Szeth's Facepalm

Do you ever feel, feel so paper thin, like a house of cards, one blow from cavin' in? Do you ever feel already buried deep? Six feet under screams, but no one seems to hear a thing. Do you know that there's still a chance for you?

No right, no wrong no rules for mee-eeeeee! I'm freeeeeeeeeeee!

Hmmmm what is a symphonian? Reminds me of music... like a symphony... 8/10

It's funny how some distance

I am Christian and i got tarot cards around my 14th bday lol They haven't turned me to satan worship yet The story reminds me of something from the movie God's Not Dead. Have you seen it? It wasn't my thing, but i think you'd like it.

It's so we can play nigh notes without them going crazily off the staff all the time lol

You guys are so so nice omg when i'm feeling sad i scroll through this thread and read all the kind things you guys say about my sketchys, and it always makes me feel better. thank you guys so much <333 Anyway... the teacher was gone for art class today, and we were supposed to work on our dot paintings from last week, but i may have drawn myself as a knight radiant instead best art class ever tbh

Yuppity yeppers. Baritone, bass, tenor, alto, mezzo soprano, soprano, treble. I think that's all?

Cellist don't give up that easily omg. Sorry Morningtide but you and i are gonna have to agree to disagree about piano being better lol :DD for me personally, i just find the sound of bow and string instruments absolutely immaculate, and cello has the most beautiful tones that my ears just can't get enough of. Don't get me wrong though, piano is absolutely lit and dope piano and cello is one of the best music combos imo.

i sense a Hamilton lyric stay aliiiiiiiive!!!

DRAGON TURTLE!! DRAGON TURTLE!!

it's ok u can hang out Also, guys, my cello teacher showed me this gorgeous cello piece that is now one of my favorite pieces of classical music: https://youtu.be/U5Y0uQLgriA I'm learning it now, it's so fun :333 i had to learn a whole new clef lol, tenor clef.

Oof, sorry for bringing that into the world ;-; seriously 3 AM me can be deranged lmao

Yeah, i re-read it and i totally get what you're saying. it does feel pretty weird. i do want it to seem like he's just convincing himself he has to do it, so he may seem sympatheitc, but he's actually a monster. but whatever it's a short story lol And thank you SO MUCH for all the feedback!! That's exactly what i was hooping for :D I'll watch out for adjectives haha. i usually write pretty late, and my brain is a little more creative at that time, but also... it's 11:30 and my mind is not at it's full capacity and enjoys fancy words. anyway i'll go through it with your suggestions and keep them in mind for the next installment. thanks so much for taking the time to do that, it's so helpful Can you clarify one thing-- so you use the word telepathic here,. does it seem like gwen and halo are communicating telepathically? i just meant, like, it was something halo used to say to her a lot, and now she thinks about it when she trips. if it seems like they are communicating i can change it ahaha Thank you so so so so much!! awwww doomie tysm :DD

hmmmmm i see. i was thinking it's a choice and you read the first paragraph and think "uh oh poor guy" but then you read the line and you're liek "woah ok, pretty scary, maybe he's actually a jerk". but i get what you're saying, i'll re-work it a bit. yes please and thank you very very much :DDD

Oh man I'm crying so hard That really got me. I love these books and this author and this fan base so much you guys

*le gesp* omg thank you so much

When president Nelson said "I'm sure all of you are thinking of someone whom this talk could benifit" (or something to that degree), everyone in my family turned to look at someone, it was like the spiderman meme lol That was a great talk, by the way.

ey you found it! "My problems were myriad-" "i WaS hAviNg mY pErIoD ... HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHhahahahaAHahaha HAhaHAHAaAHAjjaHAHAhaHAhaAHaHaAHhaHAH HAhahah ... OH MY GOD" My personal favorite moment lmao Edit: oh ya!! That's why i popped out of the thread for a while, i had to make the a writing thread for a moment lol

I don't think so, it was Barret Wilber Weed (my beloved). It was called something like "slime tutorial with red blue green and yellow slime" lol (cinnamon knows it haha) rip i meant to say "sad and"

Hi guys!! I have 1000 posts now! This was going to be my 1000th, but i accidentally spent it on the theater kids thread. So this is 1001! To celebrate, I wanted to share some writing with you guys, and hopefully gain some feedback and critique? Feel free to be harsh, as long as it's constructive. I'd really like to get better To start, here's a short story I wrote during the shard's month of prompts (someone me didn't realize aes had already posted a prompt and posted another, thus resulting in the combination of these two prompts: "A hungry soul" and "The children are gone. Something is taking them."): Just an fyi, I'm not usually that dramatic in my writing. I wrote this one sleep deprived at three AM (when i am at my most profound lol) so please have mercy on it ;-; I wrote another one about chickens (also at three am) that was absolutely bizarre so i'm not going to share it. i honestly have no memory of even writing it, but when i woke up it was posted in the month of prompts thread, and when i read it through, i was mildly concerned. BUT ANYWAY Here's the main thing i wanted to share. It's a prologue, or first chapter, maybe, of something that has only been written in my head. By that i mean i haven't put anything down on paper for backstory, magic, plot, nothing except this. There is very little plan for where it's going, so if any of y'all liked it i thought it could be a sort of choose your own adventure thing? Though i do have a few specifics in mind. Also, don't expect particularly frequent updates, because unlike the fabulous @CalanoCorvus i am a very slow writer. (oh btw doomie pls read this stuff i wrote :333) No name yet... something circular, most likely. Ring. Hehe like the doorbell Alright... whatcha think? (you can be completely honest it's ok) Also, here's a list of other things i'm working on (though i don't have enough concrete writing to share yet): - A sort-of steampunk trilogy about an engineer who's discovered a way to produce insane amounts of power and needs to keep it away from a powerful gang, ft. her mildly evil super rich bff and her flight-obsessed head-in-the-clouds gf - a religious-fiction novella (but not the way you're thinking, probably- actually i might be misusing that genre name) about a girl whose life slowly but steadily descends into chaos after a new guy moves in across the street - a book about a group of people who live alone with chaotic, sometimes malevolent spirits, but something much bigger is going on that one of them- the one who was accidentally put in charge of communicating with the spirits when she was way to young- is starting to figure out - a book about a magic circus that is being disgustingly corrupted by a possessed ringmaster Which one(s) sounds the most interesting? (i can't promise immediate progress, of course. In fact, i can't promise any progress at all, really, but knowing one of them is particularly interesting to someone might inspire me to focus on it.) Tagging people who expressed interest in my SU about posting my writing: @The Wandering Wizard @dannnnnex @Cinnamon @Morningtide @Justice_Magician @Wittles of Shinovar <333

Ya it's pretty sad and r rated. I pirated it on YouTube lol. But i was obsessed with the music before i watched it, it has so many bangers omg