Zephrun’s Imperium they/he Posted July 4, 2019 Posted July 4, 2019 (edited) 1 Quote With Star? 'Cause she's already gone though a lot. Rejecting one person isn't going to ruin her and if you try to guilt her, she will come at you like a highstorm. Edited July 4, 2019 by Shard of Thought
BringerofShadows she/her Posted July 4, 2019 Author Posted July 4, 2019 Quote *rejecting I am going to say it. I don’t want Dapper to join. It’s not that I don’t like him, (because he totally didn’t ruin a RP I did) but because of his writing style. This RP…Just isn’t for you. I’m sorry…So sorry. 1
Zephrun’s Imperium they/he Posted July 4, 2019 Posted July 4, 2019 Quote What? I made no spelling mistake, what are you talking about... You know, BoS, I find that really interesting, because you were really annoyed with this story on TLT for a while. I think you like this story, don't you? You're awfully defensive of it.
old man moomba he/him Posted July 4, 2019 Posted July 4, 2019 Quote Wow. Thanks a lot. I feel great about my writing prowess now. 1
BringerofShadows she/her Posted July 4, 2019 Author Posted July 4, 2019 (edited) Quote Yeah. I’m a hypocrite. But I watched and listened, and introduced a new character progressively, I guess. And I am good at serious tones. Edited July 4, 2019 by Inklingspren 1
Zephrun’s Imperium they/he Posted July 4, 2019 Posted July 4, 2019 Quote That doesn't mean you're a bad, writer, Dapper, I think she just doesn't want a wild card to interfere with the story, which I totally get.
old man moomba he/him Posted July 4, 2019 Posted July 4, 2019 (edited) Quote Stop gatekeeping. It's very unbecoming. (For BoS) "Wild card" Haha. Gettit? Because Tarrot cards? I'll see myself out. Edited July 4, 2019 by Dr. Dapper 1
Zephrun’s Imperium they/he Posted July 4, 2019 Posted July 4, 2019 Quote Well, it's a hard RP to join. Not to mention the amount of prior knowledge you probably should have.
old man moomba he/him Posted July 4, 2019 Posted July 4, 2019 Quote That's me, a bumbling idiot with big dreams who wants to get into things I have no right getting into.
Zephrun’s Imperium they/he Posted July 4, 2019 Posted July 4, 2019 Quote Dapper, you are hilarious and incredibly creative.
old man moomba he/him Posted July 4, 2019 Posted July 4, 2019 Quote I mean, one could argue... Anyway, if BoS is gonna keep complaining, I'll be very annoyed. 1
BringerofShadows she/her Posted July 4, 2019 Author Posted July 4, 2019 (edited) Quote Ninja’d, sorry. Well yeah I’m going to keep complaining, I have a grudge against you. And I don’t like wildcards. But you can express that somewhere more…fun, weird and exciting. Edited July 4, 2019 by Inklingspren 1
Zephrun’s Imperium they/he Posted July 4, 2019 Posted July 4, 2019 Quote I do want CBST to remain Star's story. Her character progression, her past, her choices.
old man moomba he/him Posted July 4, 2019 Posted July 4, 2019 Just now, Shard of Thought said: Quote Okay... Optimisim time! I feel like it might be easiser to write a clueless character if I am equally clueless.
BringerofShadows she/her Posted July 4, 2019 Author Posted July 4, 2019 Quote But now is not the time for optimism. This is a tragic love story, not a sit com. 1
Zephrun’s Imperium they/he Posted July 4, 2019 Posted July 4, 2019 1 Quote But the fact is, your chartacter probably shouldn't be clueless. It would make sense that they go to her for help; she's pretty well known and I honestly don't think any character would be stupid enough to mess with Star. She is a ticking time bomb. How is it a tragic love story? I mean, Marsh, but he's gone now and as for Pheonix... Well, that won't be tragic. Actually... *thinks of Astral*
old man moomba he/him Posted July 4, 2019 Posted July 4, 2019 Quote Reread what I wrote in context. And she's gonna be extremely serious. Very driven to complete her mission.
Zephrun’s Imperium they/he Posted July 4, 2019 Posted July 4, 2019 Quote Dude. Star is going to hate you. She's been hurt enough.
BringerofShadows she/her Posted July 4, 2019 Author Posted July 4, 2019 Quote It would distract her from the Main Plot.
old man moomba he/him Posted July 4, 2019 Posted July 4, 2019 Quote I am Szeth-son-Vallano, Truthless of Shinovar. I do what my masters require. That's what the character development is. Going from this driven, emotionless, bounty hunter to a maybe-kinda normal person.
Zephrun’s Imperium they/he Posted July 4, 2019 Posted July 4, 2019 (edited) Quote Yeah... That sounds like Ember. Imagine this. You've been climbing up this cliff for you're entire life. The end is almost in sight and then... someone starts tugging on your legg. You'd hate it, right? All you want is to get to the top; to your happy ending. But they won't let you. You want to help them, but at this point, you're just tired and done. If it concerns the fate of your entire world, then storms yes, but it doesn't. You can go help yourself. Just let me get to the top of this mountain. Edited July 4, 2019 by Shard of Thought 1
old man moomba he/him Posted July 4, 2019 Posted July 4, 2019 Quote What if she's not coming to Star for help? What if she's coming for answers? Luna is the kind of person who would never ask for help. If someone offered help, sure, but she wouldn't ask.
Zephrun’s Imperium they/he Posted July 4, 2019 Posted July 4, 2019 30 minutes ago, Dr. Dapper said: Quote A part of me really doesn't want to have to deal with another plot device, but another part won't let me say no. So, I'll ask you this; why are you so determined to be a part of this story?
old man moomba he/him Posted July 4, 2019 Posted July 4, 2019 Quote I... don't know. Perhaps to figure out what I can to with character development. Perhaps it has to do with something I can't tell you about. And because of the challenge.
Zephrun’s Imperium they/he Posted July 4, 2019 Posted July 4, 2019 Quote *flatly* The challenge of getting us to let you in?
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