I’m creative? Huh, okay. I’ll just roll with it.
So, I don’t know basically anything about plays. But I thought it was pretty interesting. I don’t have much to add though. I only really noticed what others have already pointed out. Such as how exposition-y it was. I also agree that the guests should have names and you need to differentiate between the character names and dialogue. And on page 4, are the guard and the soldier the same person? If so, the switch in their name is confusing.
And I guess that’s it! Hope this helps.