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Anybody want to watch a movie this weekend? I'm going to be pretty stressed out after this week, so it might be good for me to relax for a bit.
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Thanks! I'm going to start chapter two soon, but I don't know when I'll get to it with finals and all that coming up. It will be from a different viewpoint, a character who is able to make use of the Cards. I'll explain how they work a bit more in that chapter. Glad you liked it, and thanks for reading!
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This isn't very good at all, but I just finished the first chapter of a project I'm working on. I'd love to see what you think! This is my first time trying something like this, so it is pretty bad, but I hope that you at least find it interesting! https://docs.google.com/document/d/1T0Urf9YQ8YyVCLgqpe0u3RCnwBT729gZwtHL6IbmkDE/edit
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Which interlude characters will be important to the story?
Patar replied to Toaster Retribution's topic in Stormlight Archive
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I have a math exam in less than 12 hours. I really should start studying, but I just... don't wanna.
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Fixed! Sorry about that, I don't know why it was all in bold. Let me know if it is still to large.
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Whoops, sorry about that. I can't change it right now, but I'll let you know when I do.
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And done! I just started the new thread, titled The Osterix Chronicles. Hope you all enjoy!
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Hey everyone! I just finished writing the first chapter for my project The Osterix Chronicles. I thought it might be fun to share it with you all! Now before you read, a word of warning: This isn't very good. At all. This is my first time trying something like this, so I know that I have loads of learning I have to do. But everyone has to start somewhere, right? Feel free to share any comments that you have! Constructive criticism is always welcome. I do hope that you guys at least find the concept interesting. I also don't know when the next chapter will be done. I'm having less and less free time with finals week coming up, and I've put off a bunch of projects that I shouldn't have. Hope you guys enjoy! https://docs.google.com/document/d/1T0Urf9YQ8YyVCLgqpe0u3RCnwBT729gZwtHL6IbmkDE
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Alright, I'll do that. Another dumb question: If I post the link as a Google Doc, will other people be able to edit it? Sorry for my lack of knowledge when it comes to this kind of stuff
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Dumb question: I just finished the first chapter of a story I'm currently writing. It isn't very good, but I would like to see if you all thought it was at least interesting. Should I put a link to it here, or should I do it in the creation thread? I might not be able to post it for a little bit, I have a class soon. Thanks in advance!
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So I had to do an assignment for my art class that was a photograph of items that represented things that were close to my heart. I know it's a pretty crappy picture, but oh well. It's more about explaining how and why each item is important to me. Apologies for the poor quality of the picture.
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Love the art style, very mysterious and foreboding.
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I wouldn't be against it. I'm not sure if I will have plans or not, but I'll try and make it! Any ideas for movies?
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I had hoped that someone would recognize who this was.
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Don't get me wrong, I love my family. But having to deal with them nonstop for the next few days makes me very happy that dogs exist.
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So I just finished it. Overall, I really enjoyed it. I'll list out a few of my pros and cons. This will be spoiler free by the way. Pros: A great lead character. I really enjoyed Jessica as a character. She was different from the thoughtful, soft-spoken Matt Murdock, but this isn't a bad thing. She was broken. She was willing to do whatever it took to get to the man who ruined her life. She was rash, impulsive, and as Luke said, a mess of a woman, but she had a soft side at the same time (when it came to Trish). Kilgrave. Oh my god I loved Kilgrave. If it wasn't for him, this show would not have been as good as it was. He was creepy and downright evil. In my opinion, he was a much more interesting and entertaining villain than Wilson Fisk was. Despite his somewhat laid-back mannerisms, he carried a sense of dread alongside him wherever he went. His powers were terrifying, and it showed. David Tennant killed it. Episode Eight. Not going to describe exactly what went on in this episode, but it was by far my favorite. I'm not even sure why, it just did something for me. Cons: The Side Characters. With the exception of Malcolm and Trish, I absolutely hated the side characters. The main target of my rage was Simpson. I couldn't stand Simpson. He was just... so dumb. Any scene with him was just awful. I hated the entire ordeal with Hogarth. I wasn't a huge fan of Hope or Clemmons either. I'll exclude Luke Cage since he has his own show and hasn't really had his chance to shine yet. Conversely, I really enjoyed Malcolm and Trish. The Ending. Once again, not going to describe what happened, but it was not up to par with how good the other episodes were. The Fight Scenes. This has been discussed already, so I feel no need to go into detail with them. They were pretty bad. Didn't feel connected to the rest of the MCU. I put this one last because it didn't affect the quality of the show. Now I'm not implying that I want a Nick Fury cameo, but some more references would be nice. I mean when they did make references, they said "The big green guy" or "The Flag-Waver." Are they afraid to say their names? Their city was just attacked by aliens, you'd think it would be a bigger deal. They didn't even reference what happened in the rest of Hell's Kitchen! The Man in the Mask was all over the newspapers, and not one mention of him? Wilson Fisk, a huge figurehead, never discussed. Yes, a side character did show up and make some vague references to Daredevil, but it doesn't feel like a connected universe when the events that took place a few blocks down the road are not even discussed. Overall though, I did enjoy the show. The ending was a letdown, but the journey was a ton of fun. 7.5/10.
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I have to bring it up. Team Iron Man or Team Cap?
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I was unaware of the existence of xkcd until now. Now I've been browsing these comics instead of reading something for school. This one is my favorite so far: I think this accurately displays what would happen should Skynet actually exist.
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Just got out of school for Thanksgiving Break, and I was burned out. To reward ourselves for all the hard work we may or may not have put into our first semester, myself and some guys on my hall decided to go on a camping trip. It was cold, it was windy, and a rock jutted into my hip all night, but it was worth it in the end. You can't beat waking up to that.
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Seen the first 5 episodes so far, and I'm loving it. Kilgrave is absolutely brilliant. Well he isn't brilliant, cause he is evil and all, but he is tremendous fun to watch. After I finish reading something for school I'll probably watch a bit more. Crossing my fingers for a Daredevil/Matt Murdock cameo or reference, but I don't know if it will happen since the show should focus on Jessica. Really looking forward to continuing it!
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This show and Fallout 4 are the two main reasons I'm looking forward to going home for Thanksgiving break. Oh, and I suppose seeing my family again too.
