I haven’t finished Cytonic yet, but is there a reason the blurb sounds like it was written by a 13-year old? Seriously - I’m the copy editor for my high school’s yearbook, and it’s much worse than some of the articles people have turned in. It switches from past tense to present tense multiple times, the grammar and sentence structure is extremely awkward, and some of it is untrue and/or misleading. Is there a story behind this, or what?