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    You now wake up at four in the afternoon matter what. You also fall asleep at six in the morning. I wish I were an Oscar Mire Wiener.
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    Okay. The dumbest thing about Star Wars is that all the books are canon. All of the books. (Yes, I said stupidest. Even dumber than Jar Jar.) That is the equivalent of the judge of a pie contest saying "Every one wins because I don't want to eat pie." Those stupid, stupid people. Ugh, it makes me so mad that some people can be so lazy and still make so much money.
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    Of course you would be the one who got this started on the forum. Of course. How do you make a plumber cry? Kill his family. A duck walked into a bar and the bartender asked, "What's your poison?" And the duck said nothing. Because it was a duck. What's worse than finding a worm in your apple? The holocaust. Knock knock. Who's there? Danny! Danny who? Danny then broke down in tears because his mother's Alzheimer's had progressed to the point where she could no longer remember him. What's blue and fluffy? Blue fluff. What did the farmer say when he lost his tractor? "Where's my tractor?" A horse walked into a bar and the bartender asked "Why the long face?" The horse replied, "I have cancer."
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    When you hear someone use a crappy metaphor and expect their next words to be, "No, listen!"
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    You are reasonably afraid of birds. The reason is that the birds are alive. You are afraid of alive things. I wish for a train. Edit: I like trains.
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    I know what Silk is: awesome. Anyway, I'll resubmit it in a couple weeks. Until then, I'm out of submitting stuff. Edit: I'm so flipping excited to submit this again!
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    What did you wish for?
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    With these three reviews, I can make it perfect. Is it against the conventions to resubmit a finished product after submitting it once already? If so, I won't. If there isn't any embargo on it, I want to submit it in a few drafts. Sound good?
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    Ooh, that's a good suggestion! I like the idea of not focussing on it so much.
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    Okay, good stuff to work on here! Thank you for reading it! One thing I got back from f family member who read this was that it was odd he got better after one week of the electro therapy. To be honest, I was running out of writing juice at the end of the book and didn't want to write the damnation thing any more. As a consequence, it wasn't as good of an ending it could have been. I really just need to fix the flow. I wanted it to be a legit mental patient. It isn't does to be clever, it's supposed to be barely veiled, blatant crazy. I completely forgot about the typo thing! I will use that for the typos. Good suggestions, Jenkins
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    Then I answered your wish. Is that not allowed? I'm confused.
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    Lol, okay. I'll let the "swag" thing go. It bothered me more than it should, but you're right. It did come from a misunderstanding.
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    I would like yo correct one thing on the post above. Mr. Sanderson does not have "swag." He has genius and class. Other than that, thanks for advice, guys!
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    They do have dead parents, though. It might be enough. When you try to make a Sanderson quote at the dinner table and everyone just stares at you. Let me tell you, that is an awkward experience.
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    Granted. It's really gross, so you don't want to replace it with a new one because that would mean touching it. As a consequence, your disgusting filter only rots your brain away. Try wording your things better, friend I wish for an ice cream sandwich.
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    My grandpa is dying. I hate losing people so much. A year ago, my best friend. Soon, my grandpa. How do people deal with this?? I am so damnation sick of losses. Maybe I should get help.
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    It is literally something I dashed off in an hour as the idea came to me. I had no intended audience and, if I ever touch it again, I am going to add more entries. More of a "Hey, I'm getting better" type thing. As it stands it's a little bit of an abrupt resolution. So, yes. It does come from one messed up mind. Edit: I just realized it has a House on Mango Street feel to it. The innocence encountering the disturbing.
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    Granted. A freak accident gets you stuck... somewhere in between. I wish for a loaf of bread to bring pour old granny in the woods.
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    Granted, but you're now afraid of bunnies. That grows into xenophobia, and you die without leaving your house for thirteen years, afraid of all animals and bugs. I wish for a good budget to follow. (Obvious bane: You have no money to follow it with. Don't do the obvious thing.)
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    All right. I think I have had given you guys enough time to read it. What do you think? Dig in. Tell my typos, problems, holes, and other things you think I need to know. Let the advice rain down from the top to the bottom.
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    In that case, I will put her in the billions.
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    In the negatives.
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    When Firefight coming out is the best thing that has happened to you all year. (It's funny, because the year has only happened for a few days)
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    I can cotton to that, navy. I think you should make it a new thread topic so more people see it.
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    I listened to the audible version as well, and I can tell you it's a really well done audio book. I really liked reading the text as well, but whatever. I think it's worth the read just to get you back into the universe.
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