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"Hey, Fadran," Kindness asks.  "Do we have anti-killing plans?  Because the king does that sometimes, apparently, and I don't want any of us to die?"

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Hopefully I'll be back. Can you just come in here? :)
Also, hopefully I'm not messing too much up. I just skimmed 55 pages so I probably missed something important 

 

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42 minutes ago, Negative_Null said:

As the party walks into the royal hall, a door bangs open to the side and a blue holed rushes out, holding a tray covered in food. "Out of the way, the king has ordered snacks!"

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Aren't you going to ask what blue holed can do? :P. You can't exactly portray one if you have no idea how the magic system works.

@Negative_Null

Steadily and surely, the group made its way across the magical bridge. The orange holed in front walked a pace so quick that one almost had to run to keep up with her. And given that there were no railings between the group and the hundred-foot-plus drop to the bottom of the chamber, running wasn't exactly a desirable option.

Despite the danger, there were no mishaps on the journey.
1 minute ago, Spren of Kindness said:

"Hey, Fadran," Kindness asks.  "Do we have anti-killing plans?  Because the king does that sometimes, apparently, and I don't want any of us to die?"

"Don't worry," said Elaine. "You're honored guests- he can't kill you." Her voice, however, was less confident.

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I... didn't think about that. Magic must have been one of the things I missed on my skimming. I heard something about mind control and that was it

 

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7 minutes ago, Spren of Kindness said:

"Hey, Fadran," Kindness asks.  "Do we have anti-killing plans?  Because the king does that sometimes, apparently, and I don't want any of us to die?"

Fadran shares a glance with Baahlan. "We do. It's an old tactic of mine that I like to call 'run away and scream loudly.'"

4 minutes ago, xinoehp512 said:

"Don't worry," said Elaine. "You're honored guests- he can't kill you." Her voice, however, was less confident.

"Whether or not we're honored guests doesn't affect whether he can kill us." Fadran flexes his muscles--which aren't that large, but whatever. "We're the... adventure gang! Adventure Gang, in capitals? Y'all, we need a name."

2 minutes ago, Enter a username said:

Why is "holed" always spelled in italics?

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Because WORLDBUILDING. And also saying holed without italics doesn't have the same--*splays fingers*--to it.

 

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1 minute ago, Channelknight Fadran said:

Y'all, we need a name.

"Uhhh... The Mishmash of Loosely Related Entities, Comprising of Humans, Spren, Deities, Among Other Types of People?" 

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Just now, Negative_Null said:

I... didn't think about that. Magic must have been one of the things I missed on my skimming. I heard something about mind control and that was it

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Do you want to change it to be a Hyxali male? They don't have any special powers besides a little bit of extra strength and lightness. And it probably makes more sense given the context.

@Negative_Null

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5 minutes ago, Enter a username said:

"Uhhh... The Mishmash of Loosely Related Entities, Comprising of Humans, Spren, Deities, Among Other Types of People?" 

"I still like mine. But only kind of."

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1 minute ago, Channelknight Fadran said:

"I got it!" Fadran does the eureka clap (yes, again). "The Fellowship of the Thing: The Bored Squad. Just the Fellowship of the Thing for short. Thoughts?" 

"What's our Thing, though?"  Kindness zips off Fadran's shoulder to walk backwards in front of his face.

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"The Fellowship of the Thing: A Mishmash of Loosely Related Entities?" Fadran asks. "Still the Fellowship of the Thing for short?"

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"What's our Thing, though?"  Kindness zips off Fadran's shoulder to walk backwards in front of his face.

Fadran shrugs. "Getting attacked by literally anything imaginable?"

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