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1 hour ago, AonEne said:

Ene frowned. Something happened but she doesn’t remember what? Sounds like a classic case of Backstory to me. Before she could comment on it, Rekaerb muttered a warning, and she followed his eyes up to a withergeist. “Okay, I’m good to go, then,” she agreed, standing up. “Are you transporting us or am I?” 

@xinoehp512 

"I'll do it," said Rekaerb, splitting himself into three.

Posted (edited)
16 hours ago, Emi said:

"I'm not sure. But who knows exactly? For now, I know that I like dragons and I just found out, that I can teleport." She stopped for a moment. "You know who are Knights Radiant?" asked Emi.

The girl did not move. “Knights... what?” A sudden bout of nausea gripped her, and she grabbed her head as the world started spinning, spinning. It was going too fast, and she was going too slow, and there were faces, all spinning around and watching, and they were real, they were real, they were real.

She was sitting in the dirt, knees against her chin. Her hands were tangled in her hair, and her arms shook.

Eventually, her breaths slowed, and she loosened her grip. She allowed her hands to fall to her sides. She stood up and looked past the other girl, toward the ruined building.

“Why did you come?”

@Emi

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49 minutes ago, The Awakened Salad said:

The girl did not move. “Knights... what?” A sudden bout of nausea gripped her, and she grabbed her head as the world started spinning, spinning. It was going too fast, and she was going too slow, and there were faces, all spinning around and watching, and they were real, they were real, they were real.

She was sitting in the dirt, knees against her chin. Her hands were tangled in her hair, and her arms shook.

Eventually, her breaths slowed, and she loosened her grip. She allowed her hands to fall to her sides. She stood up and looked past the other girl, toward the ruined building.

“Why did you come?”

@Emi

"Well, I didn't knew where I was teleporting, but isn't that good? I can help you."

Emi stared stared at the ruined building, but decided to not talk about it as it could be a hard topic tor the stranger. Intead of that, she smiled to the girl, trying to make her better. She wondered if this girl also can teleport. If yes, she could leave her this placee whenever she wanted to, so Emi thought that she should be careful. If the girl would find her annoing or dangerous, she could teleport somewhere into an unsafe place.

"Knights Radiant are an ancient organization, which unites people with powers, like mine".

She continued smiling.

@The Awakened Salad

Posted
24 minutes ago, Emi said:

"Well, I didn't knew where I was teleporting, but isn't that good? I can help you."

Emi stared stared at the ruined building, but decided to not talk about it as it could be a hard topic tor the stranger. Intead of that, she smiled to the girl, trying to make her better. She wondered if this girl also can teleport. If yes, she could leave her this placee whenever she wanted to, so Emi thought that she should be careful. If the girl would find her annoing or dangerous, she could teleport somewhere into an unsafe place.

"Knights Radiant are an ancient organization, which unites people with powers, like mine".

She continued smiling.

@The Awakened Salad

“You... want to help me?” The girl looked down at her hands. “I don’t know who I am...” 

She winced as another onset of nausea came, but it passed. “You said... you’re a Knights Radiant? Could I be like you, then?” 

@Emi

Posted
17 minutes ago, The Awakened Salad said:

“You... want to help me?” The girl looked down at her hands. “I don’t know who I am...” 

She winced as another onset of nausea came, but it passed. “You said... you’re a Knights Radiant? Could I be like you, then?” 

@Emi

"Well, I don't really know what are the rules here. Normally, you need to have spren, a small thing, often similar to a spirit, flying next to you, but I didn't saw anything like that yet". She looked up at the sun, suddenly realizing this fact. But this world had weird rules. 

"But maybe, we can find it out together?"

@The Awakened Salad

Posted
4 hours ago, xinoehp512 said:

"I'll do it," said Rekaerb, splitting himself into three.

Truth allows one of the Rekaerbs to take his hand.

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Storm this storming time difference.

 

Posted
4 hours ago, Emi said:

"Well, I don't really know what are the rules here. Normally, you need to have spren, a small thing, often similar to a spirit, flying next to you, but I didn't saw anything like that yet". She looked up at the sun, suddenly realizing this fact. But this world had weird rules. 

"But maybe, we can find it out together?"

@The Awakened Salad

“A spirit...” the girl frowned. “I don’t believe I have one.” She began searching around in the grass, pushing aside tall reeds and peering through the gaps. Finding nothing, she continued to search, wandering behind the other girl as if she could be hiding something behind her back. 

“Where is your spirit? May I see it?”

@Emi

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"Well... my spirit didn't teleported with me. I don't know why, maybe it's because all of them live in a different dimension" Emi thought for a moment. "Maybe your didn't either?" She said partially to comfort the girl and partially because it could be truth

@The Awakened Salad

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1 hour ago, Emi said:

"Well... my spirit didn't teleported with me. I don't know why, maybe it's because all of them live in a different dimension" Emi thought for a moment. "Maybe your didn't either?" She said partially to comfort the girl and partially because it could be truth

“But I... I woke up here. I wasn’t anywhere else before here.” She shook her head. “I suppose I’m not like you after all.” That second admission hurt, but not nearly as much as the first. It had been nice, to be distracted for a time. To forget the current situation by playing pretend. But reality has a way of weaving its tendrils into all things, making cracks in the dreams we so carefully construct. 

“I just woke up here.” The girl’s eyes took on a frenzied motion. They shifted from side to side, unable to focus. “I must be a newborn. This is how people enter the world, yes? You’re here to take me to the others. Wait, no. That sounds like an afterlife.” She gripped the shoulders of the other girl. “Am I dead then? Is that why I’m here? Why I can think and feel and speak but I don’t know who I am? Why do I know how to speak to you, but I don’t know my own name? How do I—”

She cut off abruptly, and her eyes refocused on the other girl’s face. As she did so, she thought she heard a far-off voice. Her fingers uncurled from their position and she took a few steps back. She stood there for a moment, like a skittish animal deciding whether or not to flee. Then she ran back toward the building.

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Apologies for another longish post :ph34r:

 

Posted
9 hours ago, Spren of Kindness said:

Kindness smiles.  "A quest?  Quests are awesome!"

Vapor looked around. "Are we all in agreement?"

Posted
9 minutes ago, Vapor said:

Vapor looked around. "Are we all in agreement?"

"I suppose we are. I offer my safe houses and supplies therein to this endeavor."

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Vapor grabbed her small bag. "Well, I'm leaving. We need to hurry." She lashed onto the sky and flew away.

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1 hour ago, The Awakened Salad said:

“But I... I woke up here. I wasn’t anywhere else before here.” She shook her head. “I suppose I’m not like you after all.” That second admission hurt, but not nearly as much as the first. It had been nice, to be distracted for a time. To forget the current situation by playing pretend. But reality has a way of weaving its tendrils into all things, making cracks in the dreams we so carefully construct. 

“I just woke up here.” The girl’s eyes took on a frenzied motion. They shifted from side to side, unable to focus. “I must be a newborn. This is how people enter the world, yes? You’re here to take me to the others. Wait, no. That sounds like an afterlife.” She gripped the shoulders of the other girl. “Am I dead then? Is that why I’m here? Why I can think and feel and speak but I don’t know who I am? Why do I know how to speak to you, but I don’t know my own name? How do I—”

She cut off abruptly, and her eyes refocused on the other girl’s face. As she did so, she thought she heard a far-off voice. Her fingers uncurled from their position and she took a few steps back. She stood there for a moment, like a skittish animal deciding whether or not to flee. Then she ran back toward the building.

 

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No worries. We wouldn't like Sanderson if we wouldn't like looooong posts:P

Mine came out quite ong too:ph34r:

"I don't think you're dead. If you would I would be too and I feel quite alive. In addition everyone decribes afterlife as a place where you don't feel pain" Emi pinched herself and winced. "Yeah, that's definately not afterlife, unless the whole human race was wrong. Even if it would be so, I don't think that we are dead... Maybe you lost your memory? This whole world seems like a silly god or some other powerful creature would play with us some storming game." 

When she said that she realized it didn't sound very comforting. "Well, we can find this creature whoever this is and ask if he'll give you back your memory. Or maybe no. I mean, how possible is this? It may be soething absolutely different." She stopped for a moment and sat down next to the girl

When Emi was looking at the girl, she realized that she didn't introduce herself. "Well, I forgot to tell you my name. I'm Emily, but you can call me Emi. I guess that you don't have one. Or even if you have, you don't remember it. Well, it's a good start to find out who you are. Maybe we'll think of your name together?"

She looked at the girl to see how she will react on her rush of words.

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Edit: I checked, mine is 221 words. Now I'm only worried how will I come back to writing max.190 for FCE:ph34r:

 

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Posted
23 minutes ago, Vapor said:

Vapor grabbed her small bag. "Well, I'm leaving. We need to hurry." She lashed onto the sky and flew away.

13 minutes ago, Spren of Kindness said:

Kindness follows her.

The winds rise and carry me after them.

 

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An hour later, Vapor stopped for a break. "Where's your closest safe house? I don't have enough food in my bag for more than a meal." She looked in her bag and pulled out a small bag of food.

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1 hour ago, Nathrangking said:

The winds rise and carry me after them.

Fadran Forges a connection to Gravity and soars away with the others.

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An hour later, Vapor stopped for a break. "Where's your closest safe house? I don't have enough food in my bag for more than a meal." She looked in her bag and pulled out a small bag of food.

"Like I said, we're in the past; it's incredibly likely that I don't have any safehouses yet." Fadran looks around. "But, I do know where we are. Ivinan City is due west of here, and at the speed we were going, we can probably make it by nightfall. We can buy supplies there."

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4 minutes ago, Vapor said:

An hour later, Vapor stopped for a break. "Where's your closest safe house? I don't have enough food in my bag for more than a meal." She looked in her bag and pulled out a small bag of food.

3 minutes ago, Channelknight Fadran said:

Fadran Forges a connection to Gravity and soars away with the others.

"Like I said, we're in the past; it's incredibly likely that I don't have any safehouses yet." Fadran looks around. "But, I do know where we are. Ivinan City is due west of here, and at the speed we were going, we can probably make it by nightfall. We can buy supplies there."

"I have a safe house nearby. We can go to the city as Fadran suggested if you."

 

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