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  1. Ohhh... this is a good one. The unmade's ability definitely has that connection to person theme, but it doesn't appear to affect the spiritweb for all of them. I believe it is implied that a nahel bond alters your spiritweb. So does any bond. If the Black fisher is related to taking away pain then what did he do to aimia?
  2. [Rirrom, the reweaver of reality. Third eye Veva The 73rd transformation. Now thats a good one. ø]
  3. Okay i couldnt resist. I am making this Absorption rpg post before i go to sleep. 

    I might PM some people and ask for any epic ideas from them. I know you have good ideas. 

     

    It was not long before Absorption would be known as a god. 

    The public had followed the same twisted ideas of Insolence. That made it particularily hard to gain control of the city for Aerie. The look on Aerie's face was so utterly annoyed that saying a single word could probably break him.

    It hurt Recapture. He knew how long Aerie had spent on those secret plans. He had seen them, over 3 years ago. 

    Isolence had already recruited a mentalist-fear based high epic who decided that now would be the time to invade. And by recruited Recapture meant allied with. Insolence believed that sacrifices had to be made. 

    So between him and Aerie, he decided to go and subdue Cataclysm.

    It was raining vigorously. The puddles showed Recapture's hidden reflection. The city lights flared harshly, providing the only light avalible in sight. At night the city was still wide awake. 

    The streets were quieter since Absorption's rule.  Even during his rule, most people tried to avoid the streets, making them one of the quietest places. Now, the streets were quieter than silent.

    It was a result of both fear and anticipation. 

    California had been forever climate changed by an epic to end the drought 2 years ago caused by a water epic. When the water epic was killed by Absorption, she had sucked up all the water for 50 miles. 

    the city lasted 4 days withoit water before riots broke out. Then, Absorption was forced to make a move.

    Recapture reached the meeting place of Insolence's gang. 

    He could now return here at any time. 

    With a click, Recapture returned back to the dead god palace, dry, as he was when he was last at the palace.

    The resistance was subdued. 

    And the best part? 

    Recapture didn't even need to be there. 

    He was already there.

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    This one was a shorter one. PM me if you have any epic or character ideas, and I can try and intertwine them with the story. 

     Thanks!

    -Aeoliae

  4. [I have ideas for a more modern setting character. Mainly the 72 transformations and the third eye that shoots lasers. okay. maybe only one idea. Still need a name.]
  5. Alrighty people who don't read this - here is my nice little mini-spiral of things today.

    1. Absorption RPG thingy has a new chapter! I haveto convince myself not to write more of it. It is my life long goal to finally write a story like this. I don't think anyone follows it but that doesn't matter.

    2. I got in an arguement with a friend of a friend and got kicked off that discord server. Gah.

    3. I played even more Colorful Stage (The videogame) and it is soooo fun. Even if I get a C rank on every song I played, it still is fun. 

    4. I coded hangman. It didn't work. I hate programming. :P

    5. I am nearing 500 posts! I'll post an ultimate 500 post special fo rmy 500th post that will consist of everything I did on the shard and why.

    6. I reported 2 spambots and got PM'd by a mod. Oops... maybe don't spam report all spam threads...

     

  6. [So the 72 transformations and a third eye that shoots lasers is a no? Although I think you should post your character sheet. Normal is subjective after all Also, someones gotta make the plot. So I decided to sacrifice myself in the name of progression. Also, what needs to be normal-er? that might help tweek the character a bit. ty! ]
  7. I'm too busy reporting spambots to make life easier for the mods. I suck at fine motor skills, so bracelets aren't really a thing for me. TPBM can recite one of the rules of the shard.
  8. [These are my quote brackets. deal with it. Okay. I have two characters planned: Rirrom and the Dark patron. The dark one is more of a filler to Rirrom's backstory. I'll start with Rirrom: Name: Rirrom Morfemoc Age: -21 (self identify), 21 [actual] Gender identity and orientation: Non-binary [so no gender ig] PCP (powers): The powers to reverse anything. Life, death [okay maybe not], memories, magic, decay, etc... At the cost of his own health (for big things, like life and death), Sanity (for the medium things), or Emotions/memories (all of them all emotions.). Occupation: Priest of a self proclaimed religion. Notable battles: The massacre of the Dale. He killed over 500 people there because they had dark thoughts before getting repressed. Education: Lost all known education to his own powers Tools etc: A cloak that protects him from magic Beliefs: The dark patron is a being of unfathomable power. Just by thinking about It, you serve the dark one. Thinking dark thoughts causes the prison of the dark patron to weaken. The prison of the dark patron is the fabric of reality itself. If it breaks, then everyone is dead. Of course, none of this is real. its all in the head. Other: Actually a nice person when his religious side is unprovoked. Recently escaped the magical prison he was in. okay so that was extensive. Anything wrong with my character @Channelknight Fadran? is he good? ]
  9. I agree. The worldbuilding is never too much, but always leaves the reader satisfied with what they learned. I love Brandon's books for that reason.
  10. What's your opinion on the 8th color? Golden blue?
  11. "So that's... 37 sticks. That's still 20 more than what I can carry, however."
  12. @Lightweaver2 you can make your own character materialize out of thin air. You don't even need a entire Character Sheet, you just need a name. "Oh, Okay... Uh... How many sticks did that weigh again?"
  13. "Uh, that's... Gonna be challenging to lift. Do you have a way of... Reducing girth?"
  14. "How many sticks do you weigh, silly. I don't do hamburgers."
  15. "We have to jump. Maybe fly. But that will be easier for us who have wings," River motioned at their wings, "Rather than those who don't. Maybe I can carry you. How much do you weigh?"
  16. In response, a second chasm, larger than the first one tenfold, appears behind them. "Don't worry, you'll be okay."
  17. River leads them to the north. They soon find an Uncrossable Chasm.
  18. I lost 5% on a course after getting last place in a pizza competition because one of the judges didn't like pineapple on pizza. So now I don't either.
  19. Welcome! I think the best part about Brandon Sanderson is that if you look carefully enough, you can realize just about how much of everything was planned from the start.
  20. Absorption Chapter 2! So soon.

    This one's a long one.

    It was a very quiet room for a god slaying menace to be hiding in.

    Aerie was almost surprised to see Voidcaller as an old man, maybe in his 60’s or so. He was the only man in the room.

    Voidcaller had the power to go invisible. Right.

    Aerie reached out with tendrils of air, trying to feel everything in the room.

    Nothing, no one.

    He checked behind him. The door was still as he had left it.

    Aerie looked back to the old man squatting in the corner.

    Wait.

    Where was that old man?

    Aerie felt something disturb the air. He created a bubble of air around it and popped it. That would kill anything within it.

    Then his danger sense went off, and Aerie was almost forced – it was more like a guiding sense – to fly upwards, crushing the roof with a burst of air pressure.

    The area blew up with a purple explosion.

    A man lay in the crater. Alive.

    He was alive. The air was moving in and out of his lungs. He wanted Aerie to believe he was dead.

    Aerie walked right up to the coward. Most epics had a cool down on their powers, and couldn’t use them right after.

    And he grabbed the Voidcaller – a 62 year old man with a sense of age on his face – by the neck, and used air pressure to rip open his chest.

    It was painful for both of them. Aerie always hated blood and gore, but he had to make a public impression.

    Aerie smiled as he brushed off the pieces of the Voidcaller’s chest cavity.

    It felt good to kill. Sparks. It felt good.

    - - - -

    It wasn’t long before Recapture asked if the Voidcaller was truly dead.

    Which he was.

    Aerie was certain of it. He had scattered the pieces far enough that a healing epic couldn’t save him, and he heard no report of resurrecting old people roaming the streets.

    Recapture was a coward. A true coward. One that hid behind the greater epics. Epics like himself.

    Insolence was a blockade. Strength and Invincibility were Insolence’s powers. What either of those powers had to do with insolation was beyond Aerie’s imagination. But he was going to get in Aerie’s way. Insolence didn’t know any of Aerie’s plans, so he was not a high priority target.

    Aerie’s low target enemy was adamant about Absorption being alive. He believed that Absorption is faking is death, and when he returns, those loyal to him will prosper.

    That was, undoubtedly, false.

    “We should be recruiting all the epics. Telling them to stay in line or else –“ Insolence motioned a cutthroat with his fingers, “Absorption will deal with them.”

    Recapture was impartial to everything. Whether that scared Aerie or not was concerning, but that was not a problem.

    The three of them: Aerie, Recapture, and Insolence were the tools of Absorption’s rule. They didn’t really get a choice about working for him. The way it would work was that you would receive a letter.

    The letter that thousands of epics received. Only around half of them lived. You could hide, but you couldn’t run. Absorption could kill you from any distance.

    The letter had a message from Absorption. Aerie’s letter had the message: I do not care where you are. You must come to Alensdale in five days, or I will kill you. And you cannot hide.

    It still chilled Aerie. The words were so crude. Absorption didn’t need to care who you were. He won either way. He didn’t need to bother with persuasive language. He was in control.

    “Well, then. I’ll make sure that people fall into line then.” Aerie responded.

    He would make them all fall into line.

    All of them. Just like how Absorption did it.

    Everyone was following the rules.

    And the rules would be made by Aerie.

    He had waited a long time for this moment.

    And he would savor it.

     

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    And... That's It! Maybe I'll finish another chapter today. Just thought I would post this bonus one here.

     

  21. Uh, I can't quote the exact line, but glys occasionally speaks from "Within him" just like how timbre does.
  22. I think spren can voidbind, not people makes sense. Voidspren use people, whereas Radiants use their spren. Renarin is implied to have a Gemheart The map for voidbinding is colored like Shadesmar, and the map for Surgebinding is colored like the roshar map. Glys has implied he can see the future farther than renarin. Those all make sense as to spren can voidbind, not people.
  23. "Yeah. Uh. Ifver or what his name was can guide you north to the layer of Whismald, the ice melter."
  24. I do think that one of the big reveals will be that spren can voidbind, not people. I saw it posted by someone, and I have to say, it makes sense.
  25. Do you think unmade are related to the voidbinding ? That's my leading theory, but I want another opinion.
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