Aeoryi

Retribution

Okay so I should probably share location details. THE WESTERN EMPIRE: Home to some of the greatest technological inventions, it was a former wasteland that utilized its waste. As a temperate location, it doesn't really deal with many things, due to a voice called Benevolence which controls nearly all tempest here. This voice is also called The Weather, and is refered to as a good. General westen beliefs outline a myth that god rely on the people to believe in them to recieve power. The western empire is above sea level, and is seperated by mountains on all sides. on the very western edges of the empire there is shallow, warm waters. Farther out it becomes colder, and massive trenches in the ocean start to appear. Mining islands claimed by the western empire are out here, and they provide a major source of income for the empire. The empire doesn't have great natural resources, but there are tons of metal and wood present there. The majority of the west is a prairie. The Empire functions off of the Hyperfluid, that seeps in through the many scattered Otherside rifts. They use the rifts that were already present on the land as an energy source, and with their mastery over Metaluna, can harness and transport it. They have Mutable Users (of namely winter) occassionally make an intentional rift. The technology powered by the reality tears includes Lights, heating, refridgeration, communication, and even teleportation (very very rare). The Western Empire's defences consist of mutable users and Hyperfluid weaponary. The weaponary is still in proto-stage so it hasn't been implemented, but the mutable users can create intentional rifts to discourage farther advances. CENTRAL KINGDOM: The central kingdom, ruled by the King, is not quite as technologically advanced as everywhere else. The king has a laughable control over the inhabitants, and most places are still in development because of lack of Cohesion. The central kingdom tends to ignore Ithryl and Vandrisil. They do not know much about Lysis. Most of the Central Kingdom is located near sea level, leaving it potentially endangered by flooding. However, the weather provide kindhearted skies and moderate temperatures. The central kingdom does not have any rifts or hyperfluid, but has an Abundance of demons instead. The trade in the central kingdom is the biggest source of income. Natural resources are plentiful and are traded with the West. The primary trade routes are through a mountain pass called the Channel. The other trade route is to go around the mountains from the Eastern ocean and head to northernmast. Both have pros and cons. Demons are everywhere in the Central kingdom. Ice demons in the north, earth and metal demons below, air demons above, fire demons to the south and Efridit, the water demon, to the east. These demons do nothing but scheme unless provoked, and are normally stopped by the Weather befor ethey can cause greif to many. The central kingdom gets flooded by Efridit in Fenrin's 4th chapter. ITHRYL: A northern kingdom bordered by mountains to the south and oceans all around. The ethercosm is present there, and manipulates events greatly. The Ethercosm does help trace in defending against Otherside. There are few demons in Ithryl but they are more potent. The stellarknights bring order to Ithryl. Ithryl has many unique things but many are Spoilers so they will not be mentioned. LYSIS: A remote southern island that holds many valuable rewards but many harsh tests. Literally anything else is a spoiler. VANDRISIL: A kingdom to the south that acts as a major port city to everyone. The weather has influence there. Demons are on good terms with people there. Voices are present there.

The blade would likely appear before both of them came back (remember desolation didn't exist until Falvan accepted the offer) waiting for a foolish person to accept the curse on it again. Also, even if Hacob had the blade, since Desolation isn't a narrator, he isn't specially affected by it. A narrator weilding a narrator-killing blade would probably find it easier to kill themselves rather than kill a binary fissioning goop. Of course, when Desolation kills some narrator with the blade and gains their powers, you could use the blade to steal them back from desolation.

Character motivations are really hard for me. I don't know why, but I find it really dificult to make a proactive character. Fenrin doesn't really need motives. He has a quest, and he will follow through with it. He has one major desicion and that one is very justified. Piscies' motives are often short-lived or spontanous, which partially comes from her being a child. When she grows up, she will start taking more responsible routes. Nymphis' motives are the hardest to get right. He likes to hold grudges, since that's what motivates him to get off of lysis. After he arrives at the Southern kingdoms, he has a whole lot of choices, which will be really hard to write. Desolation (The planned bad guy) has very strange motives. His idea is to ruin the world, but that seems way too one dimensional. Maybe influence will come into this. Also, I've scrapped fourth magic systems. Only the stellarknights and select few will have access to them.

Lasting integrity falls to the Voidspren and Timespren alliance, and they redecorate it into Laughable integrity. Re-shephir joins the battle for shadesmar. 2143

Hacob would be back, yes, but desolation will definitely try to kill him with Ore din aerie first, while he's still off guard. Resolution is technecially part of Desolation and so she would probably give Foreshadowing to him (unwillingly).

The is not. Fabrial clocks use Logicspren, so that is the closest thing to timespren I guess. 2141- Timespren ally with the voidspren (and Yelig-nar) and decide to conquer shadesmar.

uh... no?¿? It will return on page 2500. mark my words. Like the resolution-kind??

No u Did not see any notification... hehehe

A figure of white flowing liquid arose from the streets of the fast growing empire, and introduced herself as Resolution to uncle brandy. She held the Plotblade Foreshadowing but did not take a offensive stance. "What's this?"

Desolation may or may not be one of my best characters buuuuuttttt... Falvan can certainly sense where the blade is. Falvan could try summoning it but Desolation would probably appear instead.

Normally does not mean always. Also orangoose is kinda 1 word spam so try to avoid posts only consisting of @That Dude

It most certainly would. Falvan would probably be able to summon it. Desolation WILL follow, but he doesn't know that. "Falvan, you could summon Ore din Aerie Nohr Maul Blade, it would work. And if desolation truely is destroyed, then..." Rirrom shook his head. "But we should help with the ritual. There is no reason not to, since we disrupted this poor lad's ritual."

"This is ignorant. This is what the Enemy Wants. Maybe we should prepare, but still live, should we want to live went He arrives?"

"Falvan, what are you asking? People will bring back Desolation, Subversion is living proof of that. A foolish Narrator may one day bring back Desolation."

"Have you seen the future? It is uncertain what will happen. It could be tens of pages, or even 5."

"Desolation will return with the Ore Din Aerie Nohr Maul blade and he will hunt narrators. And we will not have Suddenly, Pineapples to stop him."

Rirrom brings him back by Reversing everything. He drew his Plotblade and pointed it at the Witherwraith "What did you say about Desolation? You know where he is?"

"You're a Shadewraith? Do you know where Desolation is?"

i cut you open from the outside and take the sandwich

"And?" "Why is that?"

"No. They don't eat Witherwraiths either

I eat you and obtain the sandwich

"Hunger."

"Shadewraiths, they kill all people. Even you."