'll tell you if you help me."

 

 

 

 

 

Posted
55 minutes ago, DragonHeir said:

Rebus smiled. 
Likewise for Glass: 

  Reveal hidden contents

You aren’t Glass, are you? 

  Reveal hidden contents

Seriously? If you aren’t Glass, this will be spoilery and you’ll be sad. 

  Reveal hidden contents
  Reveal hidden contents

Alright, you’re probably Glass now. 

  Reveal hidden contents
  Reveal hidden contents

“I was. What do you need it for, may I ask?”

 

“Of course not,” Rebus said. “There are four different ways that this could be done - the ones not needing Authorial cooperation simply have side effects.” 

Rebus could have found him anyway - he glanced at the cabin and winked. 

Inkwell sits on the front porch and tries to enjoy the noodles. He’s not sure the next time he will be able to quietly watch the dusk. The moon peeks out above the mountains, shining down on the woods. Fog and Rebus discuss something below, out of earshot. He tries to ignore their presence. It turns out noodles made of ink aren’t particularly filling, no matter how perfectly they imitate real noodles’ physical properties. They would sustain him anyway. “What are we going to do,” he says to 9/10mmHB#2. “Any moment they decide to, Rebus or Malevolence could just… appear. And neither Fog or Ribbon seem worried as I do.”

Spoiler

Maybe these antagonists aren’t as far from us as you think, Inkwell. I’ve already got a plan to deal with them.

“You know that any time someone tries to bring back the dead, all they get is a rotting corpse. Parents and lovers, tyrants and heroes, gods and men. How many stories of tragedy come from trying to bring back what’s dead and buried?”

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This world isn’t dead yet. And if it isn’t, if I am not, then what I seek to revive was never truly dead in the first place.

“If I can’t convince you, you know I’ll eventually have to fight you.”

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I know. I… I don’t relish the thought.

“Well, soon you’ll be rid of me. If we’re lucky we won’t cross paths.”

Spoiler

If we’re lucky.

He sat silently, finishing off the broth and watching the stars.

Posted
1 minute ago, edgyswordname said:

Inkwell sits on the front porch and tries to enjoy the noodles. He’s not sure the next time he will be able to quietly watch the dusk. The moon peeks out above the mountains, shining down on the woods. Fog and Rebus discuss something below, out of earshot. He tries to ignore their presence. It turns out noodles made of ink aren’t particularly filling, no matter how perfectly they imitate real noodles’ physical properties. They would sustain him anyway. “What are we going to do,” he says to 9/10mmHB#2. “Any moment they decide to, Rebus or Malevolence could just… appear. And neither Fog or Ribbon seem worried as I do.”

  Reveal hidden contents

Maybe these antagonists aren’t as far from us as you think, Inkwell. I’ve already got a plan to deal with them.

“You know that any time someone tries to bring back the dead, all they get is a rotting corpse. Parents and lovers, tyrants and heroes, gods and men. How many stories of tragedy come from trying to bring back what’s dead and buried?”

  Reveal hidden contents

This world isn’t dead yet. And if it isn’t, if I am not, then what I seek to revive was never truly dead in the first place.

“If I can’t convince you, you know I’ll eventually have to fight you.”

  Reveal hidden contents

I know. I… I don’t relish the thought.

“Well, soon you’ll be rid of me. If we’re lucky we won’t cross paths.”

  Reveal hidden contents

If we’re lucky.

He sat silently, finishing off the broth and watching the stars.

ooooooo

That was a good lil' read. :3

Nice :3

Posted
1 hour ago, DragonHeir said:

The deal’s off.” It was Storm, of course. Cricket’s Author, back after all that time only to invalidate all Rebus had waited for. 
Rebus’s hopes and schemes crumpled. Compassion and mirth were smothered in disappointmen. He smiled, eyes unfocused. It was his deepest facade, cracking as this man ruined the very foundation of Rebus’s world. The duel mattered - but the very foundation of reality, all that stood between TLT and oblivion, every bit of what allowed Rebus to exist? That mattered more.
Rebus spoke slowly, rage barely contained. “So this is what you did.” Energy coalesced around him, fury channeled into magic. “You call off our ‘deal’.” 
Rebus was no longer smiling. His words came faster and harsher, outrage breaking through the fragile placidity. “You simply invalidate everything that has been agreed. Continuity is all that this world exists upon!” Rebus lifted off the ground, magic and rage holding him aloft. 

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Mindscaping the nanites proved quite effective - their operating systems evidently made them sapient enough for it to take effect. Their memories and fears were completely alien, however - strings of numbers and molecule-level actions, with neither self-preservation nor guilt. 

That is really quite useful information.

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Asharak chose to go a different route—he simply projected into their operating systems the illusion that they were obeying the orders of any incoming signals, and tapped into those signals to constantly listen to them. He also tested to see if he could Connect from them to the wider network of signals used by Rebus.

Posted (edited)
51 minutes ago, DragonHeir said:

Huh. Going back, I seem to have missed that Evaiya fell unconscious. 
Rebus’s nanomachines poked at Evaiya, evaluating the effects of Kyler’s strangling. 
Rebus raised an eyebrow, stepping forwards to grab his wrist and hold the knife away. “That man seems worse than I,” he said quietly, “in both morals and capabilities. I don’t know what he is doing to keep you in his employ, but I could get you out of here.” 

My phone refuses to send my shard notifications!! 😤

he looked at rebus. His eyes were deep set and dark but there was a small flicker of Hope. "Vieyk controls me. I cant leave. Even if i wanted to." He said looking down. "If i leave..." he gritted his teeth and swiped at rebus' legs. 

evaiya was barely breathing. Her wind pipe was just barely intact 

Edited by Keke
Posted

Bacon the Bard yawned.

"Oh dear," he suddenly realized. "I've been asleep! I hope some terrible, awful thing hasn't happened while I was unconscious to the world!"

Posted
1 minute ago, xinoehp512 said:

Bacon the Bard yawned.

"Oh dear," he suddenly realized. "I've been asleep! I hope some terrible, awful thing hasn't happened while I was unconscious to the world!"

Many people had died. Including Cricket.

Just now, Kansas Stormcursed said:

Oh thank God

The plot is back

XD right lol

2 minutes ago, xinoehp512 said:

Bacon the Bard yawned.

"Oh dear," he suddenly realized. "I've been asleep! I hope some terrible, awful thing hasn't happened while I was unconscious to the world!"

WELCOMEEEEE

Posted
Just now, Through The Living Glass said:

Many people had died. Including Cricket.

XD right lol

WELCOMEEEEE

"NOOOO!" exclaimed Bacon passionately. "How could such a tragedy have occurred?"

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