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  1. Edema Rue
    Oooo. That was very fun. Twists on well known stories, especially when making them darker, are incredibly fun. I admit, I don't really know the story of King Arthur very well, but I still liked it. There was some very fun eloquent descriptions of emotions that were very nice, especially towards the end. I'm curious to see where it goes from here!
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    Of course! Sharing writing is absolutely terrifying, even sharing with my parents or siblings I still panic. And it's worth reading! That was a fun chapter, I thought it was awesome but, at least to me, it seems like it belongs later in the book. There's nothing wrong with it, in fact it was really enjoyable, but one thing I've been told over and over in my writing is to make sure there's tension in every scene, whether it's related to the main plot or not. And this chapter just didn't seem to have any stakes, so this early in the book where we don't know a lot of the conflict it seemed a little out of place, the thing about the half-sister also seemed to be pushed to the side a little. ...sorry that was probably way more than was needed. I did enjoy it a lot, and it's always good to show how the protagonists react to and and interact with others.
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    Sweet. I actually really hope this happens because I want to kill people.
  4. Edema Rue
    Thank you. See but it's ok, because by coming here I found out that I rule all humans now.
  5. Edema Rue
    Mkay. Cah Luh no.
  6. Edema Rue
    D-do you like my haircut? oooOOOOooOOOOOOoOOOOOOOOO
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    The Caterpillar and the Snail praise Raven's wisdom and fall to their...uh...they don't have knees. Oops. Well they bow as best they can and swear to serve forever. Probably.
  8. Edema Rue
    I will say Exp but mentally I will think Expy. Final decision. (Same way I mentally purposely mispronounce @CalanoCorvus)
  9. Edema Rue
    Well of course not, I was respecting the queen because it's good etiquette to respect the insect centaur queen whenever possible.
  10. Edema Rue
    Okay fine you can be the one exception. Yes.
  11. Edema Rue
    ykyasf when you feel sad and thinking about Kaladin makes it all better.
  12. Edema Rue
    I’d play! …and I also wouldn’t mind being a game maker.
  13. Edema Rue
    Yes. Everyone gets an -y or -ie name here. …Elany?
  14. Edema Rue
    I win. thanks @Ancient Elantrian hmm y'know what you need a nickname because using full names is too hard for me. I shall now call you Ancient One, unless you have anything better.
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    HA I went like 3 whole hours!! *bows* All hail the centaur insects and their queen.
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    Ok first yeah, I've been trying to write even just a regular romance and it...it's taking struggles, I have zero personal experience. Yes I hate that that happens!! It's so annoying. Write what you want, I'm sure it'll be good, or at least fun. And woah! That was an amazing chapter! I really loved the part about how you can't control what you get, and correct me if I'm wrong from the way it was presented it seems like it might be a theme throughout that story, which I think is awesome. It's a very relatable thing, and I always enjoy a character who's just a little bitter about being inferior to others for things they can't control. I enjoyed seeing some of the magic system too! Well done.
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    There all better.
  18. Edema Rue
    The Caterpillar, worried for its new friend the Snail, stretches itself reaaaaaaaaaally long and pulls the snail back onto the sandwich. The force of the snail landing propels the sandwich out of the tug of war and onto a giant plate.
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    Every time I click on the notif thing there’s like 3 for this thread I had like a 10 minute streak.
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    (It’s ok, when I get mad at people it’s meant with love) (I lose the fridging game)
  21. Edema Rue
    You fish. the snail does not have the conscious thought to notice where it is.
  22. Edema Rue
    hi bestie Why am I your immediate “oops I lost, oh I know better murder Eddie!!”
  23. Edema Rue
    The snail gets motion sick and vomits over the side of the sandwich.
  24. Edema Rue
    Ooh, good question. @Aeoliae @Aeoliae do you know? @Ancient Elantrian @Ancient Elantrian @Ancient Elantrian, you've made me lose like 4 times today come die please.
  25. Edema Rue
    I haven’t even seen one. have you got it? HAVE YOU GOT IT??
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