The Sentence

[xinoehp512 he/him]

The hot Emperor Buckethead skates around the stone Scadrial spaceship store to annoy 25,000 angry dinosaurs, but 90 groovy chickens danced with 4,000,000 dead while rotting buffalo dust couches exploded.

[Shard of Reading he/him]

Just now, xinoehp512 said:

The hot Emperor Buckethead skates around the stone Scadrial spaceship store to annoy 25,000 angry dinosaurs, but 90 groovy chickens danced with 4,000,000 dead and rotting buffalo dust couches exploded.

I think that that sentence makes much more sense thank you.

[Chasmgoat he/him]

The hot Emperor Buckethead skates around the stone Scadrial spaceship store to annoy 25,000 angry dinosaurs, but 90 groovy chickens danced with 4,000,000 dead and rotting buffalo dust couches imploded.

Edited November 10, 2020 by Chasmgoat

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The hotheaded Emperor Buckethead skates around the stone Scadrial spaceship store to annoy 25,000 angry dinosaurs, but 90 groovy chickens danced with 4,000,000 dead and rotting buffalo dust couches imploded.

[Knight of Iron she/they]

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I find it funny that no one ever changed the word store and that it has remained intact through like 80 posts.

 

Edited November 10, 2020 by Knight of Iron

[Aspiring Writer]

12 minutes ago, Knight of Iron said:

 

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We have bigger thing to worry about

The hotheaded Lord Buckethead skates around the stone Scadrial spaceship store to annoy 25,000 angry dinosaurs, but 90 groovy chickens danced with 4,000,000 dead and rotting buffalo dust couches imploded.

 

[Chasmgoat he/him]

The hotheaded Lord Buckethead skates around the stone Scadrial spaceship spore to annoy 25,000 angry dinosaurs, but 90 groovy chickens danced with 4,000,000 dead and rotting buffalo dust couches imploded.

[Kelsier'sGodComplex she/her]

The hotheaded Lord Buckethead skates around the stone Scadrial spaceship spore to annoy 25,000 angry dinosaurs, but 90 groovy chickens danced with 4,000,000 dead and rotting buffalo skin couches imploded.

[Chasmgoat he/him]

The hotheaded Lord Buckethead skates around the stone Scadrial spaceship spore to annoy 25,000 angry dinosaurs, but 90 groovy chickens danced with 4,000,000 dead and rotting buffalo skin couches imploded.

[Mage he/him]

Hotheaded Lord Buckethead skatesd around the stone Scadrial spaceship spore to annoy 25,000 angry dinosaurs, but 90 groovy chickens danced with 4,000,000 dead and rotting buffalo skin couches imploded.

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Tense. You know.

 

[dannnex male]

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Hotheaded Lord Buckethead skated around the stone Scadrial spaceship spore to annoy 25,000 angry dinosaurs, but 90 groovy chickens danced with 4,000,000 dead nouns, and rotting buffalo skin couches imploded. 

yw, now it makes grammatical sense again. 
Edit: well, I guess it sorta made sense before, if you added a comma/semicolon after ‘Buffalo’
Edit 2: I just realized that I accidentally did the opposite of what’s been happening, I put the sentence in a quote box and my commentary outside of it, but I think this actually makes more sense, so I propose we do it this way. 
Edit 3: I guess it also made sense before if you read ‘dead’ as a noun. Like, ‘the walking dead’

Edited November 10, 2020 by Danex

[+Doomstick he/him]

The can sat on my lap

[Guest Somebody from Scadrial]

1 minute ago, Doomstick said:

The can sat on my lap

The dead can sat on my lap

[Aspiring Writer]

The dead cat sat on my lap.

 

[Guest Somebody from Scadrial]

9 minutes ago, Aspiring Writer said:

The dead cat sat on my lap.

 

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Thank you that was my next change

The dead cat sat horrifyingly on my lap.

[Aspiring Writer]

1 minute ago, Somebody from Sel said:

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Thank you that was my next change

The dead cat sat horrifyingly on my lap.

The dead cat sat horrifyingly on Buckethead's lap.

[Guest Somebody from Scadrial]

Just now, Aspiring Writer said:

The dead cat sat horrifyingly on Buckethead's lap.

The zombie cat sat horrifyingly on Buckethead's lap

[Aspiring Writer]

The zombie cat sat horrifyingly on Lord Buckethead's lap

[Guest Somebody from Scadrial]

Just now, Aspiring Writer said:

The zombie cat sat horrifyingly on Lord Buckethead's lap

The zombie cat sat horrifyingly on Lord Q's lap

[Aspiring Writer]

The zombie cat sat horrifyingly on Lord Q's hat.

[dannnex male]

1 minute ago, Aspiring Writer said:

The zombie cat sat horrifyingly on Lord Q's hat.

The zombie sat horrifyingly on Lord Q’s hat. 

Edited November 10, 2020 by Danex
I know it’s a bit early for a word removal, but the opportunity was too good to pass up.

[Aspiring Writer]

Just now, Danex said:

The zombie sat horrifyingly on Lord Q’s hat. 

The meme sat horrifyingly on Lord Q’s hat.

[dannnex male]

Just now, Aspiring Writer said:

The meme sat horrifyingly on Lord Q’s hat.

The meme died horrifyingly on Lord Q’s hat. 

[Aspiring Writer]

1 minute ago, Danex said:

The meme died horrifyingly on Lord Q’s hat. 

The meme hovered horrifyingly on Lord Q’s hat. 

[dannnex male]

Just now, Aspiring Writer said:

The meme hovered horrifyingly on Lord Q’s hat. 

The meme hovered horrifyingly over Lord Q’s hat.