Kestrel she/her Posted July 15, 2015 Posted July 15, 2015 I think it might be the feet but idk I'll see about making them bigger; I was told last night I should but it was nearly midnight so I decided to call it quits until today.
Delightful Posted July 15, 2015 Posted July 15, 2015 I mean, I'm also only one opinion and it's your artwork, so, do whatever you think is right.
Mailliw73 he/him Posted July 15, 2015 Posted July 15, 2015 they look.....kind of thin and wimpy to me? If I look at it properly I can't quite pin down what's not right (is it the legs, or just the feet shape?), but something at a glance looks off. Also, I think the lips are maybe a touch too wide. For me, it's the ankles that don't seem to be bending quite right.
TwiLyghtSansSparkles she/her Posted July 15, 2015 Posted July 15, 2015 I think the biggest one I noticed was the way her left eye and eyebrow appear to be drawn over her hair, rather than the hair covering them. It's a good drawing, but that one stood out to me.
Delightful Posted July 15, 2015 Posted July 15, 2015 For me, it's the ankles that don't seem to be bending quite right.Hmm yeah it might be the ankles. Also, where is her weight balanced? I think it's the angles also, obviously she's not on her feet but are they hanging free or is there some weight on them or what?
Kestrel she/her Posted July 15, 2015 Posted July 15, 2015 For me, it's the ankles that don't seem to be bending quite right. I'll see what I can do about that. Feet are ew. I think the biggest one I noticed was the way her left eye and eyebrow appear to be drawn over her hair, rather than the hair covering them. It's a good drawing, but that one stood out to me. sketching purposes. I'll draw the skin+eyes first when painting then the hair goes last. I was aware of this and it won't be in the final. Hmm yeah it might be the ankles. Also, where is her weight balanced? I think it's the angles also, obviously she's not on her feet but are they hanging free or is there some weight on them or what? Not quite sure what you mean here. She's sitting, her legs kinda dangling over the side of one of the spires. My composition sketch is somewhere on this thread.
TwiLyghtSansSparkles she/her Posted July 15, 2015 Posted July 15, 2015 (edited) Ah. I'm not an artist, so I'm not familiar with the artistic process. I read a Cracked article today sharing the recent theory that primordial plants in Earth's distant past used retinal instead of chlorophyll to create energy. Since this substance is purple instead of green, these people theorize that prehistoric Earth appeared purple from space. From now on, I refuse to call Earth from this particular period anything other than Fabuland, because purple plants are awesome. Edited July 15, 2015 by TwiLyghtSansSparkles 4
Delightful Posted July 15, 2015 Posted July 15, 2015 I'll see what I can do about that. Feet are ew. sketching purposes. I'll draw the skin+eyes first when painting then the hair goes last. I was aware of this and it won't be in the final. Not quite sure what you mean here. She's sitting, her legs kinda dangling over the side of one of the spires. My composition sketch is somewhere on this thread.Um I'll try explain. So if her feet were fully dangling, wouldn't her knees be on the edge where her butt is? Otherwise her thighs are holding up the weight of her legs and that'll be uncomfortable after a while. Or is one leg supposed to be fully dangling and the other she has her foot on the ground ?
Kestrel she/her Posted July 15, 2015 Posted July 15, 2015 I just watched a ton of Parks and Rec instead of doing everything I should have been doing this afternoon like COMMISSIONS REQUESTS OR PLAYING MY FLUTE OR SPEECH REVISION and I hear my parents coming home On a side note, this show provides the best reaction images. Ever. 2
+Slowswift Posted July 15, 2015 Posted July 15, 2015 I suppose asking if I should start watching would be like me asking Hermione if I should read a book. On another note, I wonder how a concert with Soothers/Rioters planted in the audience would be like...
Kestrel she/her Posted July 15, 2015 Posted July 15, 2015 Yeah pretty much Its pretty good from the start but doesn't get really good until Ben and Chris come in (about end season 2 start season 3 I think?) I mean this show is fantastic, even though it isn't really epic fantasy or anything. - focuses on real world issues such as sexism in the working/political world. They did an episode on the gender differences in the sanitation world in order to convince the male members of the city council to hire more women. - really wonderful characters and great relationships. - GREAT lessons about life shockingly (spend time for yourself, don't give up no matter how life comes at you) - straight up the funniest show I've ever seen (reminder that that gif was about grocery shopping) - bEN WY aT T this show is amazing and i love it and why they stopped it is beyond me. 1
Kestrel she/her Posted July 15, 2015 Posted July 15, 2015 refined the sketch and made the feet+hands bigger? also fixed up the face. idk 4
Kobold King he/him Posted July 16, 2015 Posted July 16, 2015 Ah. I'm not an artist, so I'm not familiar with the artistic process. I read a Cracked article today sharing the recent theory that primordial plants in Earth's distant past used retinal instead of chlorophyll to create energy. Since this substance is purple instead of green, these people theorize that prehistoric Earth appeared purple from space. From now on, I refuse to call Earth from this particular period anything other than Fabuland, because purple plants are awesome. Alternate plant colors are fascinating. Do you have a link to this article? There are still purple plants on Earth--I've grown a few myself--but I've never heard of them being dominant at any point in Earth's history.
TwiLyghtSansSparkles she/her Posted July 16, 2015 Posted July 16, 2015 Alternate plant colors are fascinating. Do you have a link to this article? There are still purple plants on Earth--I've grown a few myself--but I've never heard of them being dominant at any point in Earth's history. Here you go. It's number 4 on the list, though the other points are equally fascinating. 1
Quiver he/him Posted July 16, 2015 Posted July 16, 2015 (edited) So... I'm watching the old, Lynda Carter Wonder Woman series. The episode I just saw, an alien from a hyper-advanced civilisation offered to take Wonder Woman and show her the universe, and all the strange planets. What in saying is, Wonder Woman could have been the Best Doctor Who Companion. Edited July 16, 2015 by Quiver 5
Kestrel she/her Posted July 17, 2015 Posted July 17, 2015 Just bought Legion and Skin Deep. I have no more money, but it was worth it. 3
Orlion Blight he/him Posted July 17, 2015 Posted July 17, 2015 Just bought Legion and Skin Deep. I have no more money, but it was worth it. Be doing that soon, but not immediately. This week I bought a bunch of Magnus Robot Fighter comics.
Kestrel she/her Posted July 17, 2015 Posted July 17, 2015 I was a bit hesitant because I wanted to save my money for a laptop but it wasn't too much out of my spending money. I wanted it, anyway, just in case they ran out.
Quiver he/him Posted July 17, 2015 Posted July 17, 2015 (edited) Me: I saw the Suicide Squad trailer, and... it was alright. Until the Joker appeared Brother: But that's you, you went in wanting to hate it, because you said the Joker was so stupid looking. You hate everything. Is... is this an image I have, guys? I mean... I don't try to hate stuff, I try to balanced and there was stuff I liked in the Suicide Squad trailer (like Viola Davis)... (Heck, the reason I don't GUSH about how awesome (and20% cooler) thigns are to him is because I thought it was annoying. Should I be doing that more?) Edited July 17, 2015 by Quiver 2
Kaymyth she/her Posted July 17, 2015 Posted July 17, 2015 Is... is this an image I have, guys? I mean... I don't try to hate stuff, I try to balanced and there was stuff I liked in the Suicide Squad trailer (like Viola Davis)... (Heck, the reason I don't GUSH about how awesome (and20% cooler) thigns are to him is because I thought it was annoying. Should I be doing that more?) It sounds more to me like your brother is 12. 3
Edgedancer he/him Posted July 17, 2015 Posted July 17, 2015 Is... is this an image I have, guys? I mean... I don't try to hate stuff, I try to balanced and there was stuff I liked in the Suicide Squad trailer (like Viola Davis)... (Heck, the reason I don't GUSH about how awesome (and20% cooler) thigns are to him is because I thought it was annoying. Should I be doing that more?) Don't worry, you are completely justified in not liking that Joker. 2
Orlion Blight he/him Posted July 17, 2015 Posted July 17, 2015 If all one can say against you is "You just wanted to hate it!" you've won and they have lost. If something is genuinely good and interesting to you, it does not matter how much you want to hate it, your hate will eventually be over come. I'm of course specifically talking about Bruno Mars' Uptown Funk. I want to hate that song sooooo much, but it keeps on weakening my resolve... if it wasn't for my friends overplaying/oversinging it, the hate would have all ready been killed. 1
Kestrel she/her Posted July 17, 2015 Posted July 17, 2015 I feel so sick now My dad decided to set up a monitored wifi thing for my brother and i So I dont know what "monitored" means like can he just see the time or can he actually see the sites This really doesnt help my anxiety bc if he can see sites then my internet friend relationships are basically done for except through phone service And that means he'll find out about this place, my website, the warriors forums (that i still go on despite having only one rp there still) and wolfquest and i dont know how he'll react The only thing i can do on wifi now is watch netflix without him growing suspicious please someone end me
TwiLyghtSansSparkles she/her Posted July 17, 2015 Posted July 17, 2015 I feel so sick now My dad decided to set up a monitored wifi thing for my brother and i So I dont know what "monitored" means like can he just see the time or can he actually see the sites This really doesnt help my anxiety bc if he can see sites then my internet friend relationships are basically done for except through phone service And that means he'll find out about this place, my website, the warriors forums (that i still go on despite having only one rp there still) and wolfquest and i dont know how he'll react The only thing i can do on wifi now is watch netflix without him growing suspicious please someone end me Do you know what kind of monitoring system it is? It could be what you described, or it could just be a system that monitors how much time each person spends online. (Either way it's creepy as all get-out and I'm sorry you have to deal with it. )
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