The Longest Thread (Misadventures)

[xinoehp512 he/him]

X's avatar enjoyed the moment for as long as it lasted.

[AonEne he/him]

Just now, Condensation said:

There was an extra comma and bad grammar in the sentence that transformed them into hedgehogs, so it was not actually permanent.

Both of those commas were needed since the sentence was written that way, I believe.

[Condensation she/her]

No, it should have been *Unfortunately, the magical ability of the moment was to permanently transform them into hedgehogs.

2 minutes ago, xinoehp512 said:

X's avatar enjoyed the moment for as long as it lasted.

Melody realized that she couldn't hold X's avatar's hand as a hedgehog. That was the last straw for her, and she decided to figure out how to be human again.

[xinoehp512 he/him]

It was simple.

[Condensation she/her]

All they had to do was wait for the sun to go down, and once it had they would be humans again.

[+Ark1002]

But whenever the sun rose, they would return to their hedgehog form.

[AonEne he/him]

21 minutes ago, Condensation said:

No, it should have been *Unfortunately, the magical ability of the moment was to permanently transform them into hedgehogs.

That would have worked better, yeah, but the other way wasn't incorrect; just another way of writing it.

[+Ark1002]

Ahhh intimidating blue ene

[xinoehp512 he/him]

Only for the next day, though. After that, they'd remain human. Because more would be just silly.

[Condensation she/her]

Just now, xinoehp512 said:

Only for the next day, though. After that, they'd remain human. Because more would be just silly.

Thank you. I don't think I could cope with being a hedgehog. 

Melody decided to try to enjoy her two days as a hedgehog. "Well, what do hedgehogs usually do?"

[xinoehp512 he/him]

X's avatar wasn't sure.

[+Doomstick he/him]

"poke people"

[Condensation she/her]

Said another hedgehog, who had waddled up behind them. "I take it you guys are new? I got transformed by the sun too, but this is my last day. I really like to poke people. I'm Treble, by the way."

[+Doomstick he/him]

Alto walked up, but he played viola and was always roasted

[xinoehp512 he/him]

With sick burns.

[Jaywalk he/him]

He had a fever most of the time.

[Condensation she/her]

Treble looked around. "Huh. You guys have narrators?"

[xinoehp512 he/him]

"It is the way of reality," said X's avatar.

[Condensation she/her]

"Well, that's handy. I don't have one."

[xinoehp512 he/him]

"Oh, I'm sure you do," replied X's avatar. "You just don't know about it yet."

[Ashbringer he/him]

Schrodinger confirmed X's Avatar's statement.

[Condensation she/her]

"Really? Then why don't I ever hear them?"

Melody started to walk around.

[xinoehp512 he/him]

"They don't always talk to people," explained X's avatar.

[Condensation she/her]

"Oh. Wait, where'd your friend go?"

Melody had wandered off.

[+Doomstick he/him]

then she wandered on