Verdance
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No! absolutely not
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… try the song Shoots by acloudyskye
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I have spent a long time cultivating a very specific style, rigid style and structure combined with visceral, ethereal, powerful imagery, based off of the music i listen to. I am less proud of free verse, but i am more happy with it. Is there more backlog?
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Summer When the sun makes it impossible to hide From the bugs, from heat, from anyone. Make me wear short clothing. Show off the scars, the months spent inside Bummer. Maybe it’s selfish, but i want to write, Want to publish, just to fight, fight the lethargy, Describe the night, for myself, Fill the white, not for you, but if it brings you light, it is more than it could ever be. Autumn Death, in spectacular color The world floating in catharsis I come alive, draped in armor I hide not from you, but myself Rhythmn Music I can’t take it anymore, so I lose myself In someone else’s trauma in memorized hands in heavier lands in an ocean of metal in indie skies in ivory and ebony in the harshest strings and i redeem something something i lost
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No, its actually really well structured.
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It feels very much like things I think about.
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Dude get out of my storming head! technology and progress as a pandora’s box, a tree of knowledge, something that fixes problems and creates even more, the hypocrisy on both the side of youth and old age calling their time the best?! Then the diagnosis that struggle makes life worth living, that the easier life gets the more meaningless it is and the less character we need? I feel like if I lived in danger, i would be worth something, even if it all ended tomorrow.
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I dont but each line is actually a gem get outta my head :3
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Okay, so it’s less joy, and more… amusement, which sickens me. Settling for something stupid and shallow, scrolling the internet when i have work to do, wasting time for something i dont even really care about. That exposes the worst parts of me. True joy… I can’t say i have experienced that in a long time, but what i would give to again. thats great to hear!
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The summer poem is so relatable. I’m probably going to write something inspired by it soon.
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I have a hatred inside for the sickening cheerfulness i conjure up only to fill the void of boredom or lethargy, so feeling angry at myself and then feeling sad and cathartic is somehow the most euphoric experience ever
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Ten Icks is literally a masterpiece
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About a month ago, I ended up in the hospital for a night. I was not mentally okay, but I’ve recovered since then, and I’ve written this poem about my experience, set to the rhyme scheme of “Atlantic” by Sleep Token, since they describe similar things. TW: Self-Harm No TW, this one’s hope for me. writing about my feelings has helped, actually. The harm i caused myself didn’t change me, but reflecting on that foolishness has. Never, ever hurt yourself. It is not salvation, it is not an escape. You can find help, you will see the sun again. I know someone out there loves you. thanks for reading, yall. I really appreciate it.
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Oh my god yes i 100% relate to feeling like im fabricating my emotions i have like, 2/10 autism and dont ever really feel sad, so i have like an addiction to being sad and will try to make myself feel sorrow or make it linger
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Nostalgia is a lie. Best to fixate on and savor the good things, and lift each other up. You’ll get through this, I know it.
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Hope! beautiful!
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Keyword almost mainstream metal sucks, american radio pop sucks, the country music that saturates my region sucks…
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Advice- don’t hate yourself for hating yourself. Hating yourself should be a good reason to have pity on yourself. idk if this might help at all, but since where i live is somewhat rural, i tend to let off steam at least every other day by going on 1-2 hour long walks on the sides of roads just singing like a lunatic. Usually it’s depressing stuff for catharsis, (and occasionally screaming), but almost any music helps. It’s like i don’t have to hide anything
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writing MOTIVATE ME! (aka Hopper Needs Help w/ Writing)
Verdance replied to Through the Living Hopper's topic in Creator's Corner
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The Bald Dragon swoops down and snatches the sandwich away, incinerating your hair with a flash of fire before flying off into the sunset.
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My life: wake up, get ready for the day, try to do work, procrastinate, try to do work, procrastinate, etc, etc, etc, suppress the growing selfhatred, lose myself in the restless reprise of sleep.
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You have until Monday? Could you give them the benefit of the doubt until the weekend?
