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  1. StrikerEZ
    *giant hugs* Hey, we're here for you. Even when everything in your real life may seem to be going horribly, we will still always be here for you. I know it really, really, really seems tough right now, but I know it can get better. Plus, you're only halfway through that hellhole right now. By the time it's over, you'll look back on it and be so glad that you survived it. We all care for you here, so please, stay safe and don't do anything too brash. Heck, if you need help, I'm sure there are several hotlines in Australia that you can call and would help you with this. Just know that we really do care about you here. *hugging intensifies*
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    You limp towards the cottage. But quietly... Man, I love this song. It's hilarious.
  3. StrikerEZ
    Ah, I gotchu. I thought that might've been the case, I just couldn't tell for sure. I have no idea what that quote means.
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    First, Elemancy. You're right, it's a lot to start a book off with. The thing is, this is how Elemancy actually works, but at the time of the book, Elemancy is misunderstood. I'm not sure if you read all the posts in the topic, but I mentioned how there are the Six Kingdoms; Fire, Water, Earth, Air, Light, and Darkness. The people of this world at this point in time believe that there are only 6 elemantic elements, with some sub-elements. Yeah. I'm thinking more along the lines of a prelude, as I already have a prologue kind of planned out. Dont worry, there'll be more, I just haven't had time to work on this very much.
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    Well, like Mestiv said, just keep going with it. If you find yourself liking the girl (as more than just a friend), then just ask her how she feels. Anyway, what do you mean by "an interesting turn?" Just an interesting topic came up, or what? I feel you don't mind me asking, of course.
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    You're welcome!
  7. StrikerEZ
    I think the biggest problem with the first chapter was that it just felt too sporadic. And the magic explanation was weird. This chapter wasn't as sporadic, but you could clean it up a little.
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    Well, I'm not quite sure how to respond to that. I'm not gonna claim inexperience, because I've already done enough of that, I'm just gonna try to explain my actions a little better. I think the biggest reason why I felt Orlok was so suspicious was because of my wasted protection on him, because I had been so certain that an elim would've attacked him in order to get rid of a captain who could possibly detain one of their own. I didn't think beyond the fact that maybe the elims would risk the captain not detaining anyone and instead just go for someone who had been inactive. While the reason for no detainment was because he was inactive, it still makes me a little suspicious that Orlok wasn't attacked, though, since reading through the thread again, I've decided to lessen my suspicion of him a little.
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    Didn't you see my role reveal yesterday? I'll admit, it didn't play out how I thought it would, but still.
  10. StrikerEZ
    I'm actually really liking this. This chapter is a lot better than the first one, I'll tell you that. And it's quite funny as well. My only critique is that it's only a couple of huge paragraphs. You could probably split each of those into 3-5 smaller paragraphs.
  11. StrikerEZ
    It randomly goes to one of the villagers, if the lynched player had any spikes. I'm not sure what to make of this. I feel kind of bad about Dalinar getting lynched, and just because he was kind of inactive. I'm no type sure what to make of that. I'll reread the thread in a little bit. Now...should I use my last vial to protect someone tonight, or should we start ordering vials as a group for when we discover who's truly on our side?
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    Okay, that's true. Up until the Tower, of course.
  13. StrikerEZ
    Worldhopping mercenary. Seems more fun. Would you rather be a Steel/Pewter Twinborn or a Cadmium/Zinc Twinborn? EDIT: For clarification, Allomantic/Feruchemical
  14. StrikerEZ
    Hurt Abrasion, heal Illumination 1. Gravitation -- 25 2. Abrasion -- 23 3. Illumination -- 2
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    Hey, I joined the Cobalt Guard! Sure hope nothing bad happens to me or my friends!
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    Yo, welcome to the Shard! It's cool that your brother introduced you to the Cosmere and Sanderson. I introduced my brother to Sanderson, but I kind of scared him away from reading the Cosmere by constantly asking him to read Mistborn.... Anyway, which book is your favorite?
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    Hmm...true, I guess. I still think that Orlok was suspicious either way, so I'm keeping my vote.
  18. StrikerEZ
    Okay, so I've decided that I might as well come out and do a role reveal, to help explain why I'm so supicious of Orlok. I'm a lurcher, and I figured that first night that Orlok was a villager, as it didn't quite make sense for him to be an elim (though I was still suspicious), and I figured I'd protect him as he was a captain, and we need those early on and farther into the game. I assumed that if Orlok were village, the elims would try to take him out, as he could possibly detain one of them (I'm ignoring the lack of a detainment last night because of his reasons). I was so sure that he would've been attacked, but he never was. Which honestly leads me to believe that he might be an elim. If he were an elim, it makes sense to me that they would target someone who had been fairly inactive the last day, and someone who hadn't voted on him as an elim that day as well, so as to help draw suspicions away from him. That, along with Orlok being one of the first to gang up on PK and the late role claim, lead me to believe that Orlok is an elim. EDIT: Ninja'd by BrightnessRadiant
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    I'm not sure what to make of everything that's happened. Pretty much everyone else has voiced all my concerns. I definitely think it was quite suspicious that Orlok didn't use his detainment again. At first, I felt like Orlok was probably village, but the lack of a detainment going into this day just seems fishy to me. Other people have voiced my concerns about Orlok already, but I'll write out my reasons if someone deems it necessary (which I'm sure will happen). As for Cluny, it is a little suspicious of him to talk about the spike like that openly, and I think he has been acting slightly off since the start of the game, but I don't think that's because he is an elim. Either way, I feel that Cluny should be protected somehow, because that Seeker ability of his could be really handy down the road.
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    Ugh, that's a good question. I don't really know a lot about Hoid, but it's be cool to be best friends with an awesome worldhopper. Though, it would be cool to know Kelsier, and if I became a Mistborn, he could train me. I think I'd probably end up choosing Hoid, because I could learn so much about the Cosmere from him. Would you rather be eaten alive by a chasmfiend or be turned into an Inquisitor?
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    Ah, makes sense. That actually sounds really cool. I'm not sure how that works, but it sounds cool. Vakken sounds really cool. I really like that name, even though it does kind of sound like a villain's name.
  22. StrikerEZ
    Hmm...I really like the idea of Gifts. It seems pretty interesting. Who could this gray-clothed assassin be? Definitely doesn't want Essrod finding out information about Lady Codoroy.
  23. StrikerEZ
    Do you mean pairing A with C or K as in there are C's and K's in the name? Or what do you mean? Honestly, when I'm naming people in non-Earth worlds, I just tend to come up with interesting sounding names, usually 2-3 syllables and not that hard to pronounce. The main character in The Chosen Ones, a book I want to write, is named Kyren (Keer-in). It's a pretty simple name. Usually, powerful and/or villainous characters have longer, more complex names for me. And I hate making female names too. Probably just has to do with the fact that I'm a guy, I guess.
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    Oh, same. I'm not sure how Brandon does it, and keeps the names fitting a certain world's linguistic patterns.
  25. StrikerEZ
    Johnathan seems like a weird name for a person in a magical kingdom.... Otherwise, seems interesting so far.
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