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[Scarletfox]

The wet francium bathbomb emperor skated clumsily around the stone scadrial spaceship store to annoy 25 angry but groovy breadm*nks with 4 dead rotting buffalo.

Edited November 9, 2020 by Scarletfox

[xinoehp512 he/him]

The wet francium bathbomb emperor skates clumsily around the stone scadrial spaceship store to annoy 25 angry but groovy breadm*nks with 4 dead rotting buffalo.

[dannnex male]

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I propose a third possible action, you can remove a single word. Could help us keep from having to reset the whole thing. Keep the same sentence going longer.  

EDIT: you wouldn’t be allowed to remove something that makes the sentence grammatically incorrect, like the main subject noun or something like that.

 

Edited November 9, 2020 by Danex

[xinoehp512 he/him]

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I want to see someone add an extra clause somehow. 

 

[Chasmgoat he/him]

2 minutes ago, xinoehp512 said:

 

thing is, you can't add a conjuction because in order for proper grammar you would need more than one new word. It might be possible but that would be difficult to do.

edit: nevermind, I think I found a way:

The wet francium bathbomb emperor skates clumsily around the stone scadrial spaceship store to annoy 25 angry but groovy breadm*nks with 4 dead but rotting buffalo.

you can now expand on that.

Edited November 9, 2020 by Chasmgoat

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33 minutes ago, xinoehp512 said:

The wet francium bathbomb emperor skates clumsily around the stone scadrial spaceship store to annoy 25,000 angry but groovy breadm*nks with 4 dead rotting buffalo.

 

[xinoehp512 he/him]

7 minutes ago, Chasmgoat said:

you can now expand on that.

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I already did that.  The 'but' in the sentence wasn't there from the beginning, after all...

The wet francium bathbomb emperor skates clumsily around the stone scadrial spaceship store to annoy 25,000 angry but groovy breadm*nks with 4 dead rotting buffalo present.

[Chasmgoat he/him]

The wet francium bathbomb emperor skates clumsily around the stone scadrial spaceship store to annoy 25,000 angry but groovy breadm*nks with 4 dead, but rotting buffalo present.

I think mine was skipped so I am putting it back in

[Knight of Iron she/they]

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@Danex, it's a good idea and if I can get a second on it then I'll add it to the rules. I think if it's a rule that you can add, you should be able to take away. Maybe in the future we can have a good one and then only be allowed to change a word or something, I don't know.

 

 

Edited November 9, 2020 by Knight of Iron

[Chasmgoat he/him]

I second it. but you can not take away a word added within the last 3 posts and you can not remove words if the sentence has 10 or less words.

[Ghanderflaffle she/her]

19 minutes ago, Chasmgoat said:

The hot francium bathbomb emperor skates clumsily around the stone scadrial spaceship store to annoy 25,000 angry but groovy breadm*nks with 4 dead, but rotting buffalo present.

I was on the wrong page for my other post, my bad.

[Knight of Iron she/they]

The wet francium bathbomb emperor clumsily skates around the stone scadrial spaceship store to annoy 25,000 angry but groovy breadm*nks with 4 dead, but rotting buffalo present.

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for now lets indicate a removed word with a strikethrough

 

[NameIess]

The hot francium bathbomb emperor skates around the stone scadrial spaceship store to annoy 25,000 angry but groovy breadm*nks with 4 dead and rotting buffalo present.

Edited November 9, 2020 by Nameless

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The hot francium bathbomb emperor skates around the stone scadrial spaceship store to annoy 25,000 angry but groovy breadm*nks with 4,000,000 dead and rotting buffalo present.

[NameIess]

The hot francium bathbomb emperor skates around the stone scadrial spaceship store to annoy 25,000 angry but groovy breadm*nks with 4,000,000 dead and rotting buffalo presents.

 

[Knight of Iron she/they]

The hot francium bathbomb emperor skates around the stone scadrial spaceship store to annoy 25,000 angry but groovy chickens with 4,000,000 dead and rotting buffalo presents.

[xinoehp512 he/him]

The hot francium bathbomb emperor skates around the stone scadrial spaceship store to annoy 25,000 angry but groovy chickens with 4,000,000 dead and rotting buffalo dust.

[NameIess]

The hot bathbomb emperor skates around the stone scadrial spaceship store to annoy 25,000 angry but groovy chickens with 4,000,000 dead and rotting buffalo dust

 

[xinoehp512 he/him]

The hot bathbomb emperor skates around the stone scadrial spaceship store to annoy 25,000 angry dinosaurs, but groovy chickens with 4,000,000 dead and rotting buffalo dust.

[Aspiring Writer]

The hot bathbomb Emperor Buckethead skates around the stone Scadrial spaceship store to annoy 25,000 angry dinosaurs, but groovy chickens with 4,000,000 dead and rotting buffalo dust.

Edited November 10, 2020 by Aspiring Writer

[xinoehp512 he/him]

The hot bathbomb Emperor Buckethead skates around the stone Scadrial spaceship store to annoy 25,000 angry dinosaurs, but groovy chickens with 4,000,000 dead and rotting buffalo dust couches.

[Chasmgoat he/him]

The hot bathbomb Emperor Buckethead skates around the stone Scadrial spaceship store to annoy 25,000 angry dinosaurs, but groovy chickens with 4,000,000 dead while rotting buffalo dust couches.

[Knight of Iron she/they]

The hot bathbomb Emperor Buckethead skates around the stone Scadrial spaceship store to annoy 25,000 angry dinosaurs, but groovy chickens with 4,000,000 dead while rotting buffalo dust couches.

[NameIess]

The hot bathbomb Emperor Buckethead skates around the stone Scadrial spaceship store to annoy 25,000 angry dinosaurs, but groovy chickens with 4,000,000 dead while rotting buffalo dust couches exploded.

 

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The hot Emperor Buckethead skates around the stone Scadrial spaceship store to annoy 25,000 angry dinosaurs, but 90 groovy chickens with 4,000,000 dead while rotting buffalo dust couches exploded.