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Fox stayed by the edges of the group, watching and waiting. She would go where father went, no question about it, but where would he go, that would be the question...

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6 hours ago, Ookla the Channelknight said:

"So... who wants to go on a short side quest to a volcano planet?"

@00kla @Ookla the Grammatical @Nathrangking

5 minutes ago, Ookla the Sly said:

Fox stayed by the edges of the group, watching and waiting. She would go where father went, no question about it, but where would he go, that would be the question...

"If you require help in getting this ash I will help as I can."

Circestran stands by Fox as a guardian spirit. Her power flows around her eager to act, but it holds its place until she sets it loose.

 

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12 minutes ago, Nathrangking said:

"If you require help in getting this ash I will help as I can."

Circestran stands by Fox as a guardian spirit. Her power flows around her eager to act, but it holds its place until she sets it loose.

"That makes one whole person. Plus me."

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On 11/15/2020 at 3:31 PM, Mist said:

As the sun began to rise, tinting the sky with pink, T began to speed up until she tripped, sprawling right across the ground. She lay there for a moment, then slowly rolled over, then sat up. No. That's enough. I don't even know if these are his footprints. She starts trying to stand up, then staggers. "Elementals! At least sprained, if not broken. I'll have to get back to camp."

Ahead of her, Ember slows at the absence of footsteps. Did they just give up, then? He listens for a moment. At T's curse, he wavers, but remains hidden in the trees.

T crawls carefully to a tree, grimacing every time her right foot brushes the ground. She pulls herself up the tree, balancing on her left foot. Fields appear around her right ankle and as a walking stick in her hand. She begins to limp back. If only it weren't so difficult to move yourself on fields. 

 

On 11/16/2020 at 1:08 PM, Ookla the Grammatical said:

Hiiri bit her fingernail. Should she help her? It only took her a second to decide and she rushed to help T. She... might have forgotten to become visible again, though.

"There's no way you're going to get him back without me. Rien can move with the army, he's had plenty of experience with them. If anyone else wants to stay, that's fine. It might - no, it will be dangerous. I can't stall now, but I can when I get there... can I go ahead of everyone else? It might be handy to see if we can see anything."

 

On 11/16/2020 at 6:28 PM, Ookla the Channelknight said:
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Aw thanks! :wub:

 

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Myrkaal buddies :P!

The air amulet brushes T’s skin, and she feels the currents from a presence just in front of her. “Hello?” she said, well aware of her defenselessness. “Who is it? Show yourself.” She brandishes a small blade that appears in her hand at that moment, carefully turning on her left leg to put her back to the tree. After a moment, she remembers the air amulet and sets the wind spinning around her.

Ember, concealed in the trees nearby, hears her speak and prepares for battle. Despite the fact that Tawny could come any moment, he knew he would regret it if anything happened to T. He searched his mind for any traces of Tawny and found nothing. What could have happened?

T felt something stirring at the edge of her perception and immediately withdrew, arming mental blades. She’d had enough of mental invasion for a lifetime. When it remained where it was, she relaxed slightly, still on guard, still splitting her attention between that invisible threat in front of her and the unknown threat just where she could feel it. After a moment, she noticed something. There’s a thread tying me to … could it be … Ager. How? Who? She hardened. Who goes there? Artifex. It sounds like him. It could be him. She wavered, unsure of what to do. How do I know? Your favorite painting. It was one of mine, with red canyons and green trees. It is him. It’s T-...-ara. She drew nearer mentally. T it is, then. Tawny has nearly found you, at least that’s what she told me. T shrank back. Tawny?   Is she near? Are you safe? How did she find me? How did you find me? I … made a trade. You know all those hours you spent at my shop. I occasionally traded some of my energy for yours.   I’m sorry. What?! WHAT?! She took a breath. I see. You seem to have fulfilled your goal, she broadcasted icily. Goodbye. I know how to find you. How could he?! I trusted him, yet he... he... he took advantage of me.

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1 minute ago, Ookla the Mistiosa said:

The air amulet brushes T’s skin, and she feels the currents from a presence just in front of her. “Hello?” she said, well aware of her defenselessness. “Who is it? Show yourself.” She brandishes a small blade that appears in her hand at that moment, carefully turning on her left leg to put her back to the tree. After a moment, she remembers the air amulet and sets the wind spinning around her.

"Sorry," mumbles Hiiri. "I think I forgot to be visible again." She shimmers back into visibility.

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23 minutes ago, Ookla the Grammatical said:

"Sorry," mumbles Hiiri. "I think I forgot to be visible again." She shimmers back into visibility.

T drops her blade, and it fades into the air after falling a foot. "You're fine." She takes a deep breath. "Sorry. You're fine. Thanks for coming after me." She debates about walking back alone, but knows it's a bad idea. "Would you help me get back to the camp?" Inside, she is still bristling. Why would he do that? It didn't hurt, did it? But he broke my trust.

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1 minute ago, Ookla the Mistiosa said:

T drops her blade, and it fades into the air after falling a foot. "You're fine." She takes a deep breath. "Sorry. You're fine. Thanks for coming after me." She debates about walking back alone, but knows it's a bad idea. "Would you help me get back to the camp?" Inside, she is still bristling. Why would he do that? It didn't hurt, did it? But he broke my trust.

"Yeah, sure. That's what I came out for, anyway."

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Wind woke up, he had absolutely no idea what was happening but seemed to have regained his form. For a second he had though he had become physical being. He looked around and located the people he had been with before. "Hello, I am back. What did I miss?"

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1 hour ago, Ookla the Mistiosa said:

The air amulet brushes T’s skin, and she feels the currents from a presence just in front of her. “Hello?” she said, well aware of her defenselessness. “Who is it? Show yourself.” She brandishes a small blade that appears in her hand at that moment, carefully turning on her left leg to put her back to the tree. After a moment, she remembers the air amulet and sets the wind spinning around her.

Ember, concealed in the trees nearby, hears her speak and prepares for battle. Despite the fact that Tawny could come any moment, he knew he would regret it if anything happened to T. He searched his mind for any traces of Tawny and found nothing. What could have happened?

T felt something stirring at the edge of her perception and immediately withdrew, arming mental blades. She’d had enough of mental invasion for a lifetime. When it remained where it was, she relaxed slightly, still on guard, still splitting her attention between that invisible threat in front of her and the unknown threat just where she could feel it. After a moment, she noticed something. There’s a thread tying me to … could it be … Ager. How? Who? She hardened. Who goes there? Artifex. It sounds like him. It could be him. She wavered, unsure of what to do. How do I know? Your favorite painting. It was one of mine, with red canyons and green trees. It is him. It’s T-...-ara. She drew nearer mentally. T it is, then. Tawny has nearly found you, at least that’s what she told me. T shrank back. Tawny?   Is she near? Are you safe? How did she find me? How did you find me? I … made a trade. You know all those hours you spent at my shop. I occasionally traded some of my energy for yours.   I’m sorry. What?! WHAT?! She took a breath. I see. You seem to have fulfilled your goal, she broadcasted icily. Goodbye. I know how to find you. How could he?! I trusted him, yet he... he... he took advantage of me.

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So... do all the Water Sisters want a 101 course on dialogue paragraphing?

@Vapor @Ookla the Grammatical

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2 minutes ago, Vapor said:

I'm pretty sure I know how, but sure whatever.

1 minute ago, Ookla the Grammatical said:

Excuse you, I'm getting better! Also, I fixed my story editing stuff, so whenever you want to do that is fine.

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Nyehehehe. I will not relent.

 

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22 minutes ago, Ookla the Channelknight said:

So... do all the Water Sisters want a 101 course on dialogue paragraphing?

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Do know how to paraphrase dialouge? :thoughtful face:

 

1 hour ago, Ookla the Mistiosa said:

Myrkaal buddies :P!

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Wait, what? :P 

 

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