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  1. Truthless of Shinovar
    Oh wow, Nathranking, this is awesome!!! I like the story of it a lot, just the air of mystery that surrounds it all, the foreboding sense it gives the reader, and the suspense building up (at least for the reader; the poor blind man has no idea how sinister and evil-looking the lady looks). In this regards, it reminds me a little bit of an Edgar Allen Poe story, because the reader can tell that something awful is going to happen, but the main character remains blissfully unaware. I’d love to get another chapter/story of this, or at least more on the homeless man and the woman... both of their ambiguous pasts and motives lead me to asking a lot of questions. I think the only complaint I have would be the lack of commas, there were a couple of places that I think needed it. Overall though, I liked this story a lot, and I’m eager to read more of your writing!!
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    Granted, but all enemies/bosses/puzzles get way harder as well. I wish to not be sick anymore.
  3. Truthless of Shinovar
    *kills anyone who says they win the election. Except for Lunamor*
  4. Truthless of Shinovar
    “I’ll take the biggest chocolate chip cookie you have!” Truthless asked. He then noted the rabbit-bird like thing in front of him, and hesitantly reached out his hand to pet it.
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    Truthless walked in, his head on a swivel, taking all of it in. So this was where it all began... Truthless was new here, and many of the people in here were legends now. Truthless walked up to the Light counter. “I’ll take one cookie please!” Truthless asked.
  6. Truthless of Shinovar
    Why?
  7. Truthless of Shinovar
    My deepest apology Halo “that’s illegal” meme; ^twas merely a play on words
  8. Truthless of Shinovar
    And he gained “unlimited power”
  9. Truthless of Shinovar
    “Upvote for me, and I’ll never let you down; you’ll be lashed upwards!”
  10. Truthless of Shinovar
    Ironically, the more enchiladas you ate, the more scales you had, so the government system was fairly balanced.
  11. Truthless of Shinovar
    I vote for Doomstick!!
  12. Truthless of Shinovar
    Or, you can vote for the unofficial candidate of Lunamor for President, and myself, Truthless of Shinovar, as Vice President! Our slogan is as follows: ”Vote for me, or we’ll send Truthless and Nightblood to kill you!”
  13. Truthless of Shinovar
    Tels continued his arc towards the Scorlionmanbat’s face, then at the last second, dropped down, rolled on the ground beneath its legs, and shot up ribbons of sand to pierce the thing’s wings. Smaller ribbons, this time, meant to cut and slash. Other ribbons rose up around the wings, where they began to plunge down. The wing trick wouldn’t work this time; the beast could only flap one way to get rid of some of the sand, but the other side would be exposed. >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Captain Rick H. Sharpe should’ve been dead. The beast had stepped directly on him, crushing bones and organs in such a manner that it would’ve killed any other man. Luckily, being a Stonewarden had its perks, such as being able to heal from a injury like that almost instantly. Sharpe looked to his companions and grimaced. Both were dead, and a mess to boot. He trusted the man Tels; he had been sent by Althea, and Sharpe knew her judgement was far better than his own. But mistakes like this would get them no where. Sharpe inhaled stormlight from the spheres in his pouch, then touched the ground, making it churn and boil, trapping the thing’s leg. As he did so, the gun fire ceased, for it seemed that most of the bullets were just bouncing back, hitting some of the men. Sharpe cursed, and yelled out a command for the troops to back up a little bit. Sharpe himself ripped off a piece of cloth from his shirt and used Cohesion to make it stand rigid. The edge was now as sharp as a razor blade, and Sharpe swung with all his might towards the beast’s leg. @RayOfSunshine
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    Ooh! I’ll be your vice president!
  15. Truthless of Shinovar
    It was, for whatever reason, all about equality.
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    Not to mention the peel it leaves behind afterwards.
  17. Truthless of Shinovar
    Suddenly, the pigs rose up and took over the farm. They overthrew everybody, and forced all of the other animals to work on the farm. They suffered for a while, and then realized the pigs were corrupt. George Orwell smiled.
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    Tels sighed. This was the reason he had been sent after all. Everybody else on the rooftop was probably having some cool awesome battle with some sort of elite Bereua soldiers or something, and here Tels was, stuck with a giant beast like this. So life went. ”Spread our and surround the beast!!” Tels called out to his men, the command echoed by nearby soldiers. Soon enough, a loose circle had formed around the descending bat-lion-man-scorpion thing. Other abominations seemed to stray away from the mentally named Scorlionmanbat, maybe some kind command from it. Or maybe it was fear of the creature that kept the abominations away. In either case, it was a threat and had to be dealt with immediately. “OPEN FIRE!!” Tels yelled, and guns began to blaze all around him. Springing up to the beast, he aimed for it’s eyes with enhanced ribbons of sand.
  20. Truthless of Shinovar
    The chefs, however, were cannabalistic.
  21. Truthless of Shinovar
    Hurt Xino, Heal Lunamor AonEne - 7 Xinoehp512 - 6 Rebecca - 4 Doomstick - 7 Lunamor - 8 Shard of Thought - 7 Truthless of Shinovar - 7 Snipexe - 6 I think I am here - 6 Sorana - 6
  22. Truthless of Shinovar
    The third option seems pretty cool!
  23. Truthless of Shinovar
    I’ll have to listen to the whole soundtrack!
  24. Truthless of Shinovar
    *chandelier crashes* *maniacal laughter ensues* Ok, I listened to about two of the Phantom of the Opera songs, and I liked those a lot, but I’ve heard the play really wasn’t that good...
  25. Truthless of Shinovar
    Together, they formed an empire known as the Spaceghanderflaffwhalles
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