Edema Rue
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Dilsha suddenly disappeared. Poof. Gone... In the world of spirits, she cursed. "What was that for?" You have things to learn, Princess...I'm only keeping you safe...
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Rue snorted and moved to the dance floor. "It's...strange. There's nothing like this on my world."
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*teeeeeeeny tiny poke*
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That was definitely easier to follow! I agree that it's usually better to show rather than tell, and if you write the entire story as a log then that might be more of a problem, but maybe if you wrote some scenes more in third person (or first person, but as things are happening) and then scattered these logs through it? As it is, though, it's still a little bit of an exposition dump, but it's much easier to understand and funner to read!
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So...some news from Eddie Land.
January is quite a month for me. I'm in two performances. On weekdays, I have 3 hour rehearsals every night for the Crucible, as well as early morning rehearsals for an orchestra that's performing with our school's choir beginning of February. On Saturdays, I have rehearsals from 10-5. I'm also supposed to practice lines, choreography, songs, and debate at home. I'm also trying to balance homework for debate, math, chemistry, and other things between those, and of course working out daily, and going to school...and I'm in my young woman's presidency...oh, and I'm getting started playing dnd (which, by the way, is awesome).
Anyway, it's...quite a month. I might spontaneously combust halfway through. We'll see.
But...ah...because of that, my activity is going to be almost non-existent this month (if you see me spending a lot of time here, I probably need either hugs or to be yelled at or both). I'll still post writing and check SU's when I can, but I'm trying not to RP or really...well...do a lot of things.
Mostly, I just got incredibly burnt out last semester, and the week after Christmas was...well. Darkest place I've been for a really, really long time. I have hope for this semester and the rest of life (which is great, a couple weeks ago I definitely did not) but...yeah. Just a heads up.
Sorry bout that guys, if you need me mention or PM me and I'll probably respond eventually
(oh, and I'll be more active again towards the end of January, beginning of February, when our next games start (no you don't get to know what they are) and I'm really excited!!)
Love you guys, keep breathing and living. There is so much good in this world, even when you have to milk every second for all its worth.
Eddie
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"All right," Rue said, too distracted to even sound angry about it. "Though I should warn you, I haven't danced since before I got to the clinic..."
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*sighs loudly* @Ravenclawjedi42, it was your fault this time.
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"Surrounded by nobles? I doubt it..." Rue stood up. "Woah, woah, easy there. I feel like I missed a few things..." Tal raised an eyebrow. "Just because people have lied means they deserve to die? How does that makes sense?"
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Okay, I don't know what the light this is, or where it came from, but I kinda love it. (yes I understand that it's very weird, confusing, and not particularly exciting. I don't know why I love it, I just do.) Guardian: Also, I drew this on my hand during church today when I was about halfway through writing it
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The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter Day Saints corner
Edema Rue replied to Kelsier'sGodComplex's topic in General Discussion
Guys it's a new year! My youngest brother is a deacon now, which really messes with my brain but it's exciting. ...also, there are 4 wards in my building, so I now have church at 1:30. Anyone else have really late (or early) times? -
I'm...Utah county, ish. We only got like 5 inches, but it's still freezing which is wonderful (for me, sorry Phantom if it makes it hard for you to paint)
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As far as they could see, though, there was only the one inquisitor. Rue stood up. "Let's mingle, then. You'll probably need to do most of the talking."
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How do you imagine your fellow Sharders?
Edema Rue replied to S. Stormy's topic in General Discussion
Yes but he isn't as hot, and Timothee makes me think about Paul, and Paul makes me very very happy -
Rue nodded. "That would be wise..." She stood up, scanning the crowd, but there was still no sign of him...
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How do you imagine your fellow Sharders?
Edema Rue replied to S. Stormy's topic in General Discussion
Y'know what's funny? I've met you, but I still see you as a posh platypus in my head. *giggles* Timothee Chalamet... *giggles again* -
"The receiving end...you mean, you've done that to people?" Rue actually snickered. "Mingling, perhaps, or finding Lord Elariel...who seems to have vanished."
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Anything and Everything Role Play
Edema Rue replied to The Honorable Musician's topic in Roleplaying
Xi started floating around his head, forming arms and trying to bat at his hair. She went right through him. -
Rue raised an eyebrow, snorting softly. "Never been around nobility, have you?"
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@The Aspiring Archivist @Invisible
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Rue nodded, trying to look...pleasant. The woman giggled. "If you bore of your companion...or require more entertainment during your stay here...just ask for Lady Cosan Urbain, my Lord." She blew him a kiss, then floated back into the crowd. "Most everyone has," Tal said easily. "I do hope you won't hold it against me..."
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How do you imagine your fellow Sharders?
Edema Rue replied to S. Stormy's topic in General Discussion
I genuinely imagine you as the witch that was your pfp a while ago... -
CINNY CINNY CINCINCINCINCINCINCINCINCINCINNNNNNN (also @Morningtide and @Elf and ANYONE who's listened to The Magnus Archives)
THE MAGNUS PROTOCOL APPROACHES
HAVE YOU SEEN THIS YET
SpoilerAHAHAHAHAHHAAHHAAAAAA IM DYINGGGGGGG IM SO EXCITEDDDDD
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...you're in Utah, right? It's supposed to snow tomorrow (at least where I'm at) But I'm excited to see!!
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Oo...I think it's interesting, but I agree it is a lot right at once. If that's happening towards the middle of your book, once people already understand the magic, then it probably works. If not, I would definitely do a little more exposition (course, I'm not an expert, so take my advice with a grain of salt).
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Heehee thank you so much!! That's...like...the best compliment to be given ...usually I'm not this dark, though!
