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ntroduce yourself! 10 17th Shard Discussion 10 Tech Support 10 The Coppermind Wiki 10 General Brandon Discussion 10 Events and Signings 10 Interview Database 10 Cosmere Theories 10 Stormlight Archive 11 (GREEN, +1) Mistborn 10 Elantris and Emperor's Soul 10 Warbreaker 10 Cosmere Short Stories 10 The Reckoners 10 (includes both Firefight and Calamity boards) The Rithmatist 10 Alcatraz 10 Other Stories 10 (includes Skin Deep board) The Wheel of Time 10 Writing Excuses 10 Reading Excuses 11 TWG Archive 10 General Discussion 10 AMAs 6 Entertainment Discussion 10 Tech Discussion Creator's Corner 10 (includes Sanderson Fan Fiction board) Role Playing 10 (includes Inactive RPs) Mistborn: The Inquisition 10 Reckoners RPG 10 Social Groups, Clans, and Guilds 9

First off the "Old lady" was awesome. You magic is really interesting, and I feel like you handed the learning curve well. The blocking in the fight could be a little clearer. The fire in the room came out of nowhere to me, as I was like he just drained the fire. On further reflection I realized that Alduin was stalling by draining the torches but that didn't come to me until I though back on the whole fight. Some minor points that I feel obligated to mention. Throwing a knife. I own throwing knives and while i cant hit anything with them I now people who can pick them up and hit the target in a few tries. That being said, it is hard to hit a moving target with significant penetration with an balanced knife at an unknown distance especial under pressure. Just bear in mind that throw would be very hard to make. Then again it was cool so realism doesn't bother me to much on it. Fire swords. I love these, I think they are awesome. However, fire is not a solid and has no significant mass. So a sword of fire would in fact pass through a blade rather then stop on contact with it (at least that is my understanding). But its magic so I can get on board with it . Just some food for thought. I am interested to see what happens next.

I don't have much to add. I liked concept of the tunnels being used to store Dracula coffin and how it is now a monster refugee camp. Make me wonder about why are there refugee monsters all of a sudden. At the end of the first scene when Renfield made his move I was like "Oh, its going down now." The sentence implied to me that something happened off-screen. However, the next scene it feels like his move was to walk away. Bannister and Renfield felt like they were acting out of character to me. Based on the earilier chapter i would not think Bannister would help Renfield or that Renfield would even go to him for help. . The only reason I can see is that maybe the council ordered Bannisters to do it. He didn't seem like he would help Renfield out of the goodness of his heart. I look forward to the next one.

That was defiantly interesting. I accomplished nothing sine the last three hours. I concur bout the refresh

yea i think so. Its over

Well Gargolye you were right about MAD

Me and TC ninja'd Should be After me and TC 4 Sanderson Elimination 2 Stormlight Archive

6 Sanderson Elimination 1 Stormlight Archive

6 Sanderson Elimination 4 Stormlight Archive

Are we good to go. Robinski, we put up a good fight

Here we go again!

3 Reading Excuses 5 Sanderson Elimination 6 Stormlight Archive 0 Mistborn Combined with Rob its 4 Reading Excuses 5 Sanderson Elimination 4 Stormlight Archive 0 Mistborn Then TC to 2 Reading Excuses 5 Sanderson Elimination 5 Stormlight Archive 0 Mistborn

Shall we proceed?

you cant change votes can you?

6 Reading Excuses 4 Sanderson Elimination 6 Stormlight Archive 1 Mistborn Should be fixed Edit to Haels above

Hael you lost mine

9 Reading Excuses 3 Sanderson Elimination 6 Stormlight Archive 2 Mistborn Edit fixed ninja of TC and rob

agreed: Next play 11 Reading Excuses 3 Sanderson Elimination 4 Stormlight Archive 6 Mistborn

I got over excited

i think mine is fixed. Confimr

11 Reading Excuses 2 Sanderson Elimination 8 Stormlight Archive 6 Mistborn Edit: it happened again didnt it

Robinski I think were in trouble

I belive it should be: 13 Reading Excuses 2 Sanderson Elimination 9 Stormlight Archive 6 Mistborn With me then Lindel as the last two to play Robinski right

13 Reading Excuses 4 Sanderson Elimination 9 Stormlight Archive 6 Mistborn Feels like a standoff Edit something went wrong