#1 Taln Fan

Kiss Breeze, marry Bim, kill Ba-Ado-Mishram All Cs… Chiri-Chiri, Chanarach, Clubs

“Its up to Elya, but I say if she says she can heal him, we might as well let her try.” Saaphir called down.

Saaphir eyed the girl, slightly wary. “You’re a healer?” He had been trying to ignore his foot, the climb up had been quite painful even with him avoiding using it, but it hurt like the dickens. Elya’s wounds were more urgent however, so he hadn’t been complained. If the girl could help them, she could see to him after Elya.

Kiss Beldre, Marry Taln, Kill Edwarn Raoden, Sarene, Galladon

I admire a good and obscure simile that you can use to confuse non-sharders. I’ll save that one. 9/10

It had discovered cheese on the other side, and it gobbled the cheese up.

“Nightstreet gang’s old hangout.” Saaphir called.

They arrived at the alley, and Saaphir beckoned the others to follow after him. They past several people in the alley, many sleeping. Overhead, around 17 hammocks stretched, four stories up. “These hammocks used to be where the Nightstreet gang stayed, before they were killed off by the Baldrees. Wait here.” Saaphir walked over to the wall, then jumped up and started climbing. The stone bricks were worn and cracked in some places, making places for Saaphir to dig his fingers in. He’d watched as several people had fallen trying to climb up here, several suffering broken bones if they got far. Only younger folks could usually get up here, there weren’t any windows on this side of the building to climb out of. One could go up to the roof and climb down, but the building itself was 10 stories. It would be harder, and more dangerous, to climb down to the hammocks that way. Saaphir reached the hammocks with ease, reminding him of the hundred times he’d climbed up with Aaron. That was before Aaron had been killed by the Pacis. There was scaffolding stretching across the buildings, with hammocks stretched between them, hanging down. Saaphir pulled the rope out of his pack, and tied it to the post he had next to his hammock. He tied it firmly, then dropped one end of the rope down to the others below.

Sorry its been a while, I’m almost done with my larger piece. Lots of school work has given me precious little art time. In the meantime, have a drawing of Stick. Hehe great character

Oops, bad at checking this page psychology probably Favorite Coppermind article I did was the Cytonic summary, since it was the first full-length book (not novella) that I had written the summary for completely on my own. It was also super satisfying to complete. As for where to start, I like to go to https://coppermind.net/wiki/Category:Previously_reviewed_articles . It has articles that are complete, except for info from a new book. So usually they don’t need a ton of new information, if they’re a small character/page. Easy completetions! You can also look at https://coppermind.net/wiki/User:Fbstj/list/stubs-by-size , and look at the smallest articles on the wiki. Then its easy to find new info, since almost any info is new info.

Saaphir led them down the street, sweeping his gaze along the street for threats, and keeping his hand on the hilt of his sword, which he had sheathed at his waist.

“Elya, I’m with Ji on this one. You’re not well enough to walk quickly, or possibly at all. There’s nothing wrong with letting Ji carry you. It’ll help us go faster.”

“Let’s go then. The Pacis will arrive soon.”

“Is it too far? I suppose we could hide in a closer building, but the Pacis are bound to check those first.”

“Three blocks, directly down this street, there’s an alley on the right. Then I’ll have to scale up and lower down a rope.”

Absolutely TPBM has written fanfiction of any kind before

These chapters adding even more hype for me, love seeing Steris being Steris. Also poor Wayne…

Fits with the pfp, which is a nice bonus, plus I like the mood. 8.8/10

“You don’t have to come with us, but we’re not staying here.” Saaphir added, then started walking swiftly down the street towards the hammock nest.

“Elya and Ji, are you two okay to travel a short distance? We can rest a little bit, but we’re really short on time. If not, we could try to hide, or lure the Pacis in another direction, but I’m not sure that would work.”

Saaphir jogged over to the room where Ne’ik was still tied up, then dragged him out to the others. He cast a concerned look at Elya. He wished he had some knowledge of medicine, could do something to help.

“We do need rest, but we also can’t stay here for long.” Saaphir said. “I have a small spot three blocks away, a hammock field that stretches between two buildings, high up. We could go there, unless you have a better spot. I understand that I’m new, and you may not want to trust me, but the hammocks there are comfortable, and there are usually at least ten unoccupied ones. It is difficult to get up there, unless you have someone up there to let down a rope. Which would be me.”

Nope TPBM is an aspiring writer (or has tried writing recently)