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  1. Aeoryi
    Your army gets blackmailed into giving the sandwich to me, with help of Yelig-nar.
  2. Aeoryi
    "You run away from others. Running is bad. It attracts Shadewraiths."
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    2130 Voidspren arrive on mars
  4. Aeoryi
    2128- The shard of time gets eaten and becomes the splinters of time, or timespren.
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    Unfortunately You work for me now and so the sandwich makes its way into my hands.
  6. Aeoryi
    The What? 'No. This man is running." Rirrom used Plot development to locate him. "Come back, thou fool!"
  7. Aeoryi
    I take the sandwich since you aren't listening.
  8. Aeoryi
    I fine. You forced my hand. Blackmail you and force you to give the sandwich to me.
  9. Aeoryi
    You are forced to give me the sandwich. I have it now.
  10. Aeoryi
    Did you not see his SU?
  11. Aeoryi
    Rirrom steps up, and reverses the pain, causing A lobster to feel all the pain again, but ultimately it heals him.
  12. Aeoryi
    Ignoring mentions by @Ancient Elantrian
  13. Aeoryi
    "Are you sure?"
  14. Aeoryi
    Voices of Feelings by Phyrnna.
  15. Aeoryi
    Incorrect for both. 1. This character is considered annoying by their peers. 2. This character is in two Cosmere books. 3. This character is on Roshar
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    Act 1 Stats (planned): Fenrin Chapters: 7 - Featuring most cool plot points. This is the most intresting part of Act 1 imo. Nymphis Chapters: 7 - Featuring iconic "man dies from not dry fish" scenes Piscies Chapters: 6 - Featuring some scenes that have bad pacing!
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    Okay so I am back and the outlining has been done. Just some general things I have noticed: Splitting views allows for less major plot-points. My current King's Folly proto-content is enough for the Fenrin viewpoints up until act 4 or so. Desolation will be a big bad guy. Stellarknights will just have to not be involved. Kanil shall be cut. He doesn't have the same presence as Cinder with Piscies or Strohger with Nymphis. Desolation shall appear in Fenrin scenes in act 1, Piscies scenes in act 2, and Nymphis scenes in act 3. Act 4 he will have his presence known. There is a setup for at least one other book at the end of the story. The king will play more of a role in the second book, if it ever exists. Mutables shall be adressed there. Elsepower will be as well. If it ever exists, the third book will explain gods, demons, the Ethercosm, and Voices. The third book will feature Desolation as the main enemy. And so now I can start writing. I'm just worried that it will be too short, especially between act 3 and 4. More events need to happen there, or so I think. Maybe a fight scene or something. Nymphis and Piscies will be the highlight of act 3, Piscies and Nymphis will be the highlight of act 2, and Fenrin and Nymphis will be the highlight of act 1. Act 4 will probably have highlight on Piscies and Fenrin. Desolation needs more connection to everything. The prologue will probably be Breachlight invasion and Desolation coming over.
  18. Aeoryi
    My favorite song is playing quiet down. MAN IT IS SOOO GOOOD
  19. Aeoryi
    I think it may be time to start writing the ending scenes soon. Best to have a target to aim at, if you know what I mean. So far my ideas basically consist of two books. One against all of the Voices, one against one Voice. But I really like the idea of people who are oblivious that they are using the enemy to do everything. Desolation, Schism, and a certain god are the planned bad guys. Desolation will be a tough one to kill, and Schism will be even more difficult. But I plan for the Ethercosm, Schism, and Gods/demons to be big plotpoints. Time to write I guess.
  20. Aeoryi
    I have a bucketlist: Fix Fenrin's plotline. For those who don't know, Fenrin was the main character's name in The King's Folly (Proto version). His whole plot basically went out the window after the heavens part and then, chapter 10. Northernmast was the correct place to stop, or so I feel. The water demon thing was good, but the earth demon part felt unnecessary. Both will probably stay in. 2. Fix Piscies' plotline. Piscies is the best character in terms of being memorable, but the current idea for an arc does injustice to her. More stuff with the Ethercosm and Schism should be in the plot, and it should be a driving factor behind her actions. 3. Nymphis needs something to do after he leaves lysis. I have some ideas of how Desolation could be behind this as a bad guy, but he would need far more foreshadowing. 4. Fourth powers need to be removed or redone. I like the idea behind them, but the stellarknights will need to be less powerful. 5. The king needs to play a much better role in this. This will probably be titled The King's Folly, so it needs to have the king, the man of memes, actually not die by the 5th chapter. 6. Prologue needs to be done. I might use the VoF prologue for this (It would work a whole lot better if we have Desolation as the bad guy). Prologue viewpoint is currently set to be Stellarknight Aeolia, but it would need more connection to the rest of the world. 7. Ending sequences need to be done.
  21. Aeoryi
    intellegent conversation happening here guys
  22. Aeoryi
    Maybe we could have minor side characters all be one or two characters, (Since there are a lot) and that would help tidy the plot up a bit.
  23. Aeoryi
    Rirrom looked up at the sky, then said, "I *Could* make the planets and all that go back, if you told me more about this ritual"
  24. Aeoryi
    Rirrom runs up to the dude. "Who are you?"
  25. Aeoryi
    We would only snip a certain segment
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