Keke They/he Posted September 14, 2025 Posted September 14, 2025 Just now, Kansas Stormcursed said: Sorry my brain is on lots of different tracks. "How long have you been without her?" Cep finishes. Its fine "almost 3 years. Like two and a few months." Erryin before had mentioned something about their girlfriend being tortured. Which led them to almost kill a bunch of people. erryin stood up and looked around helping ava up. soon after they got spears and arrows pointed at them.
Through The Living Ash he/him Posted September 14, 2025 Posted September 14, 2025 2 minutes ago, Kansas Stormcursed said: Asharak looks at the bone, confused. "Why?" "Because I was asked to get it?" 1
Kansas Stormcursed he/him Posted September 14, 2025 Posted September 14, 2025 2 minutes ago, Hawks said: Its fine "almost 3 years. Like two and a few months." Erryin before had mentioned something about their girlfriend being tortured. Which led them to almost kill a bunch of people. erryin stood up and looked around helping ava up. soon after they got spears and arrows pointed at them. Yeah I remember that "Double [storms]. This...really isn't good." 3 minutes ago, Ashkaloda said: "Because I was asked to get it?" "Hm. I suppose the time commitment makes it of equal value. Very well." Asharak snaps his fingers. "There you are. Or you will be, once this Mindscape drops."
Through The Living Ash he/him Posted September 15, 2025 Posted September 15, 2025 6 minutes ago, Kansas Stormcursed said: Yeah I remember that "Double [storms]. This...really isn't good." "Hm. I suppose the time commitment makes it of equal value. Very well." Asharak snaps his fingers. "There you are. Or you will be, once this Mindscape drops." "Thank you."
Kansas Stormcursed he/him Posted September 15, 2025 Posted September 15, 2025 (edited) 36 minutes ago, Ashkaloda said: "Thank you." Cep lets the Mindscape drop. He and Taeidin find themselves in an idyllic field, the grass about knee high and waving softly in a slight breeze; scattered across the field was a rainbow of flowers, and in the middle of the field stands a small cottage. Edited September 15, 2025 by Kansas Stormcursed
Keke They/he Posted September 15, 2025 Posted September 15, 2025 (edited) 13 minutes ago, Kansas Stormcursed said: Yeah I remember that "Double [storms]. This...really isn't good." erryin shoots their hand up. "We surrender." They said instantly. The people pulled them and prodded them down the tunnel. They ended in a large cavern. Alot of the people, dressed weird and decorated with bones stood around a large stone chair. One of the people bowed. "We found them." Then the king yelled in some lamgauge and three of the guards grabbed ava and tied her up. Two others held erryin. "STOP LET HER GO!" they shout as loud as they can. "NO DONT TOUCH HER!!" erryin backed up. "Make it stop.. please god please." Edited September 15, 2025 by Hawks
Kansas Stormcursed he/him Posted September 15, 2025 Posted September 15, 2025 (edited) 28 minutes ago, Hawks said: erryin shoots their hand up. "We surrender." They said instantly. The people pulled them and prodded them down the tunnel. They ended in a large cavern. Alot of the people, dressed weird and decorated with bones stood around a large stone chair. One of the people bowed. "We found them." Then the king yelled in some lamgauge and three of the guards grabbed ava and tied her up. Two others held erryin. "STOP LET HER GO!" they shout as loud as they can. "NO DONT TOUCH HER!!" Cep walks up to Erryin and hugs them tightly, pulling their eyes from the scene unfolding. His eyes show secondhand pain, and his jaw is tight, but he shows no other external signs of agitation. Edited September 15, 2025 by Kansas Stormcursed
Keke They/he Posted September 15, 2025 Posted September 15, 2025 Just now, Kansas Stormcursed said: Cep watches silently, ears pulled back slightly I edited something into it btw
Through The Living Ash he/him Posted September 15, 2025 Posted September 15, 2025 7 minutes ago, Kansas Stormcursed said: Cep lets the Mindscape drop. Uhh do you want me to describe this part?
Kansas Stormcursed he/him Posted September 15, 2025 Posted September 15, 2025 28 minutes ago, Hawks said: I edited something into it btw I edited my response 26 minutes ago, Ashkaloda said: Uhh do you want me to describe this part? Sorry I had to go do something and accidentally hit submit reply. I edited to expand the reply
Keke They/he Posted September 15, 2025 Posted September 15, 2025 1 hour ago, Kansas Stormcursed said: Cep walks up to Erryin and hugs them tightly, pulling their eyes from the scene unfolding. His eyes show secondhand pain, and his jaw is tight, but he shows no other external signs of agitation. the scene blurs to a few minutes later. In the other room you could hear ava screaming. Erryin was facing the leader. "There's is a simple way to make her torture stop." He hands over a list. 300 people. "First we lessen it if you take care of these guys. Then the if you do the next list then we stop it." erryins eyes darkened. "Take care? Kill?! I... why what did they do?" The leader laughed. "Nothing. Not really. But they, like you and your love, are close to finding us. So we cant let that happen. " Erryin stared at the paper. Ava's screams echoing through the cavern. erryin buried their face in ceps shoulder. "Im so sorry. I..."
NameIess Posted September 15, 2025 Posted September 15, 2025 (edited) Subversion started suddenly, eyes snapping open as life returned to her body. "What page is it!?" She asked in terror, teleporting herself to Erryin and grabbing him by the shoulders. "Quick, before it drags him, and me with him, back down again!" @Hawks On 9/4/2025 at 3:15 PM, Dragonheir said: The man who looked like Rebus frowned. "That won't be easy. I can't exactly put any planets back the way they were without help, and even if I could I'm not sure everyone would want me too. Post-scarcity is a very effective bribe. "Well... you can leave the worlds post-scarcity, I suppose. Just undo the evil empire bits." The Priest scratched his head. "Are you certain you're sincere? To be honest, I'd expected you to show up and attempt to kill me." On 9/4/2025 at 3:15 PM, Dragonheir said: Rebus ensured that this particular version of him wasn't speaking to anyone else. "Oh, I know perfectly well that the Witherlord is somewhere different. I merely had to imply that there was a chance for it to escape independently." On 9/1/2025 at 8:03 PM, xinoehp512 said: "No, actually he is in the Void between Worlds." Noted Editor Nameless. "But the Void is not outside TLT. To my understanding it is the space between worlds in TLT, as otherwise the Witherlord and the withergeists would be wreaking havoc over the defenseless threads outside." On 9/4/2025 at 11:17 AM, Sequence said: Sequence nodded, passing her hand through the small field once again and closing her eyes for a moment... Then, the field expanded to encompass the entirety of the cavern. Just to test, Sequence summoned her Narrationblade in the form of the wooden cane she leans on. She held it up for a moment, looking at it intently. It buzzed for a moment, and... That's it. Sequence nodded in approval. "Is there anything else we need before Bacon can deposit the paper in the vault?" "Not unless Cricket can get his Enuller magic working without obliterating the vault." Malevolence glared at Cricket over Sequence's shoulder. "Although now that the shielding is up the vault should be able to survive just about any explosion." Edited September 15, 2025 by NameIess 1
Kansas Stormcursed he/him Posted September 15, 2025 Posted September 15, 2025 3 minutes ago, Hawks said: the scene blurs to a few minutes later. In the other room you could hear ava screaming. Erryin was facing the leader. "There's is a simple way to make her torture stop." He hands over a list. 300 people. "First we lessen it if you take care of these guys. Then the if you do the next list then we stop it." erryins eyes darkened. "Take care? Kill?! I... why what did they do?" The leader laughed. "Nothing. Not really. But they, like you and your love, are close to finding us. So we cant let that happen. " Erryin stared at the paper. Ava's screams echoing through the cavern. erryin buried their face in ceps shoulder. "Im so sorry. I..." Cep hugs them tighter. "I understand. I see why you did what you did. I would have done the same thing."
Keke They/he Posted September 15, 2025 Posted September 15, 2025 (edited) On 9/14/2025 at 7:57 PM, NameIess said: Subversion started suddenly, eyes snapping open as life returned to her body. "What page is it!?" She asked in terror, teleporting herself to Erryin and grabbing him by the shoulders. "Quick, before it drags him, and me with him, back down again!" erryin holds her. "Wow wow, calm down. Subversion right? Who?" They kick their foot on the ground and vines made a circle sround them. The vines made it so only subversion and erryins powers would work on or near them. @NameIess just tagging so when you get back online its not lost in the ten thousand pages that form a day xD ------- @Kansas Stormcursed it wont let me quote idk why. "no im sorry I lied. To you. I said I didnt kill anyone." the scene shifts and erryin stood. Gore and violence warning Spoiler They wore a black crop top and black pants. They had a grey neckgater and a bloodied sword. Two dead bodies lay at their feet. Their clothes splattered dark red and their brown hair was basically dyed blood red. Erryins eyes were soulless and empty. "One third of the list is down." They crouched to one of the people who despite being stabbed multiple times was barely alive. They pulled their mask down. "Have a fun time being dead. And im sorry I couldn't join you " they then promply stabbed their head. Warned ya Edited September 16, 2025 by Hawks courtasy tag
Kansas Stormcursed he/him Posted September 15, 2025 Posted September 15, 2025 1 minute ago, Hawks said: erryin holds her. "Wow wow, calm down. Subversion right? Who?" They kick their foot on the ground and vines made a circle sround them. The vines made it so only subversion and erryins powers would work on or near them. ------- @Kansas Stormcursed it wont let me quote idk why. "no im sorry I lied. To you. I said I didnt kill anyone." the scene shifts and erryin stood. Gore and violence warning Hide contents They wore a black crop top and black pants. They had a grey neckgater and a bloodied sword. Two dead bodies lay at their feet. Their clothes splattered dark red and their brown hair was basically dyed blood red. Erryins eyes were soulless and empty. "One third of the list is down." They crouched to one of the people who despite being stabbed multiple times was barely alive. They pulled their mask down. "Have a fun time being dead. And im sorry I couldn't join you " they then promply stabbed their head. Warned ya Cep nods. "I knew."
Keke They/he Posted September 15, 2025 Posted September 15, 2025 1 minute ago, Kansas Stormcursed said: Cep nods. "I knew." erryin turned away. "I dont want to watch. I cant." they fell to their knees. "Please. Make it stop. I hate myself for it already." The scene shifts again back to the cavern. Ava was tied to the wall of the cave. Bleeding. Erryin walked in and ran to her side. "Ava!! Im working on getting yo-" ava interrupted weakly. "Erryin dont. I know what they asked. Its not worth it." Erryin shook their head. "No it is. Your all i have... all I have to live for." erryin starter panicking. "please dont. This. This is when. She." 1
Kansas Stormcursed he/him Posted September 15, 2025 Posted September 15, 2025 9 minutes ago, Hawks said: erryin turned away. "I dont want to watch. I cant." they fell to their knees. "Please. Make it stop. I hate myself for it already." The scene shifts again back to the cavern. Ava was tied to the wall of the cave. Bleeding. Erryin walked in and ran to her side. "Ava!! Im working on getting yo-" ava interrupted weakly. "Erryin dont. I know what they asked. Its not worth it." Erryin shook their head. "No it is. Your all i have... all I have to live for." erryin starter panicking. "please dont. This. This is when. She." Cep trembles. "I can't. I can't get us out of this. I can't even reach the Mindscape...it's all gone."
Keke They/he Posted September 15, 2025 Posted September 15, 2025 3 minutes ago, Kansas Stormcursed said: Cep trembles. "I can't. I can't get us out of this. I can't even reach the Mindscape...it's all gone." erryin just watches in horror. ava shouts to the guard outside. "I cant let you kill anyone else. 300 people erryin." She looks at the gaurd. "Kill me." erryin stops. "No. Ava no. Ava no." They tried to grab the guards sword but it went into avas chest before erryin reacted. Rhey let out a blood curdling scream. It resounded in the caverns and if any Narrators or authors were listening. They might even hear a faint echo of it.
Shatter He/Him Posted September 15, 2025 Posted September 15, 2025 On 9/11/2025 at 9:40 AM, Hawks said: by the time Ryna got out aspen had disappeared and ryna found her when she swung down off a branch. “Boo!!” (See box for example) Theres a little animation i figured out how to do so it is a video (its the eyes) Hide contents Untitled - September 10, 2025 12.12.54.mp4 107.61 kB · 0 downloads Ryna laughed quietly, a light, teasing sound. “Oh, you got me,” she said, though her tone carried just a hint of playfulness. “I definitely didn’t see that coming.” She adjusted the Codex and followed, letting Aspen lead her deeper into the forest.
Keke They/he Posted September 15, 2025 Posted September 15, 2025 Just now, Shatter said: Ryna laughed quietly, a light, teasing sound. “Oh, you got me,” she said, though her tone carried just a hint of playfulness. “I definitely didn’t see that coming.” She adjusted the Codex and followed, letting Aspen lead her deeper into the forest. after a while the forwst got denser ajd denser. After a small squeeze through a tree they opened into a huge clearing surrounded by a dome of trees. Nymphs and sprites of all kind flirted around and it seemed to glow. Small pods and houses floated in the sky making a whole city.
Shatter He/Him Posted September 15, 2025 Posted September 15, 2025 Ryna stepped through the narrow gap in the trees and froze for a moment, taking in the clearing. The forest opened into a breathtaking dome, alive with glowing nymphs and sprites darting through the air, their laughter and light filling the space. She let her eyes travel upward, marvelling at the floating pods and houses that made up an entire sky city, hovering effortlessly above the forest floor. The soft luminescence of the clearing bathed everything in a magical glow, and Ryna felt a rare, unguarded awe settle over her. “Impressive,” she murmured, almost to herself, careful not to disturb the delicate harmony of the place.
Keke They/he Posted September 15, 2025 Posted September 15, 2025 7 minutes ago, Shatter said: Ryna stepped through the narrow gap in the trees and froze for a moment, taking in the clearing. The forest opened into a breathtaking dome, alive with glowing nymphs and sprites darting through the air, their laughter and light filling the space. She let her eyes travel upward, marvelling at the floating pods and houses that made up an entire sky city, hovering effortlessly above the forest floor. The soft luminescence of the clearing bathed everything in a magical glow, and Ryna felt a rare, unguarded awe settle over her. “Impressive,” she murmured, almost to herself, careful not to disturb the delicate harmony of the place. Aspen flew up. "This is my home!"
Shatter He/Him Posted September 15, 2025 Posted September 15, 2025 12 minutes ago, Hawks said: Aspen flew up. "This is my home!" Ryna’s eyes followed Aspen as she hovered above the clearing. “It’s beautiful,” she said softly, letting the glow of the place wash over her. “I can see why you’d call it home.” She stepped carefully, taking in the nymphs and sprites flitting through the air and the floating pods above, marveling at the harmony of it all.
Kansas Stormcursed he/him Posted September 15, 2025 Posted September 15, 2025 8 hours ago, Hawks said: erryin just watches in horror. ava shouts to the guard outside. "I cant let you kill anyone else. 300 people erryin." She looks at the gaurd. "Kill me." erryin stops. "No. Ava no. Ava no." They tried to grab the guards sword but it went into avas chest before erryin reacted. Rhey let out a blood curdling scream. It resounded in the caverns and if any Narrators or authors were listening. They might even hear a faint echo of it. Cep's eyes flicker. His hair starts to stand up, the curls loosening. His expression darkens, while his eyes shift from brown to blue. With a snap, the Mindscape reappears. The void is shaded, as if in twilight, and the shadows shift angrily.
Keke They/he Posted September 15, 2025 Posted September 15, 2025 8 hours ago, Shatter said: Ryna’s eyes followed Aspen as she hovered above the clearing. “It’s beautiful,” she said softly, letting the glow of the place wash over her. “I can see why you’d call it home.” She stepped carefully, taking in the nymphs and sprites flitting through the air and the floating pods above, marveling at the harmony of it all. ooh ima do something Sprite and nymphs flew around ryna. Inspecting her curiously. 49 minutes ago, Kansas Stormcursed said: Cep's eyes flicker. His hair starts to stand up, the curls loosening. His expression darkens, while his eyes shift from brown to blue. With a snap, the Mindscape reappears. The void is shaded, as if in twilight, and the shadows shift angrily. so is the scene gone?
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