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1 hour ago, Jaywalk said:

Marsh kissed her on the forehead. “It’s all right.”

Star smiled and kissed him back, taking his face in her hands. "I love those eyes," she said tearfully. 

Kay, I'll be back in about a half hour. 

Edit: Like now. 

Edited by Shard of Thought
Posted
1 hour ago, Jaywalk said:

Jaywalk knelt down next to Pheonix, laying a hand on his back. “Rise, my brother.”

Pheonix raised dull eyes to meet those of Jaywalk's. It was a nice gesture, what he had done. But he didn't understand. He couldn't. He'd accepted his position as a character in the tale.

Just as he himself had.
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“NOBODY GIVES A CRAP ABOUT THIS STUPID LOVE THING. GET OVER YOURSELVES!!!” Yelled BoS, when the Doomsday machine went off. Everyone in this universe died, and nobody could change it. Screw you! 

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Pheonix closed his eyes. What, indeed? This was a time of triumph, of happiness. Why did he feel so dark inside?

I don't know, he admitted to Star after a pause. I thought...
He trailed off. Narrative! How was he going to say this?
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Just now, xinoehp512 said:

Pheonix closed his eyes. What, indeed? This was a time of triumph, of happiness. Why did he feel so dark inside?

I don't know, he admitted to Star after a pause. I thought...
He trailed off. Narrative! How was he going to say this?

Just think it. Feel it. That works for Thought. I'll understand. 

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I DON’T LIKE BEING IGNORED. SO STOP BEING SO SAPPY AND LETS GET BACK TO THE SILLINESS!! (I would personally like some satirical silliness, if you don’t mind)

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42 minutes ago, xinoehp512 said:

Pheonix raised dull eyes to meet those of Jaywalk's. It was a nice gesture, what he had done. But he didn't understand. He couldn't. He'd accepted his position as a character in the tale.

Just as he himself had.

Jaywalk smiled. “You must have strength.”

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7 minutes ago, BringerofShadows said:

I DON’T LIKE BEING IGNORED. SO STOP BEING SO SAPPY AND LETS GET BACK TO THE SILLINESS!! (I would personally like some satirical silliness, if you don’t mind)

Let it happen. The plot must repair itself. 

Posted
1 hour ago, Shard of Thought said:

Just think it. Feel it. That works for Thought. I'll understand. 

Narrator Pheonix shuddered. I... I... His voice broke. I... 

He crumpled to his knees and wept.
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12 minutes ago, xinoehp512 said:

Narrator Pheonix shuddered. I... I... His voice broke. I... 

He crumpled to his knees and wept.

Sorrow crossed Star's face. She looked to Marsh. "I need to help him," she said. Marsh nodded and she went to Pheonix's side. 

Posted (edited)
52 minutes ago, BringerofShadows said:

But it’s frustrating to the rest of us who aren’t involved.

hehe, i just jumped in last minute, fought in the epic final battle then left. If that ain't involvement, I don't know what is!

Edited by Truthless of Shinovar
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Meanwhile, Narrator Lunamor sat in the room where everyone had been fighting, lying on his back and bouncing a baseball made of light against the ceiling, incredibly bored.

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Jaywalk watched Star approach. He dispelled his gauntlets, then stepped to the side, letting her and Pheonix have their moment.

Meanwhile, Kelsier and Marsh embraced, while Jasnah and Max had their joyful reunion with Edna.

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1 hour ago, Shard of Thought said:

Sorrow crossed Star's face. She looked to Marsh. "I need to help him," she said. Marsh nodded and she went to Pheonix's side. 

Pheonix turned as she approached, looking through tear-filled eyes. He blinked twice to clear his eyes, then spoke.

"Star?" he whispered.

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