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Yes. It's Kelsier. Good job.

A father without children,

He's a father-figure to Vin.

A husband without wife.

Mare is dead, so he is a widower.

I command the hearts of men.

He has that special charisma that lets him give people newfound hope. His church also does something similar.

Imbued with the power of a god.

Allomancy.

I sow striff seeds.

His attacking of the Keeps to push them towards a civil war.

Serving under pretenses of endurance.

He serves Preservation.

An immortal, though dead.

He lives on forever in legend.

My heart lay unknown until the end-sleep.

People thought he just built himself up for glory until he got himself killed for the cause.

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I bear the weight of the millenia long past,

I bore the ember of the millenia yet to come,

And though I was the last one, in the holy path,

I have know this world, more than once, undone

My crown is one of wisdow, sought by gods and kings,

My mantle is of memory, stretching lifetimes long,

My scepter is of chaos, dissident from my kin,

And I was an herald, of our dearest doom,

For I, the first to see the promise to be free

Was too late to stop its lies.

Little I knew, the promise was me.

Edited by CognitivePulsePattern
Posted

Yes. It's Kelsier. Good job.

A father without children,

He's a father-figure to Vin.

A husband without wife.

Mare is dead, so he is a widower.

I command the hearts of men.

He has that special charisma that lets him give people newfound hope. His church also does something similar.

Imbued with the power of a god.

Allomancy.

I sow striff seeds.

His attacking of the Keeps to push them towards a civil war.

Serving under pretenses of endurance.

He serves Preservation.

An immortal, though dead.

He lives on forever in legend.

My heart lay unknown until the end-sleep.

People thought he just built himself up for glory until he got himself killed for the cause.

He's still around though, supposedly . . .

Kicking the bucket didn't stop his meddling apparently.

Posted

He's still around though, supposedly . . .

Kicking the bucket didn't stop his meddling apparently.

Hence the line "an immortal, though dead." I wasn't really sure if that was confirmed 100% so I threw in the other meaning. Where did Brandon talk about that?

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I am a prisoner, a slave; the spoken-bonds that chain me
of my own forging. I stand above the highest of kings,
though this light I see marks me among the lowly.
Name me storm-crow, the unexpected visitor, the last wanderer;
I am the unwanted guest, the one who foreshadows the storm.
No greater servant has shouldered the burdens of this middle-earth;
has endured the god’s hatred for the length of ten durances
and more. For the spear-clash I am born, to rally the
armies of men. The last-sleep takes me; a cycle unending
I am slain, but my task is pressing and summons me again.

 

Sorry guys, really struggling at the boasts now >>

Posted (edited)

Taln?

Yes! Your turn!

Edit: Can someone please upvote him for me? Accidental mobile downvote, sorry! :/

Edited by Kasimir
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I am the announcer, of the souless death,

I am the keeper, of the blasphemous hoard,

I am the bringer of war, in name of home,

I am the denial, of the denied gift,

I am unreachable, none can imprision me,

I was decieved, yet my slayer is now beside me,

And now I walk the land,

I am the blasphemous pupil, the denied gift.

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Hidden away in white fear.

Protected by forgotten pillagers.

A memory of crystal guides me.

I step away from a former life,

Burning with hate and fury.

I am lead to cleansing godhood.

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