But they started to run out of sad movies. So he became sad because he did not have anything to cry about to make his soup taste good. But that kind of solved the problem.
Personally I was fine with the whole "Bring back rome" thing. It seemed like something that you were going to elaborate on later and has the potential to be really cool.
Okaaaay, that sort of works
Nope. Not at all.
Go sit in a hole.
The right way to call it is King, Queen, Jack and Toilet and I have never heard anyone call it differently. You're all insane.
@Mage I love this. I think that the character's interact great, the story seems intriguing and I want more. The only thing that stuck out to me that you might want to change was this:
Just saying that he clenched his feet seemed weird.
Also I like the Sherlock banter at the beginning.