The Honor Spren

The power went out during church today. Nothing like hymns in the dark to brighten your mood.

It's so good!! ANOTHER! please.

Oooh! This is exciting!!!

No More.

Ha. My phone was dropped into a toilet in the process of flushing. Yaaaay. At least the water was clean when it fell . . . And I was able to grab it before it was flushed down . . . And it was put into rice quickly . . . I hope it works when it comes back out.

Mistrunner, your resolution is to . . . Yeah, I can't think of anything. I'll just nag you and say that your resolution is to finish that reckoners post with me. Stormgate, you are one of those Roman candles that look small but make a huge explosion. (Plus, the package always says not to hold them, yet everyone holds them and pretends that it's a wand anyway.)

You see, I would sleep, but I just discovered Thomas Sanders on YouTube, and I have to watch them all. http://youtu.be/5lPMO9F1M98

There once was a TwighlyghtSansSparkles, Whose name would not decently rhyme. With ponies and pugs, She gave everyone hugs, And always was having Funtimes.

Okay Allomancy, I am not a great writer, but I like to consider myself a great reader. I have multiple critiques, but I mean them in the best way possible. I would want to know more about her life before being chosen. Why does she go to all these meetings? What's her family like? What sort of qualities are looked for in a representative? Does she have to submit something to get in? Showing some scenes like that could show why she wants to leave so badly. Minor thing: it might be a good idea to un-italicize that first train of thought. It would feel a little more natural to have it as part of the narrative, then as conscious thought. The whole thing feels a little bit rushed, but then again, I'm used to huge Stormlight sized books. It's probably fine, but you might want to consider drawing it out a little. Again, I don't know much, and it's your own thing. My advice might be crem, anyway. (Plus I'm super jealous! I've had similar ideas for a story, and you did it way better!)

Ooh! I know! Just be underage+Mormon, and don't drink any at all! Does miracles for me! That might not work for you guys, though . . .

I like that. I think I'll actually stick to that one.Your resolution is to make me some armor.

I warned you about that spinning wheel! We told you again and again no to touch that spindle, but nooo, you go and touch it anyway!

And here I am with knowing exactly how my characters look and a few minor quirks of their's, but no idea what their personalities are like, how to make them interesting, or what kind of story they'll be in, in the first place.

Thanks! It actually didn't change mine too much, because I always fall asleep at 1am anyway . . . I really should change that, I have towake up at 5 for early morning seminary.

I did have the sneaking suspicion . . .

Fun fact: the book, Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them, lists Dodos as a bird that is not extinct, but has the ability to teleport when it feels it is in danger. This lead to the muggles thinking it was extinct and made them set up some laws to make sure it never happens again. The wizarding community feels no need to enlighten them about the situation.

I took up Zentangling again! (If you don't know what that is, it's pretty much glorified doodling) I WILL FILL THE WHOLE PAGE.

I can see what you guys are saying with the popularity issues. But I think JKR did a very good job at portraying how fickle fame is. I also have been realizing that I am more accepting when it comes to fiction characters, than most people. Not sure why exactly.

Don't trust their cute and fluffy exterior, they're hiding a poison underneath. Love is like a warm blanket.

We had that too! Martinelli's rules!

The good thing about New Year's is that I can stay up late and it won't look weird when I sleep in, because everyone else is sleeping in too!

It was half dare, half curiosity, half not knowing anything about marmite, and half the unablity for me to do math while summarizing actions . . .

I can fix it!

Chopping them up would make you cry. (You aren't the only one who can be morbid) Success is like a painting.