Aspiring Writer

Chapter 16 of SotU is released, and uh, @Somebody from Sel and everyone else that reads them, can you please leave your thoughts on the chapters, even if it's to say 'yep' or 'nope'? I kinda want some feedback here and not getting much. It like when you push on a large box expecting it to be heavy when it's empty and you use way too much strength and throw it across the room, it feels weird.