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  1. James sat down on his bed, and gazed out the window. "This certainly has been an experience." He said to himself, and he added for the Nightwatcher's sake- "I promise to keep the sword safe. It's too dangerous for mortal hands."
  2. That's rather unfortunate, given that it is (for me at least)
  3. Is the image supposed to be upside down?
  4. You absolute Mad Lady- you've actually done it! I love this!
  5. Thank you for your insights. It definitely can be difficult to flesh out characters when you know they're going to both be dead at the end of the chapter- and that most of the people there were only there to stay the night.
  6. Thank you good sir! I shall consider your feedback, so thank you for the constructive criticism
  7. James nodded, "all right," he said, earnestly.
  8. "Well," James said with a smile, "I can still use my hand- and to me that's more important than it having color."
  9. "That's fine" James said. "To be honest it doesn't really bother me." he admitted.
  10. "I can use my hand just fine." James said, "The only thing different appears to be a lack of color."
  11. James looked at Ben, recognition filling his eyes. "Yes" he said quietly, "It's what I wielded in the battle."
  12. Adolin is obviously the Myrmidon/swordmaster type character.
  13. James studied his grey hand- it was odd really. He certainly could still use it, but it carried so many of the signs of a Blade wound. "What is that sword?" he whispered, absolutely terrified. @Lunamor @Sorana
  14. "I know."James sighed, "It feels like an unrealistic reaction, but the mind rarely cares what is realistic in matters like these." He pulled the glasses from his pocket, the lenses were cracked. "Looks like I'll be needing new glasses." he noted. He turned back to Shana, "I don't think I was meant to kill." he whispered. "It just seems so diametrically opposed to what I find fulfilling in life- helping people grow, and get better" then he straightened his back, determined, "But I can't help you grow, if I let you die." He said, in epiphany, "It's a choice!", he rose to his feet, his eyes filled with renewed clarity. "If the gardener wants the flowers to grow, he has to deny the weeds their growth. He has to kill, so that his garden might be the best it can be." James broke into a wide eyed grin, that slowly faded once he noticed his hand, still tinged with gray. "But all actions have consequences."
  15. Storms Yeah! I'd love a Stormlight game with Fire Emblem mechanics. (So I think I can now officially say that Dalinar Kholin= Best Lord)
  16. Y'all, I'm in a serious reading funk. I haven't read consistently since last May. Advice?

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    2. Wyndlerunner

      Wyndlerunner

      Just read the summary for this book, and it's screaming "Mistbooornnnn!!!" at me. Would that be a correct assessment of the story?

    3. Jaywalk

      Jaywalk

      I can see the resemblance.

    4. Tesh

      Tesh

      Definitely. (Just know- Kaz is not a lot like Kelsier, and he is a teenager. I spent the first fifty pages thinking he was in his thirties or something because he was acting a lot like Kelsier at the time).

  17. James' room was somewhat tidy, with the haze of clutter that was characteristic of scatterbrains (As James himself was often.). "Feel free to sit down anywhere," James said, with the slightly stuffy sound usual to those who had been crying. "I appreciate you taking the time to do this" he said, genuinely.
  18. James gladly stepped inside, and took a seat, and gestured for her to follow.
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