ThroughTheLivingSequence she/her/they/them Posted December 16, 2021 Posted December 16, 2021 *Coughs coughs coughs coughs coughs coughs coughs.* 1
Szeth Pancakes he/they Posted December 16, 2021 Posted December 16, 2021 *wins in the great state of Sequence should probably go to the doctor*
ThroughTheLivingSequence she/her/they/them Posted December 16, 2021 Posted December 16, 2021 *Coughs out some useless internal organs.* 1
Szeth Pancakes he/they Posted December 16, 2021 Posted December 16, 2021 *wins in the great state of Sequence should definitely go to a doctor*
ThroughTheLivingSequence she/her/they/them Posted December 16, 2021 Posted December 16, 2021 *Coughs out the doctor, which had been eaten alive.*
ThroughTheLivingSequence she/her/they/them Posted December 16, 2021 Posted December 16, 2021 *Coughs normally*
Frustration Posted December 16, 2021 Posted December 16, 2021 1 hour ago, Sequence said: *Coughs out some useless internal organs.* What useless organs are there? Internal or otherwise?
Szeth Pancakes he/they Posted December 16, 2021 Posted December 16, 2021 1 hour ago, Ookla the Frustrated said: What useless organs are there? Internal or otherwise? Appendix?
Szeth Pancakes he/they Posted December 17, 2021 Posted December 17, 2021 Appendix I: All the worldbuilding you should have just but in the book, storm it
Ethan_sedai he/him Posted December 17, 2021 Posted December 17, 2021 11 hours ago, Ookla the Frustrated said: Here is my case for WoK Prime Reveal hidden contents Shinri is better than Shallan in every possible way Jasnah is so much better The magic is cooler The storyline is more compeling It feels more like a world in which an anchient super magic civilization disappeared. Renarin Whoever Adolin replaced because I cannot remember his name acting like an adult not a teenager with anger issues. I prefer WoK(not prime) Here is my case: Quote I kind of felt like in WoK prime, there wasn't nearly as much personality to the characters. With Kaladin, for example, you see him do things that no one else would do (even before he swears the oaths) and you see why he does those things. In WoK prime, the characters are there, but it feels like the thoughts and actions unique to them are *mostly* unique because of whatever powers they have, rather than who they are. The depth that the characters have, along with the "science" of Investiture are two of the big reasons why the Cosmere is so great, and I feel like WoK prime lacked that. Quote This is a more minor reason, but it is a reason. Quote With how much war happened in the book, it felt like almost all of the armies in the world we're killed, more so than it seems like we're killed during the entirety of the SA to date, making it hard for me to see hope in the future of that world, since the voidbringers are coming. Quote I do like how the magic works a bit better, and I did like how Taravangian was deaf, but always smart, and feigned being dumb to hide that he was deaf. Sorry for the weird formatting, i don't know what happened, and it's a lot harder to fix weird formatting things on mobile.
Frustration Posted December 17, 2021 Posted December 17, 2021 5 hours ago, Ookla the Confused said: Appendix? Actually that's pretty important for your microbiome. Try again.
ThroughTheLivingSequence she/her/they/them Posted December 17, 2021 Posted December 17, 2021 6 hours ago, Ookla the Frustrated said: What useless organs are there? Internal or otherwise? The organs I have expelled from my body include: My liver what appears to be a lung possibly a kidney and that weird orange thing
Guest Posted December 17, 2021 Posted December 17, 2021 (edited) ...Nor will I. I give you a challenge. Compose the creepiest poem you can think of. it has to be original, no copying. Anybody up for it? Edit: I'll start. Spoiler Oh my dear friend, death. Oh how wonderful your respite. Oh my beautiful love, death. Oh how I do so despise You, since from me you took till I was bereft. Of everything and all I loved. Till you and only you were left. Oh love, oh my wicked, oh beloved. Edited December 17, 2021 by Elf
ThroughTheLivingSequence she/her/they/them Posted December 17, 2021 Posted December 17, 2021 Absolutely bone-chilling, my friend.
Guest Posted December 17, 2021 Posted December 17, 2021 5 minutes ago, Sequence said: Absolutely bone-chilling, my friend. Really? Thank you so much
Frustration Posted December 17, 2021 Posted December 17, 2021 1 minute ago, Ookla the Boomerang said: Hey y'all. YAY! You're back you haven't even been gone that long why am I like this? 1
Ironwill2112 he/him Posted December 17, 2021 Posted December 17, 2021 Well it nice to know that I am appreciated her on the shard. lol. Sometimes I worry that I'm just in the way and don't really add much to the cite.... I am not as consistently on here as I used to be. If I am offline for 30-60 min. then 4 pages go by! Its hard to keep up sometimes. lol Oh and I win by the way. ;P
Frustration Posted December 17, 2021 Posted December 17, 2021 19 minutes ago, Ookla the Boomerang said: Well it nice to know that I am appreciated her on the shard. lol. Sometimes I worry that I'm just in the way and don't really add much to the cite.... I know that feeling 19 minutes ago, Ookla the Boomerang said: Oh and I win by the way. ;P No, I win 1
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