TheGirlWhoLookedUp

Another atla meme Adolin and the gang.

sorry I couldn't comment earlier, but wow. I'm pretty intrigued. I've only read the prologue so far (I don't have much time to read it all now) but it was very gripping. I'm not much of a critic, but I have a few thoughts. Also people, have probably already said this, so sorry if I repeat a few things. You added a lot of descriptions to your story. they were good descriptions, but they were mostly using sight and sound. If you wanted to add variety, you could replace some with descriptions of the smells, the textures and the temperatures. Make it feel like you're there, not just watching it. the only other thing I can think of was it was a bit drawn out. I think shortening it a small bit will add to the intrigue and mystery. I really liked it though, and again I'm not very good at giving solid advice. I hope you continue to work on it.

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Segregation

I want Moash to get some sort of mission to kill Kaladin with his Honorblade and new powers but when he try’s to, all of Bridge Four becomes radiant and backs Kaladin up. Moash is so stunned he just silently leaves. Also, Moash’s Bridge Four tattoo disappears like Kaladin’s because it’s no longer part of him.

Secret New word: Blue The opposite word being orange.

Welcome to the Shard! What’s your favorite Sanderson book that you’ve read?

Hiding

YKYASFW you try to use marbles as currency.

So, I’m not sure if this counts as a meme, but it’s the SA characters singing Bohemian Rhapsody. It’s spoiled for length.

Graceless

Thanks. Also, though I didn’t intentionally put him in there, I found Rlain’s name as well.

Decomposing

Camping

I made a cosmere word search. I probably missed a few important names, but it has names from Stormlight Archives, Mistborn, Elantris, and Warbreaker. It was a lot bigger, but I cut it down.

The dolphin mines sat quietly on the edge, sipping their tea an watched the battle unfold.

Granted, you just got the most wonderful wish ever, but you don’t know what it is. I wish for a t-shirt.

Suddenly, bursting through the door came...

Drifting

And eating chouta. (That parts is essential.)

Sage

Educated

Whether they wanted it or not.