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    Oh, okay! I might do it.... Maybe.
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    Who agreed that we should all change our names?! That person... is not my bestest friend. I like this name!
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    Seriously!! Those last two episodes were top notch!
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    When your parents taking away the 17th Shard is actually a scary punishment. Not a fun three days, let me tell you!
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    I gave you an upvote solely on the basis that you watch Corner Gas. That show is my all time favourite sit com and precious few know about it. I would try Sherlock, MIMYM, Scorpion, Forever, Arrow, The Flash, Star Wars: Clone Wars (If you're okay with a cheesy first season), The Lying Game was good enough. Stay away from PLL. It sucks. A lot. Also, an upvote for the guy that said SG-1 and SG Atlantis. I love them with a lot of my heart. I like SG Universe a lot, too.
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    That would be interesting if it was intentional. He ended up being an infidel in the end, technically.
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    Lol, that was the plan! Kind of. If things aren't at least somewhat inflammatory or controversial, then what's the point?
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    Upvote for the fantastic use of an amazing curse word.
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    Lol, thanks for taking the time to read all of that! The friends comparisons you made cracked me up! Thanks for validating this thread in my mind. I was worried that it was just lame, but I appreciate your reasoning on why it wasn't.
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    They are actually a deep orange.JK, I have no idea.
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    People with extra breaths give off a sort of glow anyway. Vasher has had the 5 th heightening automatically, but he manages to hide it. He can probably hide his stormlight well enough.
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    That's a good point but what about Elhokar? Or Jasnah? Or Adolin? Or Renarin?
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    That begs the question "Do emotional metals pull on you in the cognitive realm or the physical realm or the spiritual realm?" If they pull on you in the cognitive realm, then copper would be able to stop Soulcasting. If it pulls on you in the Spiritual or Phisical realm, copper wouldn't do anything. Maybe tin can help you see through illusions.
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    I have some explaining to do, it seems. I need to change Kyd's character and explain why in the freaking world Jacks is down there to begin with. There's very good and sufficient reason, but I was going to bring it into the next chapter. Do you think it would be okay if I put it there or would you like it in this chapter?
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    I do not believe that the Recreance was a bad thing. I think that the Knights as a whole decided that humanity was undeserving of their protection. They all decided at once to give up on the human race because the human race betrayed them, not the other way around. Their spren were probably the ones that convinced the Knights that this was the right thing to do and, essentially, committed suicide. The reason I say this is because of the total unconcern the Knights have in the vision of the Recreance. They just walked away without looking back as if it were the most important thing in the world that they not do so. They were so callous. I interpret this as a denunciation of the rest of the human race.
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    Granted, but you now are paralyzed. Very sad. I wish for the ability to learn anything perfectly.
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    I dub this day Sanderday.
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    Oh, so Enforcers are higher? Interesting! Does the judge have a mask on? You might want to clear it up in case you want to write another book in this world. Yeah, you did streamline a bit. You don't have to throw more conversations in, just maybe share an experience or two that that character has that is informative. That's better than dialogue sometimes. It might help if you were to add more in his head. For the genre, I wouldn't worry too much. I realize after I wrote the critique that it was actually more clear than I thought. It was just confused because of the lateness of the hour (I read it at around 3 or 4). Good work!
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    Liam Neeson should be Vasher or Denth.
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    Lol, you are funny.
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    No matter how you get the answer, you still have to take the journey first before you get to it. Your job is to learn from the journey.
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    Shallan isn't worthy to draw Syl. She's not cool enough.
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    Odium+Honor+Dominion = Tyranny Maybe.
  24. RawToast225
    Has anyone ever played SGU Wars or Marsxplr?
  25. RawToast225
    Maybe Loyalty?
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