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Actually Technoblade (the Youtuber) said that first.

I meant the suggestion for how it sounds, how it flows. And the "good, bad, or horrid?" was for the suggestion.

Suggestion: What if it said "... For now, we hope for an after." ? Good, bad, or horrid?

Okay. This makes sense now. Thanks! Didn't she take off her glove before he asked that tho? You know what I'll go check. Edit: Nope! I'm wrong. Also I obviously missed stuff the first time I read it and should probably go reread the bits I'm going to poke at before I poke at them. I apologize for any inconvenience, anger, or confusion I caused with this.

Why would she take off her safehand glove in the stable (instead of a room where people couldn't just walk in) after the whole thing about her not feeling comfortable without a safehand earlier in the story? Were they in one of the stalls? Why would she act that way before they were married, after the whole thing with her history, her slave brand, what it meant, and how people reacted to it? I think it feels ... odd... for her to do that. Odd enough for it to bug me a bit, not odd enough for me to hate the story.

so why have I seen you still in the youngin thread?

cane, actually

"Is it a being of Order?" Tvora asks.

Tvora faces Echo Two, stepping back into a ready stance, weapon up in a warding position. "What do you do?"

Sabrina glanced up from the paperwork as her father walked into the house, then resumed working. Her father interrupted shortly afterwards. "The Sheriff's planning on hunting down all the vampires he can get at." Bri paused. "Not unexpected, with what happened. And yes, I'm helping. I'll tell him if he asks, but I'm pretty sure he already knows."

Ait. Thanks.

I don't think so. Maybe? Never have I ever cut a watermelon.

@|TJ| You're first in line for the QF. Do you want it?

Definitely not Moash. (I mean, come on, guys! He's got six books for the redemption arc he's probably going to have. Maybe.) How often do you yell at birds?

YOU'RE ALL OLD! at least compared to us small children

823463498451908!!!

LETS GOOOOO

YOU ALL HAVE AN AWKWARD NUMBER OF BONES

Clean laundry. The smell of rain.

Well that's all right then. I didn't murder them. I only killed them.

Yello I like dreams. I like hearing them, reading them, having them, writing them down so I'll remember them better, I like tweaking them sometimes or trying to build onto them. I also know that I'm not the only one who likes dreams. If you want to share a dream, here's a place. If you want to read someone else's, here's a place.

I refuse to confirm or deny if I killed dogs. I can be reeely sneeeeky.

I learned how to invade from you invading our place.

@little wilson@Elbereth@Devotary of Spontaneity@Elandera@Araris Valerian https://docs.google.com/document/d/1IJDFsh_Dz0EF2lSf28D0BJE5qckBv6F3-67ZAQVvxtc/edit?usp=sharing Thanks Devo!