Edgedancer he/him Posted April 11, 2015 Posted April 11, 2015 It's not so bad if you read fanfiction. Plenty of it gives Chrysalis ample time to show off her badchullery. (sigh) If I ever actually get married I'm going to have to send you guys pictures, aren't I? Links? No, you'll give us the date and adress, even if I have to cross an ocean I'm so not missing that. (We need a determined smiley.) (How about RP posts to make up keeping your Derpy marriage secret. ) 3
TwiLyghtSansSparkles she/her Posted April 11, 2015 Author Posted April 11, 2015 No, you'll give us the date and address, even if I have to cross an ocean I'm so not missing that. (We need a determined smiley.) (How about RP posts to make up keeping your Derpy marriage secret. ) (We need a lot of smilies that this site doesn't have.) I see you're putting those +4,000,000,000,000,000,000 sneakiness points to good use. 1
Kobold King he/him Posted April 11, 2015 Posted April 11, 2015 Links? No, you'll give us the date and adress, even if I have to cross an ocean I'm so not missing that. (We need a determined smiley.) (How about RP posts to make up keeping your Derpy marriage secret. ) "The Three Sisters" is a good one, though I haven't finished its sequels yet. (And it serves more as a look at changeling culture than as a look at Chrysalis in particular.) I'm trying to think of others... there was one changeling story that I was loving, but the random sex the author shoehorned in turned me off of it. (Seriously. Why does anyone write mature content about cartoon ponies? ) (I'll see what I can do RP-wise.) 1
TwiLyghtSansSparkles she/her Posted April 11, 2015 Author Posted April 11, 2015 "The Three Sisters" is a good one, though I haven't finished its sequels yet. (And it serves more as a look at changeling culture than as a look at Chrysalis in particular.) I'm trying to think of others... there was one changeling story that I was loving, but the random sex the author shoehorned in turned me off of it. (Seriously. Why does anyone write mature content about cartoon ponies? ) (I'll see what I can do RP-wise.) (Because Rule 34, aka The Reason Why We Can't Have Nice Things. ) 1
Edgedancer he/him Posted April 11, 2015 Posted April 11, 2015 I see you're putting those +4,000,000,000,000,000,000 sneakiness points to good use. Always. :ph34r: :ph34r: :ph34r: :ph34r: "The Three Sisters" is a good one, though I haven't finished its sequels yet. (And it serves more as a look at changeling culture than as a look at Chrysalis in particular.) I'm trying to think of others... there was one changeling story that I was loving, but the random sex the author shoehorned in turned me off of it. (Seriously. Why does anyone write mature content about cartoon ponies? ) (I'll see what I can do RP-wise.) Thanks for the link. ....Sadly I'm not suprised. Hey,at least this is a safe corner. 1
Voidus Posted April 11, 2015 Posted April 11, 2015 Always. :ph34r: :ph34r: :ph34r: :ph34r: Thanks for the link. ....Sadly I'm not suprised. Hey,at least this is a safe corner. Possibly because Nighthound is creepier than 90% of the internet.
TwiLyghtSansSparkles she/her Posted April 11, 2015 Author Posted April 11, 2015 (edited) Possibly because Nighthound is creepier than 90% of the internet. That 10% should never be seen by mortal eyes. Edited April 11, 2015 by TwiLyghtSansSparkles
Jo and the Bush all/any Posted April 11, 2015 Posted April 11, 2015 And your sister was supposed to be Derpy! He betrayed all of us and had the guts to be adorable while doing so. (Also apparently this is now me. ) To continue the trend of me posting pony inspired pictures, here's someone better at being an evil queen han Lucentia. (No, not Celestia. Lastly, currently working on a Voidgaze post. Given how inactive the MEE attacks turned out to be until now, it seems she's going to get the highest win count in Thoughttown by far. I'll have a post up with Corpsemaker and Murphy fighting against the MEE some time today. And maybe Sightline. The Internet. It's dangerous to go alone; take this. Steampunk!Chrysalis is badchull. But then, Chrysalis is ALWAYS badchull, so that's really not surprising. (In case I haven't said this before, Chrysalis is second only to Discord as my favorite MLP villain.) Discord barely counts a villain in my mind. He's reformed. And Mother Chrysalis is the best villain. (I might be writing FanFiction about changelings because of her.)
Kobold King he/him Posted April 11, 2015 Posted April 11, 2015 Discord barely counts a villain in my mind. He's reformed. And Mother Chrysalis is the best villain. (I might be writing FanFiction about changelings because of her.) The past few days I've had the germ of an idea for an epic changeling fanfiction. I've had to work really hard to keep it from taking root. (I'd be interested in reading yours, if you write it.)
Edgedancer he/him Posted April 11, 2015 Posted April 11, 2015 I'll have a post up with Corpsemaker and Murphy fighting against the MEE some time today. And maybe Sightline. Discord barely counts a villain in my mind. He's reformed. And Mother Chrysalis is the best villain. (I might be writing FanFiction about changelings because of her.) True, the scope of his power has also been reduced since his redemption. It makes sense to keep him from breaking the story but it's still a shame. Villain decay at its worst. Maybe not having the villain's return is for the better with MLP. (Sounds interesting.)
TwiLyghtSansSparkles she/her Posted April 11, 2015 Author Posted April 11, 2015 Okay, I have a writing question for you all. How should I go about inserting Funtimes' flashbacks? Connect them to Quota's attacks at first, but then add them with greater frequency as she loses her grip. Connect the more intense flashbacks to Quota's attacks, add less-intense ones when Quota is not present. Some variation on the previous two. See, I'm not entirely sure how many flashbacks I'll need at the moment, so if I'm going to go with Option 1, I'll need to start outlining. If I go with the second one, an outline may not be necessary. Opinions? 2
Kobold King he/him Posted April 11, 2015 Posted April 11, 2015 I like the idea of #2. That way you're not as restricted when posting flashbacks, while still maintaining a particular atmosphere of despair and bad memories when Quota appears.
Edgedancer he/him Posted April 11, 2015 Posted April 11, 2015 (edited) Okay, I have a writing question for you all. How should I go about inserting Funtimes' flashbacks? Connect them to Quota's attacks at first, but then add them with greater frequency as she loses her grip. Connect the more intense flashbacks to Quota's attacks, add less-intense ones when Quota is not present. Some variation on the previous two. See, I'm not entirely sure how many flashbacks I'll need at the moment, so if I'm going to go with Option 1, I'll need to start outlining. If I go with the second one, an outline may not be necessary. Opinions? I would advise the same method Brandon used with his epigraphs. First write the entire thing and split it up as seems most practical. Otherwise option 2. I have now finished the outline for the Voidgaze fight scene and discover wrote something you may like. Upvotes for those that can guess. Edited April 11, 2015 by Edgedancer
TwiLyghtSansSparkles she/her Posted April 11, 2015 Author Posted April 11, 2015 I like the idea of #2. That way you're not as restricted when posting flashbacks, while still maintaining a particular atmosphere of despair and bad memories when Quota appears. I would advise the same method Brandon used with his epigraphs. First write the entire thing and split it up as seems most practical. Otherwise option 2. I have now finished the outline for the Voidgaze fight scene and discover wrote something you may like. Upvotes for those that can guess. I'm working on getting the whole thing written, but it's hard. I rewrote the first flashback at least six times before I posted it (and I mean changed the scene and script entirely) and I rewrote the to-be-posted second one three times before landing on a version I was happy with. Do she and Big Al plan a Date of Adorbs?
Edgedancer he/him Posted April 11, 2015 Posted April 11, 2015 I'm working on getting the whole thing written, but it's hard. I rewrote the first flashback at least six times before I posted it (and I mean changed the scene and script entirely) and I rewrote the to-be-posted second one three times before landing on a version I was happy with. Do she and Big Al plan a Date of Adorbs? Ah yes, getting something done that's already been in your head out is a lot harder isn't it. While that will happen eventually, I'm talking about something new introduced at the end of the segment.
TwiLyghtSansSparkles she/her Posted April 11, 2015 Author Posted April 11, 2015 Ah yes, getting something done that's already been in your head out is a lot harder isn't it. While that will happen eventually, I'm talking about something new introduced at the end of the segment. It makes me wish I had psychic paper so I could just transmit it directly from my brain. Um….she figures out Nighthound's weakness?
TheSilverDragon he/him Posted April 11, 2015 Posted April 11, 2015 I'm working on getting the whole thing written, but it's hard. I rewrote the first flashback at least six times before I posted it (and I mean changed the scene and script entirely) and I rewrote the to-be-posted second one three times before landing on a version I was happy with. Ah, the joys of writing.
Edgedancer he/him Posted April 11, 2015 Posted April 11, 2015 It makes me wish I had psychic paper so I could just transmit it directly from my brain. Um….she figures out Nighthound's weakness? Just don't frustration retcon please, simply let it happen. Voidgaze doesn't need Nighthound's weakness. Should they ever again meet in open combat and Voidgaze is properly equiped she's the stronger fighter. Granted, Nighthound probably wouldn't meet her in open combat but that's something else.
TwiLyghtSansSparkles she/her Posted April 11, 2015 Author Posted April 11, 2015 Just don't frustration retcon please, simply let it happen. Voidgaze doesn't need Nighthound's weakness. Should they ever again meet in open combat and Voidgaze is properly equiped she's the stronger fighter. Granted, Nighthound probably wouldn't meet her in open combat but that's something else. I'll try. True. Still, it'd be nice to know that the nicest Epic in Oregon has his weakness. 1
TwiLyghtSansSparkles she/her Posted April 11, 2015 Author Posted April 11, 2015 Meanwhile at TwiLyght's... Nooooo……no, that's not it at all….. 1
Edgedancer he/him Posted April 11, 2015 Posted April 11, 2015 Meanwhile at TwiLyght's... So that's what her house doesn't look like. Where are the pugs? 2
Kobold King he/him Posted April 11, 2015 Posted April 11, 2015 Nooooo……no, that's not it at all….. Suuuuure. We believe you. So that's what her house doesn't look like. Where are the pugs? I just have one word for you: pug jetpacks. Yes, that's two words, but it can count as one REALLY AWESOME word. 2
TwiLyghtSansSparkles she/her Posted April 11, 2015 Author Posted April 11, 2015 So that's what her house doesn't look like. Where are the pugs? Right here. 2
Kobold King he/him Posted April 11, 2015 Posted April 11, 2015 Right here. Do me a favor and pet one for me. There seems to be some sort of screen separating me from them. 1
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