I like it, but I'm not 100% sold on the ideals. Quoting the Coppermind,
I don't exactly see how "I will fight for others not for myself," fits with that theme. I'm not saying that the Coppermind is correct, but the Ideal put out here doesn't seem right to me. Brandon Sanderson himself said (at The Ten Orders of Knights Radiant | Brandon Sanderson) that the Oaths were themed towards responsibility and control. I feel like it can still follow the trend(ish) of
but it just doesn't have the right Words.
Frankly, I have no idea what we should have the Oaths for the Releasers be, I just don't think that it sounds right. I'm not going to attempt to make better Ideals, because I'll just make a fool of myself.
However, I do think that the Ideals should be more along the lines of, "I will better myself," or something like that.
Great theory, though!
P.S. Call us Releasers, if you please.