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The Purelaker's magic fish. Notice the question mark.

Updated a little... Still problems

ted gemstone piano.

-Binding Surgebinding (Nahel Bond, Honorblades) >Basic Lashing >Reverse Lashing >Full Lashing >Lightweaving >Soulcasting >Plant Growth >ReGrowth >Slicking >Ranged Soulcasting? Voidbringing >Midnight Essence >Thunderclast >Some Kind of Future Sight? Stormriding? Stormlight Retention >Physical Augmentation >Skill Augmentation >Rapid Healing >Replaces Breath --Boosting Stormlight Retention >KR Oaths -Fabrial Sciences >Ancient Fabrials >Modern Fabrials >Shardblade >Shardplate Perimortem Vocalisations (or Death Rattles ) Animal-spren symbiosis >Greatshells >Larkins >Purelake Magic Fish >Skyeels >Ryshadium? Listener Forms >Nullform >Dullform >Warform >Mateform >Work form >Nimbleform >Stormform >Old Magic Lift's Digestive Arcanosynthesis Mr. T's Varying Mental Acuity Dalinar's Memory Block >Individual/Uncommon/Racial Rock's Sprensight Shallan's Memories Aimian Shapeshifting Did I miss any? Would you like to contest any? Will update and edit as thread evolves

Haha! They're magical! (But possibly not surge binding exactly!)

Stress capitalised syllables The PIANOman LAUGHED, his FINGERS a-FLUTTER WHACKING dark STAINED ivorIES. The PIANOman DANCED, glove-TIPS white and CLEAN BASHING the BLOODY red KEYS. Those SPIDERy HANDS reached ABOUT here and THERE They touched EIGHTY-eight NOTES gleefulLY. OH, the PIANOman LAUGHED the dead LAUGH of the MAD 'Neath shining GLOVES his FINGERS so BLOODY.

jangling bloody ivories

The Pianoman laughed

Just TAP une verre de VIN. Drink enough, and the MIST will SOOTHE your aching (metal)mind.

Dustbringers, because HULK SMASH! Well, make rocks explode, but whatever.

than Awakened paint

Ham-fisted? You just Recreanced Blunt puns.

then grass green

Aha! So that's where all those Grandmas came from!

It's been capped for her entire viewpoint through WoK as well...

and green ham

Good point. Possibly Brandon just being trollish with all the strange quirks of her Memories to get us to think exactly this.

Insane omnicidal spider... I like it

Shouldn't it be "Les Archives de Lumière de Tempête"? ... I guess it's a bit wordy, isn't it...

Peter comes here sometimes, but if you want to make sure Brandon and Co. sees this, I recommend the Contact Us link on his website

It's the absolute best if average Joe enjoys reading, or at least buying, your writing. But that's another beast altogether.

Depends what kind of scope the story should have. Is this going to be an epic? Dark? Will there be romantic elements? How about the ending, and how will you foreshadow?

It might just be that Voidbringing focuses on temporal aspects of the Surges, so, quite literally, "seeing the future is of the Voidbringers.'

Can I suggest that you don't use words like "interpose" and "maladroit" in the middle of a fight scene? Never use a ten-dollar word where a one-dollar word will do, as the saying goes. Another thing - cut down on the exposition, even if it only means chopping off half a sentence. And this, I'm sorry,but this is cliché: Perfecters are in stories from the Grand Battle or minstrels tails.” He left the not blacksmiths apprentices from some village no one’s ever heard of unsaid. I love the story, don't get me wrong, but it just needs a little polish.

Word of Issac!